I cant live without you! LNDMJ FF part 15 pg 43 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: leaves45

It's so good and I am reading it at work...sigh I am blaming u for this😆 Update soon.

lol..😆..u shud'nt do tat..!..yeah i will..thnx 4 ur comment..😊
preethi - thnx..yeah will do..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Thanks for PM

ur welcome!
Great update, loved reading it when I read Rahul I was like who but then Ridz came and I was like DMG!
lol..yeah i noe tat wud b pretty confusin..n srry 4 gettin dmg characters in here...😳
Hehe loved Sameer and Varun but a Prithvi intro would have been interesting as well.
thnx..lol..i cudnt think of anything 4 Prithvi..so just made it a PriDa scene..
Can't wait to see what happens next a SaVni meeting! 😆 Oh yeah loved Roshni's entrance and liked the pics they help visualise so much easier.
LOL..m getting crazy ideas 4 a SaVni meeting..😆...well thats y i include them..😉😛
Cont soon
will do 😊
Niki 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pakirani

great intro of the boys...but there was only one thing missing in this part...avni? oh well, maybe next update! can't wait to read it! 😃

thnx...lol yeah..well cudnt include every1..it wud make the part really long..n m sure u guys will get bored den..😛...bt yeah she'll def b der in d nxt part..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Durga A.

Nice intro of the boys.

Loved Prida's scene.
Overall, it was a good update.
Can you please pm me the next time you update?

thnx..
yeah sure i'll do tat..😉
niky - hey!..thnx..ur welcome..lol..tats kk yaar.i unnersan u hv exams..😛
urvi - yeah sure i will..😉
saba - itz kk..
mimi - omg!..gud 2 see u here..😃..thnx a lot 4 d comment..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Heya guys! I know its been late, but then was'nt really in the mood of updating. 😆

Thanks to soumya for helping me with the part and encouraing.

Part 2

Sameer notices a girl walking by wearing a cute salwar suit. He grins. He picks up a flower and goes to her " Hi gorgeous" , he says handing over the flower.

She gives him a deadly glare " Sameer! Kitni baar kaha hai mere saat flirt mat karo", she said angry.

" Chill Avni! Mazaak tha", he laughed. He loved irritating her this way.

" tum aise mazaak kyon karte ho?", she asked still furious.

" Sorry! Lekhin best friends ke beech aisa to ho sakta hai na?", he winked.

" Watevah Sameer, main jaa rahi hoon", she said and walked off.

Sameer just sighed and returned back to his gang of friends.

Damini entered the beautifully decorated hall. " wow! This is amazing guys!", she exclaimed.

" haan ideas kisne diya tha?", Riddhima teased.

" Ridz..lekhin kaam to sab ne kiya na", Damini said.

" Haan voh to hai! Par credit main tujhe hi dena chahti hoon", Riddhima teased again.

Damini smiled at her and went about seeing about the refreshments. She looked at it and her mouth started watering. Good job Prithvi, she thought.

She was going around checking everything when she noticed something," guys! Yeh thoda weird nahi lag raha. Yeh dono streamers is line main hai, aur yeh waala uss taraf..isse yahan shift kar dete hai..", she said pointing at a spot.

" yeah sure", when of the guys said. " Vicky kahan bhaag gaya, he was supposed to put up everything!"

" its okay..main laga deti hoon..", Damini volunteered. The guy handed it over to her and she climbed on the ladder.

She was putting the streamers when suddenly her leg slightly shifted and she was floating in air.

She closed her eyes in fright and suddenly felt her body in strong muscular arms. She opened her eyes to find Prithvi staring at her.

He was in awe of her beauty, their faces were just inches apart and he was delighted with such close proximity.

He could hear her hard breathing and got the sign that he had to let her down. He slowly put her down and she looked down awkwardly.

" Thank you", she muttered looking up.

Prithvi just gave his its-okay look.

" Ahem ahem!", Riddhima broke the silence.

Damini shot her a deadly look. Riddhima in return gave her a teasing smile and winked. Prithvi watched both their faces and just chuckled.

He was about to turn and go when Riddhima offered her hand," Hi! I'm Riddhima..err,naam to suna hoga", she said coolly.

" nahi suna hai..par chalega..Prithvi", he said taking her hand.

Damini instantly felt something burning and stared down at their hands. He just was'nt leaving her hand. " Tum dono yeh baad main kar lena..ab kuch arrangements baaki hai", she said in a serious tone which made them leave hands and part ways.

FRESHERS PARTY

All the freshers entered the beautiful hall. They were looking around and liked what they saw!

" wow yaar! Kya awesome party lag rahi hai" Roshni exclaimed who was accompanied by Varun and Rahul.

