I cant live without you! LNDMJ FF part 15 pg 43

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Hey guys! 🤗

Well i thought of starting a LNDMJ FF - PriDa,SaVni & VaRni.

I'll give each of them equal importance,atleast i'll try. Well i do'nt really have a concept in mind but they tempted me to write one.

All of them are in college. I know its hard to imagine PriDa and SaVni in college but do try. 😉

*I cant live without you*

THE BROTHERS

Prithvi-

His character is the same as in the show. He is arrogant,full of attitude,and everything boys his age should'nt be.

Sameer -

The younger brother of Prithvi but totally different from him. He is THE flirt! That's what he is known as everywhere! He loves experimenting with girls, and cant stick with one girl for more than 2 weeks.

Varun -

He is the youngest brother. He's a hard-worker n very determined. He believes in acheiving n gives studies the most importance.

THE SISTERS

Damini -

She respects boys but excpets boys to respect her too. She does'nt give any importance to those who do'nt. She loves horse-riding!

Avni -

The sweet and simple girl. She is really very sensitive n listens to anything anyone tells her.

Roshni -
She's the fun one. She is in the lookout for her dream boy and does nothing except have fun!

Introduction

"Maa! mujhe college ke liye daer ho rahi hai.Aaj to naye saal ka 1st day hai!" she shouted out to her Mom who was still busy making breakfast for her.

"Ruk naa! waise bhi sab jaante hai ki tum hamesha jaldi pahunchti hoon..aaj agar late ho jaogi to tumhe jail main nahi daal denge.",teased Ila Gujral.

(She's not the rich tycoon here. She's just a simple,sweet,caring mother.)

" MAA!! Mazaak mat udhao mera. aap breakfast nhi de raho ho to main bina khaaye hi chali jaati hoon", she stood up from the table.

Just then, her mom bought hot steaming aloo parantha's from the kitchen and Damini could'nt resist eating it. " omg! aloo ke paranthe" she said licking her mouth and started munching on the parantha's.

Ila Gujral smiled at her daughter and went into the kitchen.

" Aloo ke paranthe!", she came out of her room and stood in front of Damini with sandalwood paste all over her face.

"Yumm yaar!..mujhe kisi ne bataya hi nahi",she shrieked.

She tried to grab the parantha but Damini caught her hand. " Nahi! yeh mere liye hai", she said posessively.

"Maa! apne mere liye nhi banaya", she acted as if she was hurt.

"banaya hai na", her mom said coming out of the kitchen. "lekhin tu yeh bata tumhare chehre par tunhe kya laga rakha hai!"

"voh maa..aaj college jaana hai na isliye.." she said sheepishly.

"College to main pichle 2 saalon se jaa rahi hoon..maine to kabhi yeh nahi lagaya..", Damini teased her sister.

Roshni made an angry face at her oldest sister and signalled her to stop it!

"Teek hai beta,chodo. jaldi se khaa lo aur taiyaar ho jao.", she said with a smile.

Roshni started munching on them immediatly. When her mom was gone Damini asked " chakkar kya hai", raising her eyebrows.

"Kuch nahi dii. voh aaj pehla din hai na to ladko par impression jamaana hai",she said with a wink. 😉

Damini just rolled her eyes at her lil sister, she was never going to get back on track.

"Maa! main chali", Avni whispered and was almost out when her mom came running after her.

"Inni jaldi kahaan jaa rahi ho?! breakfast bhi nahi kiya" her mom said frantically.

" Maa college ke liye daer ho rahi hai " she said with panic.

"Ek ghanta pehle pahunchkar vahan kya karegi?"her mom enquired.

"Maa abhi 9 bhej rahe hai!" she said shocked that her mother is not aware of the time

Just then, Roshni bursted out laughing.Everyone looked at her confused.

"Roshni..ab hasne ki baat kya hai..?", Damini asked.

"Di! ..maine...alarm...change..kiya tha..aur..", she said between laughs.

But everyone understood and Avni got serious.

"Roshni! pata hai tere vajah se mujhe kitne jaldi main taiyyar hona pada. apne kapdon ko iron bhi nahi kar saki", she sa loidoking at her wrinkled white salwaar kameez.

"DI..lekhin i never thought ki u'll fall for it..", she said bursting out again.

Avni gave her a deadly glare.

"Teek hai teek hai main jaa rahi hoon..mujhe freshers party ke liye taiyyari karni hai..", annonced Damini and rushed out of the house.

Roshni went inside her room to give herself beauty treatment. Avni sat down and ate her breakfast, this time not in a rush.

Roshni was excited for her 1st day. Avni was looking forward to another year of college. Damini wanted to go meet her friends and her 'enemy's'.

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So that was the introduction. Hope you guys liked it. Do comment/criticize.

Love
-Aish


index

intro - pg 1
part 1 - pg 4
part 2 - pg 6
promo - pg 8
part 3 -pg 9
part 4 - pg 11
part 5 - pg 14
part 6 - pg 18
part 7 - pg 21
note - pg 23
part 8 - pg 24
part 9 - pg 27
part 10 - pg 29
part 11 - pg 31
part 12 - pg 35
part 13 - pg 37
part 14 - pg 40
part 15 - pg 43
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fabulous. Plz continue! Waiting for the boys to be introduced😊
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thnx sistu..will continue if i get enough comments ..they'll be introduced in the 1st part..😉
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Wow yaar lovely intro jaani just lovely keep continue soon:)
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OOh !! aish !! great start !! do continue add me okies?
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AWESOME JOB
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PLZ CONTINUE IT
N SISTU SORRY DONT KNOW UR NAME
SAME HERE WAITING 4 BOYS INTRO
LUV SABA
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saher - thnx..!

lipsa - aww thnx..will add ya..!
saba - thnx..hmm in d nxt part..!
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Great start loved the girls intro can't wait for the boys intro!
Please add me to the PM list but I do apologise in advance if I don't comment on all the parts as I am going to be so busy come next week.
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Originally posted by: nikita_88

Great start loved the girls intro can't wait for the boys intro!

Please add me to the PM list but I do apologise in advance if I don't comment on all the parts as I am going to be so busy come next week.
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Niki

thnx..they'll be there in the next part..😉
will do!..aww..do'nt worry..i'm sure u'll catch up later..!
thnx 4 d comment

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