Night in the studio (MB/RK ff!!!) complete - Page 6

Originally posted by: luvya4ever

OMG! love that you finished so super quickly! And thanks for sending that PM anyways 😳 I probably would have found it at some point... but am super excited that I didn't miss the rest of it since I was kinda curious to see what happens next!

Anyways, I'll stop rambling and go read the rest of it before I comment further about how awesome this is 😆

- Gunia

Look forward to your comments v much indeed! Go team grammar!

Alright! So I read the rest of it and it truly is great! I totally didn't expect the morning after! 😆 Loved how it seemed like a dark fic but then almost changed directions and ended firmly on the light side. I already told you I liked your writing style as well as your awesome grammar! I really love fics where the writers take the time to make sure that the fic reads well. So, thank you!

Originally posted by: luvya4ever

Alright! So I read the rest of it and it truly is great! I totally didn't expect the morning after! 😆 Loved how it seemed like a dark fic but then almost changed directions and ended firmly on the light side. I already told you I liked your writing style as well as your awesome grammar! I really love fics where the writers take the time to make sure that the fic reads well. So, thank you!

And the ending was so super awesome! It was totally something I can see RK say and do! Very well done 👏

Originally posted by: Foucaults-qalam

Light or dark, point of view, eh?

i still think it is pretty horrifying for Madhu to wake up without memory of the night before and with absolutely zero trust in her husband. I suspect there will be tears later.

and RK, because he's the only one who knows what happned, or did not happen, will lay it heavy with the innuendo. He's got a new way to torture her, and Christmas just collided with Diwali in glorious generosity for him.

Originally posted by: luvya4ever

yes!!! that's what was so awesome - we don't know what happened and neither does MB... and RK will never say what did or didn't happen! It's all left to our imagination. I don't know about others, but my mind definitely went to the gutter 😆 For all we know, he just did his duty with providing body warmth to prevent hypothermia!!!

And what I meant from light and dark was the tone of the fic... It was more darker and heavier in the beginning and the second half was a bit lighter... I mean I bet it was pretty dark for Madhu, but as the audience I definitely enjoyed it! And I am sure RK enjoyed it too 😉

PS: I'm PMing a few of my buddies to check this out because they are too lazy to find any good fics to read and since I am kind of addicted to RiMa fanfiction right now, they gave me the responsibility to tell them if I run across something that I love 😆

Are you gonna do a sequel?! You should! And if you aren't going to, then you totally should do more RiMa stuff! Pretty please... with a cherry on top? 😆

@luvya4ever When it comes to RK, my mind is always in the gutter.

Originally posted by: Foucaults-qalam

@luvya4ever When it comes to RK, my mind is always in the gutter.

luved it, amazing😊👏

Originally posted by: Sweet_Desires

Hey!!!

Very well written... I loved it!!

However, I just felt that the part on page 4 could have been more elaborated; Madhu's state of mind should be more described.

Maybe I am wrong, but I felt that this part was not connected well to the part before.

Don't mind but you asked for constructive feedback, here is mine!!

Rest was just superb. I even read your previous FF and I am eagerly waiting to read more of your work. I must appreciate your use of English vocabulary!! Well done 👏👏👍🏼