-Jenny's LNMDJ One Shots - Broken Heart - pg 2

Inspired by this music of music and the current marriage track of SaVni
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WmT-TDxMoy0

PS: Romance has been quite active in SaVni track in this one shot, and this comes down to Avni knowing the truth about him not being Jai, while she tries hard to cope with the truth, the truth of the brothers is revealed to everyone..

This is more of a SaVni's perspective as well as a scene, I like to see them air it.

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The wind as blowing hard as it could be. It was a storm out there with rain falling down, hitting up people's legs. Damini rushed out to close the window, and grabbed a hold of the window but the other window refused to close. Rosh came from behind and helped her close the window. Both turned around to see the dark figure seating on the bed. Rosh turned on the light and Damini and her stared at her.

She was sitting motionless, senseless on the bed. Dressed in a white churidar, a photo frame was held in her hand. Damini came over to her and Rosh tried to make her talk. It had been not even a week since Avni's life shattered into pieces and she was no longer the same Avni as she was before. She was a victim of a misunderstanding, but that misunderstanding had ripped her soul out of her.

Rosh and Dams sat next to her. Damns grabbed the photo and stared at it. It was of Avni and Sameer's in good times. A tear fell down her eyes on the photos. Dams turned and looked at Avni who slowly got up and went towards the window.

Damns was proud of her sister. She had been completly broken but yet Avni was more stronger than she had thought. She kept it all inside of her and tried to be normal. She could never forgive Sameer or his brother for their deeds, but somewhere along the way she knew that she would have to depend on them. Dams hated to do this, but seeing Avni behave in a way scared her. She didn't want to depend on them, heck. She was Damini Gujral. She could handle everything but one thing she could handle was Avni Gujral. Avni Gujral was something like a paradox or like a hard mystery to solve. She loved her sister, and for her, her sister was more important than revenge. They all had been part of this revenge plan, but at least Prithvi did not marry her or Varun didn't pose as an imposter. Sameer had ruined Avni's life, but why? Because he thought that her mother was the murderer of his father? But what was Avni's fault in this? What was their fault in this at all?

She held her self responsible for this as well. She had not paid attention to Avni despite that Avni was always there for her. She looked over at Rosh whose tears would not stop. Roshini stared at the events that followed up in her life. She loved Varun and will always love him, but she realized she loved her sisters even more. Heck, they had been with her forever. She was confused in the struggle but as she saw Avni, her love turned into anger. She didn't hate Varun but she would not forgive Jai or Sameer or whatever he was. Was there so much hatred for him that he ruined her sister? But then Rosh knew that if Sameer destroyed Avni, only Sameer can repair Avni again. She had to side with them, and she would beg if she had to.. Because she wanted her sister back.

Avni stared out at the window. The rain was falling down, and it made her think back to the rain of the first pub that she went with and how Sameer supported her there, all the times he was there for her, but everything was fake she thought to herself. No one can love you Avni. You are not meant for love. She flashbacked into the events that led up the realization that she was just a mere prop being used in the game of chess. She didn't know if her mother was responsible or not, but all she knew was.. She was a living corpse. and as much as she tried hard to cry, she could not...

While on the other side, Prithvi prepared dinner and sat down with Varun who was looking sad. A photo frame was in his hands. It was of all the moments with Roshni. Varun thought to himself that. " why did he commit to revenge?" while Prithivi stared at him. He thought back to his and Dams moments and the realization of all that happened killed him. But he was still alive and not a dead corprse like someone else had become. He stared at his mom walking in and taking her place in the dinner table. His mom had been alright, because of the support and love by Dams, Avni and Roshni. Those three people that they tried to hate, give his mom a new life.. and Prithvi knew a storm had emerged in Sameer's life. He was walked away from the dinner table into the room that was filled with darkness. He opened the lights to see the figure sitting on the bed, with memories and of everything he could subject his heart to. Prithivi decided that Sameer needed him and sat next to him. He put his hand on his hand when millions of tears leashed out. Prithivi was shocked.. Sameer just put his head down in Prithivi's lap and cried silently...

The entire night was washed away in darkness..

The next morning, Dams, and Rosh prepared breakfast, when they heard a door bell ring. Damns opened the door and was stunned to see the people she hated the most with, but she knew she had to bear them. She welcomed them and the brothers walked in.

