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Posted: 15 years ago
update soon yaar.i just love this ff.. 😛 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
reallyy awsum ff...plzz update soonnn...dyin 2 read d next part...
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Edited by dcpisj - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys here is my next part.it's a bit short...but hope you like it.
Prithvi walked to goldie(who is wiping the tears of laugh rom her eyes) and said, "Do you know how much torture she put me in?????"-pointing his finger towards Damini.

Goldie asked back, "why are you complaining?"

Prithvi said frustrated, "b'coz you are my BOSS"

Goldie said sadly,"NO, she is your BOSS."

Prithvi thought he misheard something and said, "WHAT??"

Goldie said, "Yes Prithvi, she is Damini''''''."Damini Gujral""

Prithvi slowly turned towards Damini, his head went spinning 360 degrees round and he didn't know whether to laugh or cry.He felt like shouting with both excitement and frustration-"oh mygod'oh mygod'damini , my darling wife is standing before me and made me do all this shittttttt'why????"

The realization hit him, he remember all there "I LOVE YOU" encounters and his yelling at her-a mad smile appeared on his face-now he know why she is pissed off---

Damini started, "Now Mr.Prithvi Saxena,you know whom you are dealing with.I don't take cheek from anyone and this is ur short experience for being stupid infront of me. don't make it worst further.behave yourself from now on and get out now'."-Damini stopped -that stupid buffoon is smiling'"is he crazy???"

She asked,"what??"

Prithvi replied giggling and feeling sooo happy "I just want to say'I love the way you taught me this lesson'you are very talented girl'I am soo happy to work for you'.please continue this'.i shuld learn a lot from you'I will come back tmrw.ok?bye Boss"

Out of joy, he kissed goldie on her cheek and went out.

Damini and goldie are stunned.goldie asked Damini,"what did you make him do???why is he soo happy?" .damini said,"even I don't know'..i thought he will resign and hit me but'he seems to like it!!!!!"

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Roshni and avni are taking Sameer and Varun to a cinema theatre nearby as Sameer is getting bored'

Sam and var are on motorcycle while Roshni and avni are on a horse-cart.so sam who is driving the motorcycle has his concentration on avni in the cart while Varun is gripping his life in his hands and praying hard that sam don't hit anything and hurt them'..

Roshni saw sam is looking at avni and pinched her teasingly'.avni smiled down shyly''when those golden-brown warm sunrays are falling on her face, that smile made her dimples sparkle like diamonds and samz thought "Masha allah(in jodha akbhar style)'it is worth dying for this beauty..huhhhhhhhhhh'.why aren't my dimples as beautiful as hers????if we hav children, I wish all of them get her features''."..he moved his hand ,as if he is trying to touch her'..thennnnnn''''doooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

The bike fell in a mud pond''varun shouted, "You crazy pratttt''what are you trying to do???kill me in broad day light?????you moron'..wait till Damini di sees us!!!!!!oh mygod'oh mygod'I am deffo dead now or after'''"

Roshni interrupted'"stop it Sameer'there is a waterfall nearby temple'.come there'both of you can wash'."

Sameer ,Varun Roshni played in the waterfall'.sameer saw that avni is at the temple'..he went there'.avni is deep in thought facing the falling sun'sameer , all wet, smiled and hugged her from back saying, "why do you always look that beautiful-Angelic to me????i am going completely crazy about you''."

Avni moved front with tears in her eyes.sameer is stunned,he said worried, "avni what????"

Avni said, "you don't know me. I am not like Roshni with all these riches.My world has only my brother ''who brought me up and I love him more than anything in this world.i can't speak properly like in ur city nor I am as good as the girls there.i don't know why you like me!!!i never thought I would feel like this for anyone'.you are making me mad everytime you see me, every time you touch me, Every time you smile at me'inspite of myself I am liking you'I don't know what's happening'..please go away'.go away'.leave before I feel even more attached to you'leave'"she turned away unable to talk further'.

Sameer is totally stunned, it's the first time she talked to him completely, he is touched and he had tears in his eyes too'.he moved her to face him, holding her arms tight and said passionately, "Avni listen'.shhh'listen to me'.this is destiny avni'I am made for you and you for me''.i don't care what the rest of the world is but you are mine and only mine'..i will do anything for you'.i know this from the first time I saw you'nothing is gonna stop us from being together'..you love me and you can't deny it'.even if you try to push it away your eyes and heart can never lie'.i want you for every second of my life''.."

Avni , "but Varun'''"

Sameer put his finger on her lips and both looked into eachother's eyes like for eternity and Avni knew he meant all that he said and it is true'she can't deny that she loves him'she is part of him and she don't know when this had happened'

Sameer removed his finger and kissed her tenderly on her cute dimple and said smiling a fresh, full,moon smile'.."ok shall we marry now???"

Edited by carie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ua back!! atlast

Prithvi whistles for him!!!!!!
what a response yaar

very well written

Edited by sia88 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh god wat a confession

Superb comeback carie

Prida part was gud


Missd u a lot

@sam-var convo-

All in all
Lovd it a lot

Short nd hot for savni

Loved savni


Fab
Edited by Gunseerat - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
waooooooooooo
lovely update just loved it
i can't wait for next part
please pm me next time
Edited by marie1994 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow,wat a part,loved pr's reaction and that marriage line was gud
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Posted: 15 years ago

Carie......u r back wid a bang!!!!!have been waiting for this update for so long....Temple scene was simply magical and then Sameer's proposal😍 😍

One question....do u remember me????
I'm so disappointed....u dint send a PM!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
the prida part was awesome
and damz is pri's wife nice storyline
continue soon.

-baz
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Posted: 15 years ago
PriDa scene was good.. next time make it long.. and do PM me...

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