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Posted: 15 years ago

NIDZ,MAZ and MOMMi

all are superb
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Posted: 15 years ago
***********By sneha***********
dated : 31/12/2009
***********New Year for PRIDA*********

prithvi and damini are out on a new year party which is hosted by one of their business rivals. as they dont like mr. khanna, their business rival, but considering it a rule to be a good business man : not to show your emotions in the corporate world, prithvi agreed to go the party. at this time damini is still not on talking terms with prithvi but behaves as a really good couple when she is around otheur heur mom. she doesnt want her to go through ny more stress coz of their relationship tiff.

elaji called prithvi to her room. elaji " prithvi, beta mein tumhe batana chati thi ki, mr. khanna hamare busiess rival, har saal new year ki arty host karte hain. till now i was quite healthy, so i used to go every year, but this year i won be able to go. as u and damini are handling all the business i want u two to go."
prithvi " but mummy, aap toh jaanti hain ki mr. khanna is one of our competitor, so y should we go" elaji " prithvi beta, mein jaanti hun, par aaj mein tumhe business wrold ka sabse important rule bataati hun. To be preapared for every danger tht your rival can cause you, you have to know his intentions. is world mein aise bahut si cheezein karni padti hain jo tum nahin chahte, nyways agar tum nahin jaana chate to..." prithvi " nahin mummy mein zaroor jaonga" elaji" beta mein nahin hum, tum damini ko saath lekar jao" prithi wanted to say smethng on that but elaji continued." mein jaanti hun damini ko is party mein lejana kitna mushkil hai, i know how much she hates mr. khanna, but mein yakeen hai, tum usey mana loge" prithvi, "theek hai mummy, hum abhi tayyar ho jaate hain"
prithvi entered his room and saw damini engaged in some papers.prithvi came nd stood next to her.

prithvi " damini, woh darasal baat yeh thi ki, mein kehna chata tha ki( damini gave him a straight glance),i mean mummy, mummy chahti thi ki humein woh mr. khanna ki new year party mein jaan chahiye"( prithvi sighed) damini"good lord , toh mumma ne tumhe bhi isme shaamil kar liya, she knws how much i hate that guy" prithvi" mein jaanta hun, par i think humein mummy ki khushi ke liye jaana chahie" damini" ok ok mr. prithvi saxena mein tayyar h jaati hun" (prithviu saxena hmmmmm she knows that wiull always hurt him nd even this time hse was right. prithvi was standing there with his eyes lowered) prithvi thinking" beta prithvi she is not that easy girl. she is really headstrong aur badi muc=shkil so toh maani hai, agar mein kuch bola toh shayad phir bhadak jaye"

prithvi went in there to get ready, he came out with a black nice 3 piece suit. but to his surprise damini was still in the washroom. " damini, hum late ho rahe hain" damz" tum neeche chalo mein abhi aati hun, bas 2 min" prithvi thought y does it take women so long to get ready but he soon got his answer when he saw magnificantly beautiful daminicoming downstairs. priuthvi " oh my, i think she is gonna kill me today with her beauty" damini" haan? tumne kuch kaha ?" prithvi " nahin , nahin toh "( e thought taarif karoonga toh maroonga) damz thinking (gud lord wht kind of husband is he, ek baar yehi keh deta tht i m lukng nice , but oh well thts my hubby i cant do nythng abt it)

it was a silent half an hour journey, noone talked all the way long. but prithvi did steal some glances on damz while driving and damz, unaware of prithivi's stare, was thinking in her head ( hey bhagwan, mein kya karoon is ladke ka...too muck in attitude...pata nahin akar kis baat ki hai isme...hmph)

as soon as they reached the party hall, both came out of th car, prithvi gave the keys to guard to park the car. to his surprise damini slid hera arm in his. damini" this doesnt mean everythng between us is alright, i m just doing this coz of mr khanna, i dnt want him to know abt us" prithvi (smiling on his fate, guess dis party is gonna be goooooddd) "maine juch kaha kya?" damini ignored his comment and they entered the party hall. damini " there he is stupid moron" prithvi looked at her nd asked " who me ?"
damz" no, mr. khanna" prithvi " oh, i thought stupid, moron was my nickname kept by you" on this damz was irritated and prithvi was tryng hard to control his layghter.