- Prithivi: ( I know that I have hurt you and I don't expect you to forgive me either, but if there is even a small place, forgive me. But don't give me this silent treatment. Slap me if you wish]

- Damini: [ I want to try to hate you but I can't. I never felt this way about someone whom I cannot hate, but I can't forgive you. I can forgive you for what you did to me.. But not what you guys did to Avni.. I can never forgive you for the pain caused to Avni, and Roshni]

- Varun [ I am sorry Roshni. I have broken those hearts into peices, and I never want you to forgive me. I am thankful for the fact you are in my life, but I am broken because you may not be as thankful as I am ]

- Roshni[ Varun, you are my life. I'll always love you, but like you supported your brothers, it's my time too.. I guess our paths are different now.. I am sorry.]

Just then Sameer entered and all the faces turned red. Damns held onto Roshni to tell her to calm down..

Just then they heard a noise upstairs and rushed up the steps. Sameer got to the room faster than everyone else. Avni stood there, her hand bleeding from picking up glass. Sameer went towards her when a hand stopped him. Avni tried to walk away when he grabbed her hand. She didn;t winch.. He made her sit down and tried to cool down the wound. But she didn't look at him.

Kabhi hua yeh bhi Khali Rahon pe bhi Tu tha mere saath

Sameer applied the wound gently. He had more tears coming out than Avni did.. Dams and the rest watched in hope that Avni would have some reaction to it..

Kabhi tujhe milke lauta mera dil yeh khali khali haath

Flashbacks of Savni scenes emerged.. as well as the realization of the truth. Sameer stared into the eyes of Avni who seem to be not moving. He applied the bandage and held onto her hand. He noticed all around the room, things were the same, except of the picture on the floor. It had been their marriage photo. Something that was broken way before it was even done. Sameer stared back at Avni who got up and her eyes met the rest of the family.

She walked away while leaving Sameer there.. Kaha bhi na mene Nahi jeena mene Tu jo na mila

Yeh Dooriyan..........

Whew, it was long.. I swear, they should use the song on them.. I am sorry, it's not that great but would love to get ur comments on it..



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Hey! This is beautiful... really... so well-written. I love the way you've written Prithvi's remorse and guilt alongwith Sameer's breakdown.Ye Dooriyaan ... is soon going to suit them very well. I still feel that when the truth is out, avni will come out of this stronger , no matter hoy she loves Sam... but one cannot say the same for Sam. He has always had an edge over people... people have always loved him rather than the other way round, When he falls for Avni , he is going to fall so hard that he wouldn't know any other way to live except with Avni...

^ You said it Nitz. I think SaVni track will get better when the whole truth comes out, because I want to see Sam in pain.

and you are right. She won't believe him at all. Its gonna take way too much out of him to get her to even believe that.

this is sooo beutiful jenny....my eyes filled up with tears ..coz in few days time...avni will b truely broken n shattered....n den ....in some more days...all the sisters will face the most bitter truth of their life...God save them...

Are you crazy? Too long? Not that great? You should write FFs!! If that scene is used I will go to the creative team and literally kiss them umpteen to the dozen. I could imagine this scene in my head! It's too cute. I really badly want Sameer to regret his actions just like that. I want him to feel for Avni more than she does for him. I want him to go crazy for her single smile. I want him to love her more than anything that ever existed. But as they say, wants and infinite and resources are scarce. (Sorry I have an Economics exam tomorrow and I've been revising so my brain is kinda Economics mush. Please do ignore.) I'd love you to carry on with more scenes after the truth is out. For months I have been waiting for the track after the truth is out believe it or not. I know that that is when Sameer will realize his true feelings, but I think during this marriage sequence, he will start questioning himself when they have their 'scenes'. YAYYY! So friggin excited!! Going crazy again. Ignore Ignore Ignore.

this is sooo beautiful 👍🏼

Btw, this is so true. Ever since I heard the song I have wanted it to be used on this show, because it has so much feelings in every single syllable of it. I lowee that song!! LOL. Love you for this!

U ROCK...👏......WELL DONE......

Thank you everyone for your amazing comments 🤗

This will be my official one shot place.. I'll continue to update here.. I just thought of another one shot, so I am gonna post it here.