Night in the studio (MB/RK ff!!!) complete - Page 4

Originally posted by: leelaa9

A lovely read.😃👏

But please, don't change the entire title of a post midway. I was looking around for the previous title. Or at least add on the new title before or after the original title? Please? It would avert the lemming routine I just went through thinking the fic was gone.😳

The fic was a beautifully crafted piece. Do you intend posting it on ArchiveOfOurOwn as well? 😛

Great characterization, and lovely dialogues, though I'm relatively sure this is a little too playfully risque to actually get on the screen on Monday. Makes for a delightful alternative though.😃

Love Bittuji's thoughts and reactions, the RK characterization, the imaginary memories woven into Madhu's internal monologuing, and the high-life snippets woven in. All in all, kudos.⭐️

Edited:

Just went through the Fanfic section to find this fic.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3197883/a-night-to-remember-madhubala-mb-rk

Could you please add the link in your first post on this thread so it'll be easier to find?

And again, thanks for a great read.😊

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

amazing..it was wow..specially the last part of it☺️

plz continue...eager to read more!

Originally posted by: todayzstar

amazing ff dear..luvd it

Originally posted by: shridevigaddam

FQ,

Awesome !!!

And the "La Perla " part, it was damn hilarious 🤣

Originally posted by: Foucaults-qalam

Glad you liked it. I worry that because English is not the first language for many people here, people will simply skim over the story. I find that very simple stories which have a very obvious plot and resolution tend to be very popular here.

I just feel that there are not enough people interested in this kind of story. I mean, this is senseless, plotless fluff, hardly literature, and it is about as fluffy as I can go-- but is it simple enough?

Originally posted by: shridevigaddam

Yes, it is simple enough. And what is commendable is you still kept RK in character. I was laughing about that as I read. Was like OMG ! FQ got into RK's skin. 😆

You know I heart him!