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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ff: izharre ishq part 16
Raj became quiet again
He knew everyone was looking at him
Then he heard naina
"aapki bandage phir se karni padegi sir, lagta hai,strain ki vajha se bleeding phoir shuru ho gayi hai, mein abhi first aid box lekar aayi,and she stood up bt
"naina ruko, mein tum logon ko kuich batanna chahata huun ,
Jai,"raj hum jaante hain ,k lala tumhare peeche kyun hain
Us red box k full contents kya the sirf tum aur shakti Chandra jaante the
Us red box ne baadmein naveen ko to begunha saabit kar diya ,bt tumko
Army k according aur lala ki meharbani se , sab yeh samjhate the k tum naveen ko trap karne vale the,col Chandra ko jab tumhari sachai pata chali to tumne unko bhi mar diya
Bt its all wrong, lala ne red box k un sabhi contents ko gayab kar diya jisse us par asar pad sakta tha
Ab vo jaanta hai k tum uski sachai jaante ho., aura b jab tum vapas aa gaye ho to tum apni jaan ki baazi laga do dege lala ko saza dilvane k liye
Isiliye vo tumko marvan chahata hai raj."
Raj==on the whole this is true bt
There is sumthing else that no one knows except me and lala ji
And its this thing which made me realize how wrong I was in believing him.
Naina=raj aap yeh
Raj==" haan naina, yeh ek aisa raaz hai jisse use darne ki zaroorat nahin ,kyunki kisi bhi tarike se mein yeh kabhi saabit nahin kar paaunga k ismein unki galti thi,bt unko pata hai ,k mein yeh raaj jaan chukka hun to mein use zinda nahin chodunga ,mein usse badla lunga 20 saal pehle ki us ek raat ka
Jab usne……….
(he broke off, and looked towards aba who was advancing towards him)
Everyone had gone very quiet
Aba sat besides him and said
"raj humne laga tum is bare mein kabhi kisi ko batanna nahin chahate, naina ko bhi nahin
Raj:" nahin aba
Aaj jo hua us se ek baat to paki ho hi gayi hai ke lala ji mujhe zinda nahin rehne denge
,aur agar mein mar gaya(at this naina violently shuddered, raj looked towards her and said again holding her hand)
Agar mein mar gaya ., to ho sakta hail ala ko uske karmon ki sazaa na mile ,mein tum sabko batanna chahata hun k lala ji ne aisa aur bhi bahut kuch kiya hai jiske bare mein
Koi nahin jaanta
Koi bhi nahi
Usne apne desh ko to barbaad kiya hi hai,
Naveen se uski zindagi sheen li
aur
Kai logon ko besahara kiya haikai logon ko marra hai ,jinmein se mere parents bhi do the
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Love:
dolly
i know its lil bit short bt i didn't have much time
if u people replied to this one then i'll try my level best to update the next part by night
god promise
Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
amazing....update soon plz... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
i promise agli baar jab bhi update karungi i'll do it with an esp long long long part
thanx 4 replying
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its awesome too good update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx i promise next time i'll update with a long part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dolly, u and ur update are too good yaar.u always give us a quick update.today update was short but interesting.thanks for this cool update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just caught ur fic today yaar.
its really awasomeeeeeee......   ;👍🏼 .
the way of ur story is different & ver....yyyy intresting. do continue soon....... 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Dolly,waiting for the update dear.pleaseeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ff:izharre ishq part 17==
A STORY LEFT BEHIND
RAJ knew the room had gone quiet much much quiet, and he founded this extra attention a little uncomfortable .it would have been easy to speak to a shouting mob , atleast all of them wont be looking at him,bt it was not like that here
he wished ud would close his mouth and stop gasping in his direction ,bt what we want doesn't usually happens.
Then naina spoke , in a viose full of tenderness which was indeed quiet relieving to him.