" hmm yeah its pretty good", Rahul said nonchantly.

" pata hai! Meri di ne hi yeh saari arrangements ki hai", she said proudly.

This caught Varun's attention. She had a sister here? " tumhari di yahan padta hai? Who's she?"

She pointed to a girl clad in black kurti's and dark blue jeans. " Oh! Nice", he said.

Rahul whispered in his ears," seniors pe line maarna ka iraada hai kya?"

Varun glared at him which made Rahul shut his mouth.

"WELCOME guys n girls! Here is YOUR party! Enjoy all you can!"

She looked backstage and mouthed, " where is Inder?"

She got a –Don't-know look from Riddhima. She sighed and turned around.

" Every year this party is hosted to welcome the freshers in our college. They should feel special atleast for this day!" came a strong male voice.

Prithvi came and stood next to Damini wearing an orange shirt with blue jeans.

" Aur hamara college alag hai, hum ragging ko bilkul encourage nahi karte!", she continued.

" now we wont bore you guys anymore, enjoy your party guys!", Prithvi shouted.

" Wohoo!", came the reply from the crowd.

" Lets play some music and you all can get dancing", Damini cheered.

Jhumo Yahaan, Naacho Yahaan, Todo Khaamoshiyaan Yeh Raat Hai Masti Bhari, Dekho RanginiyaanRoko Na Khud Ko Thirakane Do, Dekhe Jara Yeh Jahaan..(Let' s Rock The Party, Come On EverybodyLet' s Rock The Party, Aa Dekhein Jara..) - 2

Todake Deewaarein, Haathon Ko Milaake, Aa Mere Sang JaraGhum Ko Mitaake Aansu Ko Bhulaade, Chhu Jindagi Ko JaraJi Lo Apani Jindagi, Kal Ka Kya Pata..(Let' s Rock The Party, Come On EverybodyLet' s Rock The Party, Aa Dekhein Jara..) - 2 Roshani Pukaare, Paas Yuun Bulaaye, Aage Hai ChalnaHaan Kuchh Lamahon Ki Hai Yeh Jindagaani, Kis Baat Ki ParwaahJi Lo Apani Jindagi, Kal Ka Kya Pata..(Let' s Rock The Party, Come On EverybodyLet' s Rock The Party, Aa Dekhein Jara..) – 2 Everyone was dancing happily and totally enjoying it. Sameer and Avni entered together and were delighted to see them all so happy. Sameer asked Avni to come and dance, and after lot of forcing she agreed. They were also grooving to the music now. Prithvi and Damini too got down reluctantly and started dancing. It was one hell of a party! Suddenly the music stopped. " Guys! Now we have something fun for you." Prithvi's voice came boomed. " I know you guys love dancing, um we saw that right now! So we'll make you dance again!", Damini continued. " Aha Damini,come to the point yaar. Okay guys, we are going to pair you all up and lets have some couple dance out here", Prithvi teased. "yeah couple dance! Its just for fun and who knows you might actually end up with that person"she winked. Everyone chuckled. They were in for this and were excited about it. " So we have the freshers list now, and have paired everyone up" Prithvi announced holding up a list in front of everyone. " Yeah so lets announce the couples without much ado – 1. Aakash n Veena2. Rahul and Sweety3. Varun and Roshni\…" and she continued with some more names. All of them went searching for their partner and Roshni had known hers already. "yaar iss sadu ke saat kyon!", she grumbled. " tumne kuch kaha?" Varun inqured. " Nahi kuch nahi", she put on a cute smile. Varun held out his hand for her and she took it with a smile. Everyone started dancing happily. Sameer held out his hand for Avni and she took it though she did'nt want to dance. They all slow danced on this song –

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Har ghari saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Prithvi and Damini were forced down by Riddhima and others yet again n they too had to dance. Damini put her hand on his bare chest and felt shivers. He held her by the waist and they danced without meeting each other's eyes.

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Hope u liked it 😊 I know it was a pretty average part.

criticism/suggestions/idea's NEEDED!

PM's will be sent 😉
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

I am first yippe !

aww !! It was such a cute part.With sameer flirting with avni.

The freshers party was super.Prithvi and damini rocked.I would have loved to read some dance steps :)

nevertheless,it was great

Thanks for the pm do continue soon :)

Luv Lipsa

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Gr888 job Aish!!!!
Do update soon...this whole college idea is gr888!!!
N savni together ...so cute!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Hey this was really cool. Update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
heyy .. tnnx .. cool yaar ... awesum update ... sam flirting avni ... to cute ... and prida scene was also pretty good ...
update soon man ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
thnx 4 d comments guys!
lipsa - yeah i tried that..but cudnt think of anything..srry..!

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