Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: aashshhs
Lovely os...continue soon :) :) :)

thanks dear😊
hope u will enjoy part 2

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: devsum
cliffhanger... hope u continue this.

😉
hope you will be happy with part 2

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Loved It...

Bittujiii the cupid...I loved every part of it and the last line from VD was superb...the blesssing...

Continue more...My hands tooo raised...infact both the hands...

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Archana

@archanadamania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Very nice,

pls continue,

thanks for pm

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: dumas
you need to continue this that was awesome well written you could feel her pain of not being his wife in full the missing of the sindoor and her bangles beautifully

thanks dear 😊
their relation have changed a lot since the marriage... now with she insecurities springing in she will wish for his support.. and the need to belong

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ironwitch

@ironwitch

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

I have said it before and I will say it again, a beautiful story. And you are one of the most talented writers I have come across in the world of fanfiction, believe me.( And I don't say this often, I generally praise stories, not authors-so this is a huge thing trust me😉)

I would love for you to continue this , but even more write it as a completely different story because this story seems to have got its fitting end and now requires only an epilogue( that's a MUST ) to round things off- But I want more stories!😳

Edited by ranitha - 12 years ago