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Posted: 15 years ago

@Niki and @happinez: your scenes were so cute............they sent me off to Pridaland.....sweet dreams for tonight. thanks guys.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Gosh, I've been gone so long! And have missed so much! Man, I hate real life for being so demanding...


Mrids, Nish, Leaves and Sarah

Thanks for liking the scene, you guys!! It's a fic actually, but haven't been able to write more. Hope to update this weekend...


Ivy, Achu, Mrids, Nish

Lovely entries, babes!!! Loved them! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

They took me straight to PriDa heaven... *swoons*


Niki

Love your continuation of the "Ya Rabba" sequence! Wish that had happened on the show... sigh.


Maham

Those verses are perfect for Prithvi!! Great choice! 👍🏼


Nikita

I really really love your scene!! So angsty yet so beautiful! 👏 👏 👏

Please write more, babe, looking forward to reading more from you...

Honey bun 🤗

OMG!!! That was sooooo C.U.T.E. I love it, babe!!! Wow! 👍🏼 👍🏼

Loved Damini's botched up cooking and Prithvi's sweetness! Sigh. Really wish we'd get cute scenes like this on the show... But seriously, sweetie, this was amazing! Please write more!!

p.s. Are you done moving? 😃 Miss chatting to you... Of course, I'm more to blame.. Haven't come online for more than 10 min in the past week. Sigh...

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Posted: 15 years ago
**Writing by sistu**
FICTION 10
Palat ke jab guzre hue mod ko dekha
Toh najaane kaisa ek bhram toot gaya
Yeh baat humne qubool kar li
Najanne kaise yeh bhool kar di
Iss nasamjhi ka asar
Najaane kyon ban gaya zeher
Humse sitam kaisa yeh hogaya
Najaane kaisa yeh zulm hogaya
Yehi hain khuda se ab guzarish
Puri ho teri har khwaish
PS: I would like to thanks sundas for helping me to understand the meaning of the words better and suggesting improvements. Thank you sundas.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Sis that was just awesome. I love sher / shayari - Ghazals bring tears to my eyes when ever I hear something good.

Presume that was Pri thinking. Right ?

Tumhara Sher padh kar dil bol utha - Door ho jaye inke raaste ke sare kante, Puri ho jaye inki sari khawaish aur ek ho jaye yeh bahut jaldi.

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Posted: 15 years ago
@achu: yes that was prithvi. Vow, those are wonderful lines. You shud also write a poem seriously. Tnx for liking the poem.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Please Note: Teri Meri Zindgai has been updated! http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1297048&TPN=9&#26318573
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwww......sistu........
that brought tears to my eyes....
So beautifully written......

Luv, Sheena
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Posted: 15 years ago
Note to the Viewers:

The FF section and index of the front page have been updated. If I missed anyone's scene please let me know so that I can add it to the index. Also If I missed an FF link then please PM it to me so that I can add it to the FF section as well.

Thanks
Ivy

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Posted: 15 years ago
thnxx a tonne for adding my ff!
cheers!
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Posted: 15 years ago

**Writing by Achumen**

Fiction - 5

Prithvi woke up with a start. He looked around - familiar surroundings. The clock struck seven in the morning. Crazy dreams haunt him these days - there are too many truths that will hurt Damnee. He wanted to sit with her and tell her everything, hug her tight and remind her what she told him one day 'Together we can fight all the demons'. He just did not know where and how to start.

He looked at Damnee sleeping beside him, she looked b'ful early morning, the strains of the past few days were clearly etched on her face. He wanted to soothe the strains off but how. He propped himself on an elbow and stared at her. He could do that for hours he thought. 'Damnee Gujral...no ....Damnee Saxena, Prithvi will give up his life for you, if it ever comes to that - hope you understand that, some day'.

She stirred and opened her eyes and saw Prithvi looking down at her with those wide blue eyes. She looked at the clock, past seven. 'You are up already ?', she asked him. 'Hmmm', he said. 'Am off to get ready, you can sleep for some more time', he said and sauntered to the wash room. Damnee curled back into the covers and decided to sleep for a little while more.

She woke up again to find the drapes pulled apart and the morning sun steaming into the room. It was eight and she needed to get up. She looked around, there was no trace of Prithvi.

Prithvi showered, got ready for work and decided to surprise Damnee by getting b'fast up - by the time she got ready. He went to the kitchen and could smell coffee brewing hot. 'Whats for b'fast'?' he asked . 'Anything you like, Sir, we are making parathas for Ila maam and grilled sandwiches for Roshni maam' , they replied in unison. Well, well, anything you like sir, he told himself. 'Not Aloo parathas, right', he checked. He did not want to take the risk, not yet.

'What does your maam have for b'fast, I mean Damnee maam?' 'She is not fussy at all Sir, she has a little of anything we make. But she loves a glass of fresh juice.' was the reply he got. 'Ok, parathas, a cup of coffee, no sugar and a tall glass of fresh juice, for us' he said.

Prithvi rolled the b'fast trolley into their room and pushed the door open. Damnee was at the dressing table brushing her wet hair. He could just stand there, and look at her, for hours he told himself. She turned to look at him and their eyes met. She broke the gaze embarrassed and looked at the trolley, surprised. 'Breakfast time' he announced and pushed the trolley further. He came up to stand behind her in front of the mirror and their eyes met again. What a picture they made he thought, and to think he had almost lost her. She had given him one more chance, torn off the divorce papers and he had promised never to mess up again.

With both his hands on her shoulders he told her 'We are going to office, both of us. Remember your cabin next to mine ' spending more time together ....I need to learn a lot from you ...and together we will take Gujral Enterprises to greater heights, Deal ?' Tears filled her eyes, yes this was the man she loved, decided to spend her whole life with. She brushed off her tears and got up. 'Am hungry lets have b'fast' she said.

They toasted on the first piece of paratha and enjoyed their b'fast.

After a while Ila saw them coming down the stairs discussing the tender they needed to respond that evening. She heard Damnee telling Prithvi, 'Lets go to the hospital first, I want to take ma's ashirwad. '

The smile on Ila's face said it all.
Edited by achumen - 15 years ago

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