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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I have to admit, its easier writing for a male lead who doesn't go by rules, but then he could always be that much more complicated.

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

luvd their encounter n the way they spoke...

y she wants 2 marry sm1 out of interst...

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

So, her mother fell in love with D and since there was no happily ever after with him, she married Madhubala's father.

Ah! I see what you mean...

Is it so?? I felt she was in love with D even post her marriage what with she having shots with him in movies.?

I felt that even D did give fuel to her feelings by reciprocating the same though he still remained with his wife...

This is making me go nuts😕😕

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Onir

Is it so?? I felt she was in love with D even post her marriage what with she having shots with him in movies.?

I felt that even D did give fuel to her feelings by reciprocating the same though he still remained with his wife...

This is making me go nuts😕😕

So yes, she was never able to get over D, through she married Madhu's father.

This is just the real life Madhubala's story that I'm writing for Mridhula.

You can read it here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Madhubala

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: mitalee
I liked how you used The Raven's reference, bravo.

I had to keep blinking at your post to realize you have finally given me a compliment. Thank you :)

I will respond to the rest later.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Loved the Raven & beast part...

So it was a year back that they had the first encounter... & now a year later she pubishes the diary.

Actually liked the use of words to form a trap & maze that is quite known to the person falling in the trap ... but yet not able to escape off it..

She for the life of her can't stop from being feeling pulled towards Rishabh ... as foe her he is one such person who sees her for who she is and not what the world perceives her to be... Madhubala for him, but Sana for the world.

But she doesn't want this life with him due to her own demons of hating the place to where her Rishabh (as she too sees him as this) doesn't stay but the RK belongs to. She doesn't want to be a with Rishabh cause he makes her fell the madness that justifies her mother's doings in life that she feels are wrong otherwise or to say regretful. He makes her feel sanity in the way love makes you forget reason... as it did to her mother.

Liked the play of emotions during their convo... also the small gestures that you included in it... with all the caresses, touches, tears ...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

So yes, she was never able to get over D, through she married Madhu's father.

This is just the real life Madhubala's story that I'm writing for Mridhula.

You can read it here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Madhubala

😊 Thanks ...

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STUTI KANSAL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Wow wonderful and awsome update dear
update nxt part soon and dont forget to pm me
gn tc ks hsd

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ForeverForU

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

I loved all the parts...and the last one was just WOW...dint understand what was the need to publish her mother's diary😕...Madhu's actions and her feelings are getting more complicated than Rishabh's...and their last encounter...was that a flashback??