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Saams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

I dint like his outrageous speech but the dance at the end was so good.I liked that they forgot everything and was living the moment.
But,now what is he gonna do?I thought wedding will be broken according to his plan.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

So they both fall into the trap once more, this time with knowing fully that once they've been burnt, there's no turning back...

The song selection was just perfect, creating a bubble for the two of them as the lyrics convey what their tongues may never be able to.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Wow... 👏

Just one thing comes to me now...

--------Darr lagta hai ishq karne mein ji...---------

Hayyee... it surmarises the whole feel of the update. Afterall I feel that - the fear to fall in Love is something both are battling with. It just depicts their state so well.

The song just intermingled with them dancing on floor... Everything else just faded out their resistance, fight, revenge, fear, regrets of their choices made... all it just left them there to fell Madhubala-Rishabh and not at all Sanaa-RK.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

I loved the Train-Ticket analouge... so true everything in life is so damn based on what we choose for us... And problems we face are somewhere due to the time we take to come to the decision & choosing out of the lot of choices we are offered.

Madhu wants to hold onto her happiness that she perceives she may almost be able to get within her palms... she doesn't want it to slip off her hands like sand. Leaving behind a regret of what she has gained for all that she lost by her choices.

He too with all his indirect taunts directed & just understood by her ... he conveys his feeling of knowing that he knows its not where her happiness would lie with a life with Binoy. He knows she's not a person who is or was in wait for a knight in shining armour / prince charming... but one who regards all this fairytale life as something which is a farce... he knows her too well to taunt her using that. He tells her through his unique ways that she can't ever have her happily ever after with Binoy.

But then he himself sooths her off it... by saying her that all this is just a nightmare in their lives ... and that its not yet time to wake up. He just can't help himself from torturing her... as now her time in life begins for facing the consequences of her unthought actions.

He knows that there's no turning back now... but at same time soothes the Rishabh within him by acknowledging that she's Sanaa here & not his revered & passionate Madhubala...

P.S.: I think I'm getting fixated with all this name games...😆😆

Also I don't know why... but I jut couldn't relate with the title... No offence plese... weird thought god alone knows why... might be it will sink in... with time...

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

I didn't like his speech...but the way he forced her to dance was good and where was binoy then...what next...phew...but u I'm...impressed...with the way story is going

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Onir

Also I don't know why... but I jut couldn't relate with the title...

What would you name it? Suggestions? As I said, everything about this story is as unplanned as it can get. I'm not giving much thought to it. Writing this without a story or scene draft...😕

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
I didn't like his speech...

Originally posted by: Saams
I dint like his outrageous speech .

That makes for two people who didn't like his speech. But, I'm unclear if you disliked what I wrote for his speech? Or if its his insensitive moroseness?

Your feedback will help! 😊

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

What would you name it? Suggestions? As I said, everything about this story is as unplanned as it can get. I'm not giving much thought to it. Writing this without a story or scene draft...😕

Like I said I really don't know the reason ... but the title could do with something stating their fears of falling in love or moreso the reluctance of theirs from accepting the love they feel for each other. Or even the escape route she wants from all of this... Or even more the start of her doom by Rishabh...

Gosh I'm so confused... That's what I was stating that I guess it has not sunk in yet for me...

Must be I'm feeling so because of the last line ... but that's what hit me the most in the update.

But nevertheless, you're doing a fab job with this story... even though it's an unplanned one...👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

I dunno I read it again but I kind of felt it questionable...a little fake though except madhu no one could understand the double meaning innuendo..but. How can any..random guy be it even a friend..barge in and gives overhead talks...and her fiance is just dumb to keep quite...can't he read their expressions...am not able to fully connect with
it... This is why I didn't like it...as for madhu feelings...well rk is planning revenge so...he is extremist as we have seen his and bittuji scene...so expected this double game and am sure many more to come... 😊

Thank you dreamyjennice for writing back and allowing me to post your comment here.

Once someone picks up the mic to give a speech, we really can't predict who its really intended for. Is it for the audience or just the one party they planned to make the speech for (Happened in the wedding I went to last week :))

Given Madhu's expressions, they others could very well be under the impression - here, I would like to call out that only very few guests are left behind - that they were old friends who had a falling out and left with bitterness now. With her film connections, no one can tell if he was just a random guy, when he is not a unfamiliar face even in a common house hold.

Oh! Binoy, he is a guest too in her home. His reactions are for the next update.

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

But...it was just that he is a super star...and the way he spoke and called her as madhubala when even her fiance or friends call her sana...surely rings alarm bells for everyone present their...it's a wedding function...so just thought the speech should have been cover with sarcastic humour rather than creating clear doubts...but am waiting for next update...when is it coming...and yes I really like this calm form of hatred and a boldmadhu of your story...rk is a little human here other than having his hate agenda...he shows his liking and obsession and similarly madhu shows her helplessness towards his nearness...he knows he holds a special place and she is trying to run away from her own confused feelings...I love this thing about ur ff...

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