~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 61

super cool both mahm and niki

hey guys!

excellent job Niks.....I loved it....you poured so much love n emotion into it!!! I so wish they had shown this....N am so sad that both their hearts r breaking so much....my sweet dahlings.....this Inder needs to be burnt n rot in hell ....causing so much ache!!

(Hey guys! This is my first one shot on PriDa, I haven't written anything in a while so do let me know what you think all critism is welcome. Enjoy!)

He stood was there at the mandir looking for solace, there was tears rolling down his face, he never wanted to fall in love with her but he did, he never wanted to break her heart but he did, all he wanted right now was the pain to stop but not for him but her for her, that was all he wished for.

As he was leaving he saw her, he saw her she was looking as beautiful as ever but he noticed that her eyes were red, it broke his heart because he knew he was the cause for them. He wanted to turn around but it was too late she had already seen him. He looked away but then started walking towards her and she stepped backwards and outwards into the rain. She turned around to leave, when he called her. She froze, and closed her eyes to stop the tears from falling, all the feelings rushed to her she loved him, he was always there for but how could she have not seen the hate in this act, he betrayed her and he broke her trust.

Damini listen to me.

Prithivi I don't want to listen to anything, I don't want anything from you just stay out of my life you have done whatever

Damini you will have to listen to me, I never meant to hurt you, I didn't want to lie to you but my world collapsed in front of my eyes and everything I saw blamed one person, my life became that person's destruction.

Well, well done Prithvi you succeed now leave from here.

I am not done yet Damini, in all of that I never realised when I fell in love with you Damini. You mean the world to me and I never ever wanted to see you cry.

Damini closes her eyes and then says Words are cheap Mr Saxena, you have done your damage now leave me and my family at our state we will survive, we don't need your sympathy or your fake concern was enough once I nor no longer need it or want it.

She turns to walk away when Prithvi grabs her hand and pulls her into his arms, he grabs her face and face and says look at me. She looks into his eyes, she can see the pain but refuses to acknowledge it, she can see the guilt but doesn't want to know about it and he sees her broken trust and all he wants to do is regain that trust. Damini looks away as she was melting in his gaze, he was breaking down the barriers she had put up.

Damini is trying to get out of his grasp but its too strong. Prithvi says stay still Damini. I am not here to cause you any pain or hurt I am just here to apologise and fix my mistakes.

Damini laughs in mock laughter if you really do want fix this mess leave and never come back. Prithvi dejected lets go. Damini goes on to say this must have been so easy for you lying to me, saying you want to fix all this, she doesn't stop goes on and on. Prithvi is getting frustrated by this point, inside he knows he deserves all this but something in him snaps and he grabs her and kiss her, he puts all his emotions into the kiss, his frustration, his guilt, his pain and most importantly his love. Damini is frozen in shock for a moment and eventually responds back with the same fervour. Damini then pushes Prithvi away and runs from there.

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@Nisha Just WOW!!!!! I LOVED it.....my wrist hurts from typing but I just had to come and tell you how good your fic was

@ Adventure Girl - Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

@ Leaves - Ohh thanks so much Leaves! It means a lot that you liked it so much. 😊

**Writing by diya86**

Diya, you already know that I love this poem. 😊 I especially like Prithvi's POV! Give us more babe!!

@ Nikita.....i love it!!! absolutely fantastic....I have read it 3 times already.....It is so real and the pain palpable!!