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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeee...
liked savni
please pm when you update next
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awesum...........updat it fast....waiting savni 2 get united
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aweomeeeeeeeeee
just loved savni
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsum awsum awsum...ok sam var part was hilarious n savni .was well...no words..dis just md m day....do pm m wen u update n m waitin eagerly 4r d next chap...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey frndz...it's my new update....
sorryy i couldn't pm anyone..i am busy at my work...soo excuse me....
Prithvi came early in the morning to office. He wants everything perfect for his lady……

Damini came to her room followed by goldie and to her surprise she saw her whole office decorated with flowers beautifully and in between the balloons, confetti she saw prithvi struggling with color wrappers…she shouted out, "FOR-GODSAKE WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE DOING?"

Prithvi came out like a clown and said with full spirit,"HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAMINI".

Damini said,"what???my birthday???how do u know???and what is this celebration??this is a office Mr.Saxena!!!!not your backyard.now take this shit out of my office."

Prithvi said, "cool down boss.it's ur birthday and you should celebrate right??"

Damini said,"damn I know it's my birthday and ……"

Goldie helped in low voice, "but she won't celebrate it.."and bit her lip

Damini glared angrily at goldie

Prithvi went on,"huh???you won't celebrate ur birthday??why??becoz u r alone??u don't hav frnds??"

Damini said disgruntled, "shut up!i am not alone.i celebrate my birthday everytime with a big party and lots of friends…and…"

Prithvi said," no I won't believe it…no way…."

Damini said holding hands in a bossy way flaring ,"today night there is going a rocking birthday party at my home.if u don't believe it, come and see…you idiot…."

Prithvi chuckeld out suddenly saying,"ok boss meet you at the party…I hav work to do…u r late…go back to ur work too…byeeeeeeeeeeeee" and pushed a love balloon to her hand.

Damini amazed said out of herself,"bye…." And took the balloon shocked by the turn of things..

After few minutes she shouted "DAMN!!!!!".

Goldie started laughing,"mygod Damini!!!what happened to you?r u really gonnna give a party tonight???whole Mumbai will be in shock yaar!!!!!hahahahahah…."

Damini replied frustrated, "I just don't know whenever that crazy guy is around, I end up doing stupid things….oh how can I get rid of that man???"

AT GUJRAL MANSION

The night is glittering in the celebrations of damini's birthday at gujral gardens.VIP's thronged the place to wish Damini as she rarely invites others for such casual duo's.

Damini is in her white half gown that is showing her curvaceous body in the most feminine way that she herself is amazed to see her reflection in the mirror.for the first time she is feeling, "yes it's my birthday and I am nervous…why????". she just want that prithvi to see that she do njoy on her birthday…she is waiting for him…she is tense too…"oh god why am I waiting for that idiot??huh" and she heard the music…that same beautiful music….it's bringing back her childhood memories…back in her place…she ran down to the garden…she is searching the whole crowd to see where the music is coming from and she bumped into prithvi…prithvi caught her in his arms…she can't see him properly bcoz her eyes are wet…he moved her up.

Prithvi teased, "hey you are crying because I am late??i know you love me but not this much BOSS…"

Damini could no longer hear the music,"shut up!!i am not crying..i am just searching"

Prithvi asked, "for me???"

Damini gave him a sharp stare and said,"NO and now you see I hav a big party???".

Prithvi said,"yeah but what use??u r not njoying"

Damini said,"I AM NJOYING…"

Prithvi said,"ok then dance with me…"without even asking her he grabbed her hand into the dance floor.

Damini wanted to shout but nothing came from her mouth…the touch of prithvi's hand,…….the strength is just soo overwhelming that she felt powerless.prithvi turned her towards him…..he grabbed her lean waist with one hand and moved on to the dance floor.she heard the music again but she understood now as she danced with him,it's coming from within herself only. What's happening???she is she so helpless and weakening minute by minute.everything is in slow motion…ever second is like a killing hour.her hand slid down on the perfect chest of prithvi…his heartbeat is like a sharp spear going through her own heart, it's making her crazy….she looked into him them…..She is searching in his eyes….for some clue…for why everything is going out of her control…..but she couldn't….she is just falling deep into those warm black eyes….she is floating…she is above ground….the only thing she felt like doing is….she moved more close towards him…hugged him tight….tears rolling down her eyes as if they stayed there for a long time and had been released just this moment….she kissed him hard enough..like this is the only moment worth living for….that it's…….

The world went silent……Damini is not caring…..only one voice brought her back……..

Hingorani Gujral shouted,"DAMINI……"

in manali At the temple……(varni are still playing in the waterfall….)

Avni asked shocked, "marriage???? R u nuts??"

Sameer replied smiling broadly,"yeah why not???now it's clear that both of us r in love and why to wait for more time???"

Avni said shyly, "yeah but we didn't tell to our elders abt us and……"

Sameer pressed, "and???and what avni???"

Avni continued,"and there is lot we need to know abt to eachother…love in the true sense….understand eachother…I shuld know what u like…what color u like…what food u eat…what ……"

Sameer stopeed her by placing his finger on her lips, "Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….."

"from now on I like whatever you like avni…I love you and everything is after that….."

Avni felt she is the luckiest girl on earth…she don't know how to reciprocate his love……she slid her hand over his head and said, "do you love me that much????".

Sameer smiled at her innocence and said, "yes I do,MY sweet pari…."

Avni hugged him saying, "I am just melting in ur love Varun….i wish I cound make something to make u happy…I wish this dream goes on forever and we both are like this….."

Sameer said chuckling, "yeah avni we will ever be like this but I am not sure whether we can get this spacious place……" looking around the temple ground…

Avni thought Sameer is referring that he is poor….she shook her head and stopped Sameer saying,"don't worry Varun…I can llive anywhere with u…even in a hut…when we get married…we can come to this temple everyday…I will make u aloo parathas….we can go to movie once a week in nearby town…..we can hav a small garden near our house….we can go to picnic with Roshni and Sameer…..we will always be happy Varun…always and always…..

Avni is just dreaming in her own fantasy world….sameer is soo awe-impressed by her childish dreams and her pristine heart…she is going to be Avni Gujral…if he married her…the bahu of a business-magnet family and will be the queen of all comforts…Sameer thought, "I am gonna make u happy avni.i promise you that….".

Avni stopped suddenly and said, "but …varun….i hav a problem….."

Sameer asked surprised, " what???"

Avni said,"well I will marry you only after my brothers marriage…otherwise my brother will be alone……and he will hav no one to look after…"

Sameer,"ohhh??can you tell me how old is ur brother???"

Avni said, "only 26"

Sameer made a face and said, "well don't worry avni we will sure marry only after your chote-mote-chweet bro gets married…"

Avni smiled like a sunshine …

Roshni called out……"hey guys r u coming or not????"

P.S:Sorry guys i hav short savni....i promise next gonna be a super hot savni scene soo..bear with me...😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
carie nice part dear.
really loved the prida part and their story is getting interesting.
looking forward to more prida part and your next update.
continue soon

-baz
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Posted: 15 years ago
y such a short scene after so many days.....but its very nice... im keeping my eye nd hopes on da p.s.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing
It was superb

Di for me it was not short
U write xpressions so well that i jus cant thinking

Superb
And love the way u maturely write the conversations

Loved nd enjoyed it
Thanks
Edited by Gunseerat - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
I wil post the link in all dream houses
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow,,,....tat was just ffab....will b waitin 4r mr savni scenes di....😛

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