mr khanna" welcom mr. nd mrs......" damini " saxena" prithvi luked at heur shocked but proud...mr. khanna " oh yeah saxena, welcome, enjoy"
damini saw one of her best collegue that she used to work with but later he left their company nd nw owns he owns his business in uk. but still damini and abhishek were on good terms.
abhishek " hey, damini. how are you ? you look beautiful as always" prithvi looked at him and thought ( am i allowed to kill one person and still not go to jail) damini looked at prithvi and saw him jealous, she tought of playing this game today. " hey abhishek, i am perfectly fine how are you? aur tumhe toh mein hamesha se hi achi lagti thi....isme meri kya galti hai" abhishek " well well looks like u r wid someone" damz" oh, yeah he is my husband, prithvi" they shaked hands. abhishek" lo mein london kya gaya, tumne toh mera pata hi kaat diya" prithvi was on teh verge of bursting out antime soon.
he realised that damz and abhishek have got so much to talk about tht damz, seems like she almost forgot about him. he dint like the sight of it, so he planned to excuse himself nd made his way over to bar. while he was drinking, he saw a girl approaching him. he wasnt interested in her at all but the girl started talkng all non sense to him prithuvi " u knw u seem like a nice girl, but can u see tht women in black dress( she nodded) she is my wife, damini nd u knw wht i m not sure if u r aware or not, but she got a full license of carryng and using(he stressed on the word using) a gun" after listening to this that girl got his message nd ran. prithvi was busy in drinking. after a while damz came nd asked hium " kya hua tum yahan kyun aa gaye?" priuthvi " oh finally u noticed yeah" daminiknew what was going on nd it was hard for her to control her laughter, but she dint like dat pri was drinking. damz" prithvi, u knw i dnt lyk u driniking" prithvi grabbed her arm and asked her saracastically " but u knw i luv when you talk to other guys and forget about me" damz" prithvi, chodo mughe, pagal ho gaye ka, log dekh rahe hain" prithvi saw around and left her arm, he realised her arm was all red. in the mean time abhishek approached them and asked damz" dance?" he forwarded his hand but before damz can give in her hand prithvi grabbed damz hand nd said" srry abhishek better luck next time" abhishek was smiling

scene 2

it was a romantic song and prithvi and damz were dancing. it was about to be 12 and the coutdown begun . prithvi thought in his head" dammit she is my wife, y m i thinking so much about this. i m just gonna do it nd if she ill be angry then it ill hardly make a differrence"
there it was, it was bang on 12, all lights were switched off nd everyone shouted happy new yearrr........before damz can join the crowd, she felt someone kissing her. OMG it was prithvi, even though it was dark but she can feel his presence. he kissed her, in the middle of everone, obviously it was dark, but being such a shy and not that good in romantic department, he kissed her. she was so happy nd to prithvi's surprise hse reciprocated it back. as soon as the lights were turned on, they broke apart. pruithvi was lookin at her with a sense of satisfaction nd he thought(although it was a short kiss, but something is alwasy better than nothng) whereas on teh other uhadn damz couldnt make na eye contact. she was blushing like hell nd prithvi was all pround on his action. for the rest of half hour they dint make an eye contact.
the finally decided to leave, said bye to everyone and got into the car. the whole drive prithvi kept staring at her but damz kept lookin down. as soon as they reached home, damz ran to her room nd prithvi followed her.
prithvi enetered the room and saw his beautiful wife sitting on the bed, still blushing. prithviu loved this sight. he sat on the bed next to her and whishpered in her ear " happy new year" on this damini blushed more and stood to go. but prithvi grabbed her arm and said " ru not planng to wish me back? " damz still lookin down " happy new year " prithvi " well yeh bhi koi wishes hui, jab tak tum meri taraf dekh kar nahin kahou, hw will i knw if u actually wishing me or swearing at me again" damz looked up with a pot and saw prithvi chuckliing. luking at sucha cute and beautiful pout prithvi asked her" damini, kyon na hum yeh naye saal ki shuruaat ek naye tareekey say karein. i mean lets forget all our diffrences and problems nd lets give our realtionship a new start" seeing damz nodding, prithvi smiled and lifted her in his arms. he took her to the stable farm. damz was surprised at his this act" prithvi said" damini hamari pehli mulakaat yai hui thi, aur yahin se un sab cheezon ki shuruaat hui jinke kaaran, aajj hamar pariuvaar bikharte bikharte bacha hai. kyon na hum apni nayi zindagi bhi ain se shuru karein " damz had tears in her eyes and she hugged prithvi.

