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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Onir
He makes her feel sanity in the way love makes you forget reason... as it did to her mother.

Loved this line...Encompases everything.

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sabra_ali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

I am happy to see you in this forum! 😛

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Good to see you on this forum

Will read this one once I am back from holidays :)

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RaDMG25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wow must say u have some talent dear bravo for ur creative writing 👏

Just read all the updates and loved the twists and depth in rishbalas characters...vengeance, passion, sarcasm, mind games...

Looking forward to the unraveling of madhubala character more and more rishbala encounters past and present

thanks for pm pleasure to read 😃

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-anoshka-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Looks like an interesting one, will read later on my break, thanks! Res

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

lovely updates dear

loved them

continue soon dear

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609931

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Madhu and RK are such mysteries in their own entity - especially the beautiful Raven, she has me hooked! There is much more to her publishing her mother's memoirs than simply keeping the memory alive...

I wonder what's holding Madhu back from giving into Rishabh's pursuit of her... mysteries, mysteries! I am loving this H, can't wait until the next update.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

This is an outstanding piece of writing 👏

Madhubala is a lot more impressive, mysterious and intriguing here than the show. The story is very interesting. It's clear Madhu has unsettled feelings for Risabh and so has he for the mysterious Madhubala. Their encounters were on fire and their conversations were peaky. The rapid fire in the last update was indeed interesting and I expected she would answer the last questions NO anyways. doesnt matter she wants to disclose this fact from Risabh or not.

There must be some other reason for publishing the diary isnt it? 😕 I mean its not only Risabhs mother's secret coming into light but so is Madhus mothers. Whats her motive behind that. the vendetta? waiting to see how you unfold the story.

Thanks for the PM June.. I was send you a buddy request..do Pm me for the next update 😳

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sanjh89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

ths story vl tke sm tme frm me to lt it surround me while readng...howevr i m lkng it...
MADHUBALA hs nt yet transoformd in MADHU fr me...unlke in shw DRASHTI s my fav telly star n she hs bcm MADHU...
howevr,tht RISHABH hs bcm RK fr me... i m appreciatng hm mre...in same way as i m nt a fan of actor in shw...bt i m lkng hs actng ...
BRUTE RASCAL SADISTIC...tht s wht he appears me nw fr tme being...
an intense lv story s on the way...lt see hw u unfold it...
good gng buddy...

love

SANJH

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sanjh89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Can you explain this for me, sanjh?

Ah! thanks for the vote of confidence.

oh! ofcourse...cz i luv to apprciate my fav writrs...
ur charactrs. b it GEET MAAN or here RK MADHUBALA r so prfctly woven wth th circmstances tht i m lft imaging actors of respectve shws thr... no heavy dialogs no forcfully creatd twists... jst thr thoughts...portrayd jst as d actors in shw hv dne or dng wth thr xpressions...so fr me u dnt write FF, SS or OS u write stories... u dnt create charactrs u build actors...
i hope i mde myslf clear...

love

SANJH

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