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SIweird

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Prithvi cracked his brain and the only song that came is.."hum honge kam yaab,hum honge kam yaab ek tuuu

🤣🤣🤣🤣Carie... u r too good yaar!

Nd...🤣🤣🤣.. that bhoot part was hilarious dude!

Bt later....at the very last part........temperature got over 100 degree....it was Hot Hot Super hot.......my halaat has turned like Gunsy now...........my most fav r those last 3 lines......Hats off to u yaar!!!

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Aysha

@Booksandcoffee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Wow very very nice I loved it👏

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Hi Carie

This was awesome and I loved it to bits.

Poor Pri.....Damz is really making him work.....that typing 🤣..........upar se she sent him shopping for cosmetics 🤣......then she had him dog sitting 🤣......and the dog's name madonna🤣.....too good yaar.......that dog going haywire.....and then that client 🤣......and then finally his song🤣.....hum honge kamyab 😕......really dude🤣......after all this he is sticking around for more 🤣......and the whole goldie-damini name confusion 🤣

Now the part where Rosh says Avni is a ghost 🤣.....adn the story she makes up 🤣.....poor sam and Var 🤣....gaye kaam se.......and then what Sam says to Avni when he thinks she is a ghost 😳.....soooo romantic 😳........and then the kiss in the end. 😳

Awesome Carie 👏
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Please do continue
Jhan

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antara............

@vikynme

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

oh...caruie...dat was d lyuvliset part yaara..savni kissing... 😍
n also d romantic nite... 😍 its 2 gud yaar...i wish real mein aisa kucch hota lnmdj mein...bt its a family show..nehw....gr8 one yaar..luvd it 2 d core..
n dam torturing pri...bechara...hd 2 tk care of dat paris hilton type puppy.....

do update soon

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Pri's punishments were too good Carie... Hope the day is better tomorrow for Prithvi..

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Excellent! Luved Prida hahaha can so imagine the pain Pri went through eheheh this was a hilarious part! esp sam believing Avni is a ghost

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-Doppelganger-

@-Doppelganger-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Carie......What a chapter 👏 👏

The prida part was hillarious.....Prithvi's reaction on seeing dino and him imagining "hum honge kaamyab" 🤣 🤣 🤣

Now coming to Savni

I don't know how to express in words how much i loved the Savni part......My heartbeats....they were beating so fast towards the end....and then the KISS....la la la...i'm gonna faint ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Now i deffo need to book a bed for myself in Savni rehab😍

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319125

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Posted: 15 years ago

#118

Carie
I m dead wid savni dose
I was actually imagining
And imagining and imagining

Ummm.... ..
Loved da update

Awesome expressions

Loved ur naughtylicious update

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Hira

@hira_123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#119

CARIE...🤗....🤗...🤗....thanks for updating sweet pea....

Aaaww PriDa were really cute...poor Pri..Damini is sure making him work hard....and then loved the Goldie and Inder moment..hehe..aaww....😃......and the type writer bit..hehe...too good...babe..

now onto SaVni...I was like...*FAINTS*...

Seriously I loved it..could visualise each and every scene....

aawww Rosh's idea was really clever....made Avni into a Radha ghost...😆....but the punishment was just *faints*....SaVni kiss.....🥳.loved the way u described it...the build up was beyond good....and when u said that she could feel him breathe.....I was like omg...Carie u go girl...I absolutely loved it babes...wayyy to go...

Thank you for giving us such lovely SaVni doses...🤗...

EDIT: Kritzii I think u need to book 2 beds in the SaVni rehab babe...I am sooooooooo joining you sis...😉

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sudeshna

@sudi_karneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: sudi_karneet

seriously carie......i love ur ffs........dis was a long one but cdnt feel it while reading.....ohhh our thoda lamba likhti😊😊...

wt a superbbbbbbbbbbb writing skill my jaan👏

👍🏼👍🏼

👍🏼yaar though lnmdj is ending but plzzzzzzzz dnt stio updating ur ff....they will work like lnmdj after d show ends as i can well see d visual parts of ur writing👏👏

eargerly waiting for d next savni dose wid ur naughty scenes for savni😃kiss ke baad kya?????? will wait for it....🤗😛

waise ek idea ..tu story writer kyun nahi ban jati for lnmdj part 2....👍🏼👍🏼..that will be a gr88......do think about it sweety😊😊

thanksssssssa ton for such a wondeful update😊...

love u a ton my sweetheart🤗

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