thts the wat their new year started, from scratch, a completely new starting, with no differences, nodhokha and no maksad excet one and that this love. they both were happy the way this party turned out for them and 1st jan 2010 morning was anew day in everyones lives bringing all the lost happiness bak to GM and most importantly prithviu and damini's lives that is they became prida again......

hey guys i made a seperate topic for this scene and then i thought tht i shuld also post it here.........
Edited by snehakapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey maziya.ibrahim..........tht was a lovely scee nd it doesnt seem like tht u were writing for the frst tym.......it ws wonderful👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
@MAz: soooo cute...reminded me of that promo they used to show that promo before the show started with the both of them racing. why can't they do that now? I have always wanted to see a competition between the both of them. Lovely scene, and the end was swoon worthy
@Mru: it was so good. romantic and funny at the same time. please email the scenes to Cvs and they can get some ideas from this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Maz.....Lovely scene.........

The pridaholic in you has made u discover the writer in u 😃

Absolutely wonderful scene...... loved that u got the old and the new Prida together....... The good old days when they wud fight to outdo each other and then the end when they r so romantically together.... 😍

Well done.............. 👏 👏

Hope to see more scenes from u
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Maz...! just read your FF.... its really good..! you write quite well👏😃😃 loved it.... so prida racing huh... its different... i like it!😃 loved thier fighting...! needless to say i loved the last bit the most....!😳 thanks for the pm... hoping to see more from you..!😊
Love,
Maham
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Posted: 15 years ago

@Nidz thankyou for liking it!🤗

@Soni thanks girl! 😊

@beauty_niki: hey thanks a lot!😃

@Sneha: thankyou 😊....hey btw good that you posted ur new year scene here...just edit out the heading in the format followed by the rest. 😊

@leaves: thankyou leaves!🤗..ohh yes that promo!..loved it...hopefully we see some great scenes of PriDa in the coming weeks.

@Vids: thanks babe!..hehe..glad you liked it!😃

@Maham: thanks maham!🤗...am glad that you found it good!...

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Posted: 15 years ago
great job Sneha!!

nice story n hmmm pri finally puckering up courage n kissing his wife....me likes!!
n yes new year new shuruat!! great work!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
.05/01/2010

** **Fiction 1****
BY VIDUU
I have never posted any fiction on IF.... hope u guys like it .....😃

Damini stormed outside the house with nearly 5-6 files in her hand. She was all dressed up for an important meeting she was suppose to have with her clients. She stood near the car but didn't find any driver. She yelled at everyone as to where is the driver. The only answer she got was that he was absent and had gone to his hometown. Isse bhi aaj hi jaana tha. She was already getting late.

Just then Pri walked in with the car keys and asked:
Prithvi: Should I drive? Would u mind coming along with me?
Damini: (Angrily). Do I have any other option? She didn't want to drive cos she had planned to read the file on the way so that she wud not miss out on few important notes. She grudgingly said "Hmm"
Pri: Hmm ka kya matlab hota hain
Damini: Yeah tum se accha kaun jaanta hain……. Yeah toh tumhara favourite dialogue hain
Pri : Waah not bad Damini tum mere bare mein sab kuch yaad rakhti ho (smiles)
Damini: Aaab chalein ya tumhein aur bhi dialogue marne hain

She sat behind trying to read the files but all she did was murmur about Pri. Yeah jab dekho mujhe attitude dekhata hain….. Har sawaal ka jawaab hota hain iske paass…….
Pri was watching this in the mirror and kept smiling which made Damz even angrier. She turned the pages of the file as if they were a gun and she was trying to shoot something as a target.

