Night in the studio (MB/RK ff!!!) complete

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow 👏

really loved your perception to this

Madhu's condition was described aptly and RK's reactions as well

loved it

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poonu70

@poonu70

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Mindblowing start.continue soon really loved

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

loved the ff...pls continue...cant wait for the next part😛👍🏼

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SIMI

@SiMi615

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

OMG what an awesome writing style you have! I LOVE IT! I was hoping that you wouldn't stop writing because I was very intrigued with your story line! Please finish the rest so that I could read more! THANKS!

***"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point of passion that unhinges my soul." ~Julie de Lespinasse ***

Edited by SiMi81 - 12 years ago

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Ur a mindblowing writer man... what command on prose..!

Loved it... please continue..

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow fabulaus update plz pm me next time... sorry like button not working

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Sima14

@Sima14

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hello FQ

Wow amazing.. Pls continue...😃

you are an amazing writer,,,👏

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome and ur writing is so good

it feels like i am watching it instead of reading it.

keep it up

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Foucaults-qalam

@Foucaults-qalam

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

XXX

Madhu was in flight. She emerged gasping from a torrent of water that was both boiling hot and icy cold. Strange clouds scudded across her face, hot and poisonous; smothering her. Then she was on dry ground, held safe in the embrace of fresh laundry. It smelt of lavender.

When she opened her reluctant eyes, she saw an angel leaning over her, watching her with immense kindness. He was beautiful and bathed in soft, golden light. He was feeding her ambrosia and nectar, and she felt all the nameless hurts she carried within her leech away. Relief surged through her being, and she collapsed into a world of light and peace...

XXX

Edited by Foucaults-qalam - 12 years ago