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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Awesome chapter!👏👏
I'm so glad Madhu found out the truth and that evil witch Dipz😡 got what was coming to her
Plz update fast and thank you very much for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Superb superb superb.plz do pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
that was sweet
nice part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
The last scene really had me smiling, it was so adorable...can't wait for part 4 now. lovely post. keep up the fantastic work :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luvly update.Last part was awesome.Liked Radha ji nd Bittu ji's convo.Thanks fr the PM.W8ing fr next eagerly.Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Awesome
Thanks for PM
Eagerly waiting for another part(RK Dialogues)
Continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Nice Waiting for Madhu s reaction/...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4:-DECISIONS

Madhu saw RK's image in the mirror.

She stood like that looking at him.

RK came forward and leaned to the dressing table,still folding hands and gazing at Madhu.

Madhu turned to face him.She is not looking at him.

RK said,"What,Biwi?I till now thought that you ,Madhubala Shamsher Mallik are very different,confronting and dare .But today I can see a girly Madhubala.I didn't know that you too ,like other girls,have the habit of spending hours in front of the mirror.Or are you taking part in any beauty competition without my knowledge?Do I recommend you?"in his original mocking manner.

She looked at him but did not respond.

RK unfolded his hands and is about to go thinking that Madhu did not come back to normal state.

Then Madhu stopped him by calling his name,"RK"

He turned back and came a step forward towards her and said,"Did you call me?WOW Biwi,I am glad that you can talk again.Since morning I was thinking that you were facing some problem with your vocal cord.So it is confirmed that you did not go mute.That's great."

Madhu hesitated to speak and then said,"RK ,I -um- I ..."

RK raised his eyebrows gesturing,"What?"

She thought-how can she say that 'I was like that because I did not like you kissing an other woman'?

So she said,'I was not feeling well,so..".

She is interrupted by RK.He said,"I'll call a doctor"and saying so he picked up his phone.

Madhu said,"No,there is no need to do that.I'm alright now."


In between their conversation,the word,"Chief" is heard to them.

They both looked at Bittu ji,who has entered the room just now.

He said,"Chief,where did you go,I was worried about you.I made a call to you and you did not pick it up."

"Yes,Bittu ji,I noticed your call.Then I was on my way home.So, I did not respond.What is the matter?"

"Chief ,the director wants to meet you.He wants to discuss the amendments that you want to make in the story line."

"No,I cannot meet him now.Madhu's not well."

"RK,I'm fine.Don't worry about me."

RK took a long pause and then said,"OK,take care."

He left out the room along with Bittu.


Madhu stared at the door.


She got startled on the ringing of the phone.

She picked the call and said the following words without even giving a pause,"Maa,How are you?How is Mallik?Is everything alright?"

The voice from the other side said,"Yes,Madhu.Here we all are fine."

I just wanted to know whether you are alright or not?What happened?I was calling since some time back and you did not pick up the call."


Madhu got surprised,and said,"Yes,Maa I am fine.My mobile was left in the room and I was not in the room.Why are you asking?"


Padmini said,"Madhu ,RK came here just now"

"W-What?But Why?"said Madhu with a shock.

"I was alone in the house and Roma,Mallik and Trishna went out.He came and asked about the rest and I told that they are not in the house.He asked whether all are fine or not.I said yes and I asked him why.But he did not give the answer and left from here very quickly.He seemed to be worried of something.Is everything alright?"

"Yes,maa,everything is fine.Do't worry about me."
Madhu hung up the call and sat on the bed

Then some one knocked the door.

Madhu,who still not recovered from the surprise,looked at the door.

The maid came and said that the pooja is about to start and all are waiting for her.Madhu told her that she is coming and stood up from the bed and went down to the hall.
Radha told her to sit down along with others .She sat down.The pooja is started.

But Madhu's mind is not on the pooja.She is thinking something.







RK's car reached the studio.RK,Bittu entered the studio where they are welcomed by the director who ,this morning got a shock from RK.


RK sat on the chair with director sitting in front of him and explaining what the amendments he has made to the script.

RK's right elbow is taking the support of the chair's arm and his chin is on his palm.
He is not listening to the director.His mind is fixed on the thoughts.








Why did he feel strangely when he was about to kiss the heroine?
Why did he feel strangely when she saw RK kissing another girl?


Why did he rush home forgetting what today is ?
Why did she rush home forgetting the purpose why she went to studio?


Why did he forget himself and behaved like that?
Why did she forget herself and behaved like that?


Why did he care so much for Madhu?
Why did RK care for her so much?


Why did he desperately wanted Madhu to talk with him?
Why couldn't she talk even a word with RK?


Why didn't Madhu even not respond to the annoying things he has done with her?
Why did she obey all the orders RK gave her and did the things as if she was tuned to do so?


Why did he feel happy on seeing Madhu in normal state,standing in front of mirror?
Why did she feel happy to listen that RK did not kiss the heroine?


Why did he not remember what today is until Bittu has told him on their way to studio?
Why did she not remember the actual purpose of her going to the studio until she recovered her senses?



No,he should not behave like that next time with Madhu.
No,she should not behave like that next time with RK.


She is not his wife.She is just Madhubala Shamsher Mallik,whom he hates the most.
He is not her husband.He is RK ,whom she hates the most.


He should not get carried away with these kind of thoughts and he should make her a puppet in his hands.
She should not get carried away with these kind of thoughts and she should not make him rule over her.


He is RK.
She is Madhubala Shamsher Mallik.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Hmm so RK went to Madhu's family to know all is well there ... that was sweet ❤️ he cannot see his Biwi in worry 😳
Both in dilemma ! the self-questions were good 👍🏼
and them being adamant to be the way they are is right as of now
Only then their heart's desire would surface

I loved the update
moi first 😎 to comment ❤️
Edited by .Priya2000. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
My sister said that Today's FF is really boring😭.Yeah,I too feel the same🤢.But I'll try to make it interesting.Already FF for future is ready in my mind.You guys will definitely like it.

But please don't stop your support.

Thank you😊

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