Suddenly the car stops and makes some weird noise.

Damini: Aab yeah kya hua.. Mujhe already late ho raha hain. Aur tumne car check bhi nahi ki.
Prithvi: Mujhe aur kuch kaam nahi hain kya? Help karo uspar se sunkar bhi lo. Kyun aaya main
Damini: Itna attitude. Aab tum isse thik karoge ya nahin. Uspar se aise shortcut use karte ho jahan par se koi aur gaadi dekhai hi nahi deti..

Pri tries to find out whats wrong while Damz checks out the place and keeps wondering how Pri knows such weird shortcuts. Just then 2 bikes stop near the car.
Damini keeps wondering as who they are and why did they stop near her car. Before she could think anything she finds Pri standing just in front of her as if in a position to protect her from any harm. She pushes him and moves ahead to see who these guys are.
"Arre bhaiya aap yahan pe kya kar rahe ho… gaadi kharab ho gayi hain " says Sameer and smiles like an evil grin on his face.
Damini finds everything suspicious ……. "Kya yeah in dono ka plan tha….." In saxena bhaiyon ka kuch pata nahi..kab kya plan kare"
The other guy removes his helmet. He is Sam's old friend. Namaste bhabhi he says and greets Damini. She smiles and says hello.
Sam: "Arre bhaiya aap meri bike le lo and reach for ur meeting immediately. Aap ko late ho raha hoga na?
Sensing Sam's fishy tone ….
Damini : Aur koi option nahi hain kya? Thinking really hard how to escape these Saxena brothers.
Sam's friend offers his bike. Damz finds this idea more feasible and without any hidden intentions by the Saxena' bro's

Sam's friend hands over the keys to Prithvi. Sam mutters into Pri's ears
Sam : Arre bhaiya thank u to bolo. Yeah sab mera aur roshni ka kiya dhara hain. Humne hi driver ko leave di thi aur hum ne hi gaadi ke engine mein prob create kiya tha. … All the best bhaiya ..Aish karo… and smiles
Prithvi gives a shocked look at Sam. Damini is totally frustrated now…….
Damini: Aab tum dono bhaiyon ki world war pe discussions kahtam ho gayi ho to hum chalein

Pri starts the bike. He borrows the jacket from Sam's friend. Damini totally lost her cool now." Aaab yeah jacket ki kya jaroorat hain. Hum kissi fashion show par nahi jaa rahe hain" Damini is so uncomfortable in this bike. She has never ever in the life sat on a bike. She never felt she would have to do that. She always had one car or the other at her service. She tried to hold on to something on the back so that she may not hav to fall on Pri. Prithvi adjusted the mirrors to get a glimpse of his loving wife when he drives n was less interested in the vehicles around. He started the bike. She couldn't hold balance. She suddenly felt herself being pushed here and there. She felt off balance and had no option. She tried to hold on to the tip of his shirt. Prithvi blushed even more now.

He stopped the bike in the middle of the road
Damini: aab kya hua….
Prithvi: Damini yeah road bahut kharab honge.. I will drive only under one condition.. You will have to hold me tight
Damini: Kya ..She almost screamed. Ha ha ..yeah kabhi nahi hone wala Mr. prithvi Saxena.
Prithvi: Sooch lo…Nahi toh main yeah bike nahi chalane wala
Damini: Eww.. tum itne mean kyun ho… Mauke ka fyda utha rahe ho
Prithvi: Tumhe aisa lagta hain …… Forget it..Tumse behas karna waste hain. Ek aur option hain.. Tum bike chalo ..aur main peeche bhait jaata hun… Yeah toh thik hoga na…
Damini murmured..Jaanta hain mujhe bike chalana nahi aata..isliye yeah sab bol raha hain..Kash maine tab apne frnds ki baat sun hi hoti… aur bike chalna sikh liya hota…aaj yeah din nahi dekhna padta…
Prithvi: Tumne kuch kaha……. Tumhe bike chalana aata hain na….. **giving that evil boy vs girl evil grin**
Damini: Thik hain …… aab chalo…… I'll try to hold on to you…

