New FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta.updt 8#page 21 - Page 13

Originally posted by: hira_123

CARIE...🤗....🤗...🤗....thanks for updating sweet pea....

Aaaww PriDa were really cute...poor Pri..Damini is sure making him work hard....and then loved the Goldie and Inder moment..hehe..aaww....😃......and the type writer bit..hehe...too good...babe..

now onto SaVni...I was like...*FAINTS*...

Seriously I loved it..could visualise each and every scene....

aawww Rosh's idea was really clever....made Avni into a Radha ghost...😆....but the punishment was just *faints*....SaVni kiss.....🥳.loved the way u described it...the build up was beyond good....and when u said that she could feel him breathe.....I was like omg...Carie u go girl...I absolutely loved it babes...wayyy to go...

Thank you for giving us such lovely SaVni doses...🤗...

EDIT: Kritzii I think u need to book 2 beds in the SaVni rehab babe...I am sooooooooo joining you sis...😉

Carie Carie Carie... Wat an excellent update yaar... the PriDa part was very Hilarious and SaVni's part was really very very romantic.. But wat is this yaar you forgot to P.M. me.. why Am I not in your frnds list aymore or wat??????.. Pls do P.M. me the nxt update yaar.. I can't live without reading your FF pls yaar pls this is a humble request..

CARIE!!! TEACH ME!!! Mujhe apne shavan mein le lo. Sorry, very bad at hindi.

OMG! LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED THE UPDATE!! PriDa were so hilarious. Poor Prithvi doing all the jobs for that Damini, oh sorry, GOLDIE! I was laughing so hard at every task of his. My fav was the singing part. "Hum honge kaamyaab...!" LOL!

And what to say about SaRosh? Radha? Gopi? Cliched girl, totally cliched but amazing to the last bit! And gullible little Sameer believed her. Him thinking Avni was a ghost and feeling all scared cuz of her. But them sitting all night on the together...UFFFFF!!!! Even I can't think of something as amazing as that.

And the kiss!! Carie! I have become such a big fan of yours right now!! OMG! My jaw dropped as I read every word of the scene. It was so amazing, so gripping, so romantic, so passionate, so....okay now I am speechless!

@rachel:hey rach waiting for your reply babes
@sia:thanks dear....yeah pri bearing all this for his darling wifey😃
@lifez_beautiful:yeah you will see damz burst out next...that's going to be interesting..watch out honey.thanks😊
@pridaholic:thanks for loving my bhooth story yaar😊.
@aysha_11:thanks for replying jaan...😊
@liv2laugh:oh jaan....so sweet of you yaar....i am satisfied when you(my official prida certifier) gives me a pass...i am always nervous when i write prida part that i may not meet you pridaholics expectations....but will be extemely happy when you all guys come here and say such nice things...😊
@tina:aww babes😳....sory honey i couldn't pm you..some of my pm's bounced back because of my net block out yesterday...deffo you are my darling prida friend and i always look out for ur comments...next time you get my first pm ok.thanks for liking my ff😊
@loveness:thank you dear for liking it.😊
@pc_rox:thanks honey for liking it😊
@sudi,maisooma,hira,gunseerat,kritz,nanthini,antara,sanjana:my pretty savni champas🤗when it comes to savni i always turn ultra-naughty and romantic....blame savni for it.....aww guys you all add to my savni inspiration....i am very happy that i gave all of you a super savni dhamaka....i try even more harder to put you all in savni rehab for longer time....thankz honeyz

I love this story veryyyy muccccchhhhh......
Soo please cont soon and PM me..... 😳 😛

Carie....please dont make us wait for too long to read ur next update

Waiting for u and ur update carie

loved ur ff carie
when r u uploading part 7 just can"t wait