SS: One step from Hell! Vendatta - Part 20 Oct 1st - Page 26

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

But...it was just that he is a super star...and the way he spoke and called her as madhubala when even her fiance or friends call her sana...surely rings alarm bells for everyone present their...it's a wedding function...so just thought the speech should have been cover with sarcastic humour rather than creating clear doubts...

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

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THANK YOU for bringing this up...Exactly what I wanted someone to write.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0033cc">Part 8: A drunk vision
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<div><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">"What is the next thing, Chief?" He asked and Bittuji's tone burbled towards the end from his addled senses.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">"Then we..." It took me a second to fish for the next word, "Push the wrong buttons to make her invite me to her wedding..."</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">"Then," I said without Bittuji's asking or may be he was gone from there...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Then we plant an idea...</font>

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Yaar I remember pushing the rong button..but he should have opted for sly humour...he is an actor after all .n..use some comedy skills...hehe...the speech would have been much better and good to connect...just my view...a little lightheartedness which would have created ripples of doubt but not clear and would poor thus have got invited in good faith as no one else no the underlying currents...

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Yaar I remember pushing the rong button..but he should have opted for sly humour...he is an actor after all .n..use some comedy skills...hehe...the speech would have been much better and good to connect...just my view...a little lightheartedness which would have created ripples of doubt but not clear and would poor thus have got invited in good faith as no one else no the underlying currents...

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

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He is an actor who reads off his script...😊

And I can only try writing comedy - not my strong suite - but I wasn't going for that at all...Well, he is drunk, so I don't expect him to make any sense. Of course my update doesn't say that. But you will know.

Originally posted by: had2bu

I loved the melodrama that he brings with every step in the story. He is such a flamboyant wild character that you always have to wonder what he will do next.

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

You can be assured, there is a boat load coming in the next three...