Prithvi smiled like never before…….He thanked the people who built the road with so many potholes …… so many speed bumpers……… cos everytime they encountered one Damini wud grip him so tightly that pri cud feel sense her cheeks rub across his shoulders..he enjoyed this feeling …… She held on so tight ..which made him wanto to just get down the bike and kiss her lady love…… Damini.but then she had still not forgiven him so he had to wait and till then enjoy this serene beauty next to him

Damini held on more tight than required…..She kept murmuring something and Pri watched her do that in the mirrors……He found her beautiful even when she had the angry look and the murmurs going on. Damini said something but felt something else. She felt so secure holding on to him that even if it was no a speedbreaker she wud suddenly just tighten her grip on him………..

Again …he gave a sudden jolt and stopped the bike…Damz was about to fall this time. She shouted…
Damini: Pagal ho gaye ho kya..Aise koi break lagata hain kya………….

Prithvi stopped the bike………..Saw a cute little puppy lying on the road… shivering in that cold..unable to move around…He held the puppy in his hand … and tried to cover him up in his jacket…..he asked Damz.. can we take this to our house……. Damz nearly shouted out in glee…Haan buddhuuu..yeah bhi koi pocchne wali baat hain……Is poore safar mein tumne ek hi accha kaam kiya hain..aur who yeah hain……She wanted to hold the puppy in her hands but was scared cos her dress wud get untidy and she wud not be able to give a presentation with those clothes…… She let pri hold the puppy in his jacket as he drove…….. The cute puppy had brought a smile on her face like never before and she was so proud of Pri that he cares about animals also. She held on to Pri even more tightly…….Pri knew he had done something magical to make Damz hold on to her so tightly cos it looked like they wud end up fighting the whole way……..

They finally reached the place…….wow that too on time….
Damini: (soft voice): Thank you
Prithvi: Tumhne kuch kaha ..mujhe sunnai nahi diya
Damini: Kuch nahi …Maine bas thank u kaha………
Prithvi: Ek aur baar kehna..tum aur mujhe thank u bolo……..hai ……….mere itne acche naseeb kahan
Damini: Shut up..aab mujhe jaana hain………..bahut late ho raha hain
Even her shut up sounded so sweet to his ears……. He bid her goodbye and just stood there not knowing for what………..
She kept moving fiddling around with her files…… She was feeling uneasy…..Didnt know what was wrong with her………
Suddenly she turned. He smiled……….She smiled ……….. She shook her hands and said goodbye…… Pri wud hav almost fainted…… Wow .Did she say that goodbye to me with a smile………. Hmmmmmm……I am one lucky guy to have such a complex sweet Damini as my wife he thought……….

Damini went to the conf room.. From there she peeped thru the windows and found the same bike standing there……….She recognized the jacket……… but then she was surprised ….She saw a really hot girl flirting and the girl had succeeded in getting a ride ………. She checked the bike again n again……….

Was that Prithvi..Did he give that girl a lift…How dare he do that………. She flared up in anger…….Asked Mr.Mehta for his car keys and asked him to postpone the meeting to tomorrow…….But Ma'am we had the clients come over from all over the world just for this meeting……….

Yahan meri shaadi risk mein hain aur tumhe in clients ki padi hui hain …….. She shouted at Mr. Mehta……… As u say Ma'am the meeting shall be re-scheduled for tomorrow……is all mr.mehta cud say before Damini stormed out of the room
She rushed down…Couldn't even wait for the elevator………She ran thru the steps and hunted a few secs to find Mr.Mehta's car and drove away like a speed monster…………….. but just then………..

( To be continued)
PS: Sorry guys tried to keep it really short but landed up being so longggggggggggggg
Edited by Viduu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey viduu.......tht was sucha sweet part......pri damz on a bike😳 keep writng more......

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