"sir ur wound has gone worse
Hum baki baatein badmein karenge let me go and bring the first aid box
Raj let go of her
Naina returned in a few minutes with a first aid box , a clean towel and a jug of warm water.
She moved his trousers a little up the wound
Carefully soaked half of the towel in jug, after removing his bandage
She cleaned the blood
Raj winced
Naina at once loosened her grip and became more cautious
Raj smiled, naina was dressing his wound with such an expression that even slightest another wince from raj's side would have caused her a heart attack.
So raj refrained himself from speaking ,or wincing and groaning uptil the time naina had completed her work
It took abt 15 mins
Then she returned after cleaning her hands and sat again besides him.
He closed his eyes.it would have indeed have been a wonderful bliss to fell asleep now and get away from all the tormenting thoughts abt how lala ji is a sick prat.
He opened his eyes again and went on…………
I was adopted by lala ji when I was I think abt 10 yrs old
He was mayor of my state at that time ,I am a native of Punjab, Patiala.
Huda and jai were rather shocked at this ,raj had been a Punjabi ,well no doubt abt that ,tabhi iska khoon itna garam hai,they both tried hard not to grin,
Raj continued
"I was the victim of lala ji's first ever crime first ever"
This news vanished all laughing thoughts from both huda and jai's mind.
"my dad a school master ,his name was ,master karamjit singh
And my mom was a housewife with name , satinder"
He stopped here and looked towards aba whose eyes were filled with fresh tears
Aba spoke"hum satinder ko sato bulate the
Usko humara use satto kehna bahut pasand tha"
Jai who couldn't stop himself spoke
"u knew raj's mum"
Aba'="ji vo humari moseri behan thi
Partition se pehle uske parents aur mere parents humeshan sath sath rahte the
Tab vo sirf 10- 12 saal k hongi mein us se 10 saal bada tha
,batware k baad vo log yahan aa gaye aur hum vahin reh gaye
Par is judai k baad bhi humne ek dusre ka sath nahin choda ,har Sunday vo apne ghar k saamne vali baniye ki dukan se humko fellytone karti thi"
Ud=="fellytone???"
Aba"(laughing through his tears) haan satto chotte hote telephone ko felly tone kehti thi"
Humari shaadi hui ,jiski video humne pata nahin kitni musibatein jhel kar us tak pahunchai
Humara beta hua raj veer
Tab satto 15 saal ki thi
Jab bhi rajveer usko bhua bulata tha vo bahut khush hoti thi,
Phir uski aath saalon baad shaadi hui karamjit singh se
Bahut bhalle insaan the
Unhone hum se milne k liye kai baar government ko arziyan likhi ,par koi fayeda na hua
Aur phir aayi vo kali raat jisne humse humara beta sheen liya
Un terrorists ne humare masum bacheche ko behrehmi se maar diya. Sirf is liye kyunki usne unke kai hathiyaar pakad wa diye the.
Humara beta bahut bahadur tha. Humko us pe garv hai hana meher
(and besides aba amin smiled vaguely through her tears)
Jaante ho us vaqt rajveer sirf 12 saalon ka hi tha"
Rajveer ki maut ki khabar sun kar., satto bahut dukhi hui usne kuch bhi karke humse milne ki kasam khayi
Us vaqt tak raj ka janam ho chukka that, vo sirf 2 mahine ka tha
Lekin unhne iska naam nahin rakha tha, isko sab chotu hi kehte the.
