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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

it was a superb n amazing update

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brahmjot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Ff:izharre ishq part=14
It was night again
And they all were together again
Raj was having particular difficulty with naina
She wont let him even move his leg a bit
Bt Finally she gave in when raj suggested that if she continued to make him sit there on the bunk bed throughout 1 month his bed would soon turn into his bathroom as well.
At this aalekh and huda laughed so wildly that aalekh broke his side teeth on colliding with his bed table and huda crashed his mobile phone by stepping on it.
Naina flushed very badly.
So at least he was now able to go to loo,and could move 4 bath taking.
Jai had talked to raj that they wont come down now in day as it might arouse suspicion in other workers abt why had jai's and his teams's desire to spend hours and hours in a junk room increased.
Raj have not been liking the idea of remaining low and was telling others again and again that his leg was fine and the doctors always have to blab a little more then necessary.
Bt he wasn't getting much support at this pronouncement bcoz of doc shalini.
Who rolled her eyes at him evertime he tried to persuade her to help him convinse others that
HE WAS FINE
Raj normally would not have listened to anyone, and would have moved abt and abt
Bt naina's and amin's anger were controlling him impressively.
He tried to persuade other people again and again that he wanted to help them
Bt everyone in his vicinity would become mysteriously deaf whenever he started his,,i----am----fine-----theory…
Well this really annoyed him
And he didn't talk to anyone ,nor did even he once looked at naina when they all arrived in basement at half past 3 in the morning. After two days.
Jai was telling aba thet they still hadn't got any luck in catching the traitor in ishq group
Shahid (the now head of ishq)was trying his level best bt to no avail
News from Kashmir wasn't a moral booster either as both ali and pooja hve litererelly failed uptil now in detecting the source of any unpleasant ness
The only good news remained was, that in kolkutta the attackers have been caught
And a full interrogation with them wwas in process….
Raj was listening all this with great interesat bt he determinetedly kept an i—don't –care—expression on his face.
Ud=rajveer sir what do u think ,lala in attacks mein I mean apne plan mein change laega
He has already started using the unsuccessful attack in kolkutta 4 blamming the government
Raj did not answere,
Jai==raj
He again remains quiet
Jai==now stop being a kid ,and answere
Raj glared at jai then picked up a magazine from betside table and hid his head behind it
Bt he lowered It almost immediately bcoz he could hear all of them laughing
Raj==what u people r laughing abt?? mujhe laga tum logon ko meri zarurat nahin hai
Isiliye meine socha k mein tum ko disturb na karun
That's exactly what u want isn't it
Naina==well in matter of speaking yes
Bt u know mujhe aapki is ability k barre mein pata nahin tha sir
Raj=(plainely irritated now)what ability ?
Ud==sir aapki ability ulti magazines padne ki
It was only then that he realized that the magazine he was clutching was upside down
He flushed pink, started looking to other side and saw basement door being opened by some one
Raj==kaun hai vahan
Huda =sir topic mat badliye
Raj==shutup,koi andar aaya hai,go an check
Huda ,ud and jai rushed there, and started searching
They returned minutes later
Saying
Raj vahan koi bhi nahin hai
He was abt to retaliate when he heard naina's shriek and saw her moving towards him rapidally pointing at the wall behind him
Raj looked in tahe direction just in time to see a giant junk shelf abt to fall on him
He ducked and slide out of the bed at the same time at which the shelf crashed over his bed
He almost drowned in the junk contents falling over his head.
He could hear muffled sounds ,someone was being chased
Raj hoped he got caught
Then he heard a bullet fired and naina's scream
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lov;
dolly (i hope u like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
information on other parts
part2-9 (page1)
part10(page5)
part 11(page6)
part12,13(page7)
part 14(page8)

Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago

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Usha Rani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

superb and it was funny also.quite interesting storyline.thank u sooooo much for this update

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brahmjot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

i'll try my level best to continue as fast as possible

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swati

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

awesome tood do update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap.

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simrit

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

really funny doll specially the ulti magazine one and yes i can well imagine him that way .

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brahmjot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Ff:izharre ishq part 15==
Mind all blank he started moving as fast as possible his limbs to free himself from the junk, ,someone was helping him.
"stop behaving like a miniac so that I can help u ok!!" came jai's viose
Raaj stopped at once and was soon being helped to his feet by jai
He looked around frantically 4 naina
And saw her standing horror fixed in a position suggestive of someone being clubbed on head.
Raj limped towards her
Put an arm around her shoulders and saw in the direction where she was seeing
In a pool of blood lieing there was the person he had seen once before
Well he was the one who was caught at the station, trying to shoot raj
Ud and huda had returned with a stretcher to remove the body
Jai told ud to first check outside whether any one was keeping a watch
B4 moving the body to mortuary
And huda nodded
Jai went after them to return with a sponge and bucket of water to clean the the
The mess of ………..
Naina still quite shocked helped raj on to aba's bed
And sat there beside him
Keeping her head over there shoulder., and holding his hand
Jai returned to clear the junk of almirah
And then he sat with alekh on his bed
Ud and head returned after abt 2 hrs, looking grave
Told jai that all the three persons who had been caught at the station had fled
How no one knows at the interrogation cell
They all sat there in silence
Then aba spoke
"vo jaante hain raj ,vo log jaante hain
Tum kahan ho
Vo jaanta hai vo tumko nahin chodega raj he wont leave u
Raj sat there quietly looking at his stockings
Then he felt a warm hand over his head and heard ami's viose
"ra mein jaanti hoon tum kya soch rahe ho
(she kneeled down,)allah jaante hain tum sahi ho ,tumhari koi galti nahi

Vo insaan jobbhi hai usmein tumhari koi galti nahin hai
Tum bas uske saath the
Raj wasn't really listening ,he was remembering hoe lala ji taught him drive a bicycle,lala ji gifted him his first bike on his acedemic selection
He didn't notice that tears were mixed with sweat on his face
He kept looking down
Jai and others were discussing what to do next ??
They were thinking to move raj and others out of the place as fast as possible
Raj suddenly found his viose and spoke.
Lala ji mujhe marna chahate hain kyunki mein unka ek aisa raaz jan chukka hun jo unko isi vaqt barbaad kar sakta hai
Abhi barbad kar sakta hai
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Love:
dolly
sory 4 being bit late

Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago