Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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anonee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Happy and want more👍🏼🤗

Superb😊

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kirti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

It was awesum. My hand up for nxt part. Two dialogues dat i lykd to b in serial are-1.When did I come?" he looked at the watch. "Hereabout two minutes ago.. 22 minutes ago at home and 28 years ago into this world." 2. Once you are RK's you remain RK's.

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Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

awww so cute and romentic and specially RK's dialouge were awesome

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

and once you are RK's you remain RK's."

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u had me here Binduu☺️

i didnt read anything else in the updatee☺️

P.S i am alwayz here for hindi translations...lol..i think they make a better impact!

i still rem ur virgin attempt to write the hindi dialogue..the "aasoun" wala...u had me in fits😆

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Titli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Hat's off to you..excellent work! 👏Plz pm me whenever u'll update...plzzz

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maanluvsgeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Want a next part ...

Awesome update😳

Edited by maanluvsgeet - 12 years ago

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

loved it loved how he told bitu ji to feed dips smart guy bitu he let rk know she was fasting with out break his promise awesome update loved how he was waiting for her to open her eyes awesome please continue

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

I wanted to wait until the eve to read.. But 😳..

I loved this line: and once you are RK's you remain RK's." are you planning to spend the rest of your life thirsting for me?".. Those two lines were awesome... 😎

RK asking Bittuji to break Dipali's fast was hilarious and so was Bittuji's " "ME Chief!" 😆

Btw, Whats Karva? Is that a sweet?

PS.. My hands have been raised from last week.. Its starting to ache now... Waiting for the kissey.. 😳