Phir unko permission mil gayi humare paas Karachi aane ki , sirf teen din ki
Sato hi thi jiski vajha se mehar rajveer ko khone k gum se bahar aa payi
Sato ne apne chotu ko meher ko saunp diya aur kaha
Bhabi yeh raha aapka rajveer ,dekhna ek din yeh hum sabko ek karega aur humare dukh khatam karega
Bhabhi iska naam rajveer hai aaj k baad
Yeh mujhe mosi hi bulayega aur aapko amin"
Raj== he was listening this all quietly he knew all this, bt he thought how great was his mother ,and how sweet she was ,and lala killed her
(naina seemed to be knowing what raj was thinking , she took hold of his hand again)
Aba continued
"teen din baad vo vapas chale gaye ,meher ne zid karke raj ko satto k saath bhej diya
Lekin satto apne vade par kayam rahi
Raj ne use mosi bulana hi sikha aur meher ko amin
Raj bhi har hafte humein phone karta
Is baat ko das saal biit gaye
Aur phir us ek aur andheri raat ne mujhse meri behan ko sheen liya"
Aba stoped , he was silentely sobbing
Raj knew he won't be able to continue further
So he spoke
"28 march yehi din tha vo mujhe achichi tarhan yaad hai
Mere saare ghar mein aag thi
Bapuji ki cheeken sun raha tha mein ,mosi ro rahi thi , aur phir dekhte hi dekhte saari basti mein aag lag gayi
Sivaye chekon kuch nahin tha vahan pe
Mera ek dost m ,mujere saath tha, uska naam yaad nahin
Par vo bhi ro raha tha uske ghar mein uski dadi aur uski bahan phas gayi thi
Mosi ne mujhe uske saath zabardasti bhej diya
Mujhse kaha mien apne bauji ko nahi bcha sakta par shayad ab bhi mere dost k gharvalein bach jayein ,mein aur mera dost us taraf bhagge, hum dono andar chale gaye biji to kamre min band thi aur karma puri tarhan aag se bhar chukka tha
Hum andar nahin ja sakte the . jai ro raha tha meine use chup karaya
(raj suddenly stopped here, he was never able to remember his friends name b4 ,bt today that name had it self spilled from his mouth, he looked towards jai ,and what he saw made his stomach lurch)
(jai was looking at him with petrified eyes , which seemed to be both wet and swollen, it looked as if jai had just been told that someone very close to him had died. This expression was very familiar , this expression was of his friend jai ,when he was seeing his biji being engulfed in fire. Was it the same jai sitting in front of him???)
Raj=="tum tum hi the ,tumne kabhi bataya kyun nahin??"
Jai==(speaking in a hoarse viose) tumne bhi to kabhi kuch nahin kaha"
Everyone else was looking at them ,completely confusd
And then huda asked
"sir and sir kya hua aap logon ko is tarhan ek dusre ko kyun dekh rahe hain. Dar lag raha hai"
Raj=="he was the one ,, he was my friend jai, and I never ever recoganised him never"
Jai== its not ur fault , how would have u been able to recoganize me,after 10 yrs that changed everything 4 u??and I I never told u how I and my sis became orphan
Raj==where's sona then??
Jai==she she umm she
Raj ==we save her didn't we??(raj said this with a panick he couldn't quiet explain)
She was there in her cot , fire was there all around her ,she was crying we rushed towards her ,I picked her up , u found a blanket from ruins below , we covered her and jumped from the nearby window
Then after an hour or so rescue team arrived ,they took out dead bodies from houses
There was one of my bauji and ur biji too!!
Bt doc said doc said he said sona was fine , he said so didn't he??
It was sona only whom I saw last b4 being taken away by lala ji
Jai==(looked blankely at raj ,quiet astonished that raj still remembered so much of details)
raj threw naina's hand away ,got up and limped towards jai
raj== r u dumb?? Will u answere pls??
jai==raj she ( and then he hugged rj and broke down completely), she is not fine
they took her to hospital afterwards and there she said sumthing had gone wrong something has addeled up her brains
she is there since ,not even able to speak, bt bt raj she remembers u u know??
She speaks only few words she talks abt biji in in some gestures and says raju b aaye the
And she even remembers me caals me gunny
I I go to her every week and remain with her for a long time"
End of part, I hope u'll enjoy it!!!!!
Love:
dolly
Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome................
too good...........
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update soon

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