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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
hey once again amazing update!!!continue soooon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
ooooooooooooooooooooooooh.....kya song hai.. 😆 😆
i love tht fact when abhi was telling raj about signing those permission letters 😆 😆
ab main ek bat puchu?? next update kab dogi??

😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
hey too good!! well i dint know u were to continue here!

mai to purane post mein dhoond rahi thi!!

wow engagemnt!! too good yaar! cant wait! finally raj and naina will be together!! officially!! 😳 😳 😳

thanks for the udpate!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
hey nice ff dear simply luv reading it..plzz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
hey leo im back to trouble u with my mad doubts and long replies woh actualllly exam khattam hua toh we all went out uske baad i injured my hand badly so i was asked to not streessssss it toooo much(u noe these docs na........paagal kar dete hain)uske baad net crash ho gaya so this has been a fummy month meine tera poora update padha looks realllllllllly good to me aur tune suspense create karna nahi chodha by the way ur writing style has improved pehle se(congrats gor that) 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi arss and friendforever! 😊 😊

I'm so glad u both r back. 😃 😃

Hope u r fine now arss. 😊 😊

And thanx for appreciating my efforts both of u. 😉

And by the way arss who says that I'm troubled by ur long replies ar mad doubts? I really don't. 😊

Alright here's the next update---------------------------
😊 😊

Its morning, two days before RN and AN engagement. Abhi's mom has already arrived. There Raj quickly gets up and gets ready.

As he leaves he meets Abhi on his way and after exchanging plesentaries they both hurry towards the entrance of KMA.

On their way Abhi asks----------Raj, when r they expected to arrive?

Raj says---------at 10, Naina said………………they must be here any time now (He says as he sees his watch showing 10 already.

Just as Abhi and Raj reach the entrance they find Nandini already waiting there.

Also we see a taxi drive in and as it comes to a halt Naina's mom and dad get down.

Raj moves forward (just when Naina comes from behind) and he bends down to toush their feet as they bless him.

Naina smiles as she sees this.

She moves and hugs her parents.

Naina's mom takes Naina's hand and Raj's hand keeping them together she says---------------Main tum donon ke liye bahot khush hoon.

And they all smile.

Its evening Naina is all curled up in her room in her mom's lap as Pooja sits in front of the mirror combing her hair.

Naina's mom asks as she caresses her hair-------------Naina tu khush toh hai naa ?

Naina says---------Maa khush shabd toh kaafi hii nahin hai meri feeling ko zaahir karne ke liye. Rajveer sir is everything for me………………unse acha jeeva—saathi mujhe nahin mil sakta maa…….. 😳 😳 he knows me so well…………….he understands me…………he cares for me………………he loves me…………..aur kya chahiye mujhe? Aur kal hum donon kii sagaai hai…………maa………….yeh sab ek khwaab kii tarah lag raha hai naa? Bas yehi dar lagta hai………………..kii yeh khwaab toot na jaaye! 😭 😭 Zindagi phir se dhoka naa dede………………….Aisa toh nahin hoga naa maa?

Naina's mom reassure her and says--------------Nahin Naina aisa nahin sochte beta………………..itni mushkilon ke baad…………….itni museebaton ke baad tum donon mile ho…………………abb aisa kuch nahin hoga………………abb sirf khusiyaan aur tum donon hoge………….zindagi tumhaare saamne baahein pasaare kahdi hai……………uska haath thaam lo………………………


Naina smiles and feels reassured.

But then she looks at her watch and suddenly jumps up……………Oh! My God! How could I be so careless……………….Mom I need to go…………(And she quickly leaves bidding a goodbye to Pooja and her mom before her mother is able to ask as to where she was going.

After Naina leaves ……………..her mom asks Pooja-----------Pata nahin kahan gayi hogi?

Pooja says wittily as she gets up and goes and sits besides Naina's mom -----------Arre aunty ji aap fikr naa karo……………….Apne SRK ke saath gayi hai………………………..kuch nahin hoga. (And she smiles at Naina's mom). 😆 😆

Kaisa laga? 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
great .ab engagement party kab hogi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey good one but i guess tum itni jaldi engagment nahi karoigi kuch twist toh zarror aayega
😆 aur haaan it was good ki tere koh meri yaad toh aaa thi
aur mein perfectly theek huin even though the doc says beta plz itna streesss mat karo 😕 😕 but do i listen??? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx! 😊 😊

Yaar arss no probs this time I'm not a villain after all 😉

Engagement bhi ho jaayegi yaar wait and watch..........I mean read........ 😆

There Raj is waiting forNaina with his jeep. He is wearing a white shirt and a pair of blue denims (Must be looking awesome naa?).

He is already getting restless as Naina was ten minutes late. And his temper is alredy soaring a little.

Just then Naina comes dressed in a pink Salwaar Kameez and is looking extremely beautiful.

Raj keeps on looking at her, mesmerized by her beauty and features.

Raj whose temper is already back to normal says smiling------------Achcha Naina toh mom ko aaye abhi kuch ghante hii hue aaj hii saari baatein kar logi kya?


Naina says------------I'm sorry Rajveer sir………………..I'm so terribly sorry………………..I just lost track of time.

Raj turns serious and says----------Hmm……………..I see. So some day if u say that u have forgotten me ………………..I won't be surprised!


Naina puts her hand on Raj's mouth to stop him and says------------Aisa kaise ho saktaa hai? Aap toh mere liye sab kuch hain. Mera toh wajood hii aap hain aur mera astitva bhi aap hi se hai……………………Aur phir koi apnii parchaai ko kabhi bhoolta hai kya?

Raj smiles and says-----------------Arre main mazak kar raha tha……………U win……………..I loose…………….abb chalein Cadet Naina ah Singh?

Naina smiles sheepishly and they both sit in the jeep and drive away.

They rech the point 1857. The place is as calm and serene as always.
However this time there is lightning in the sky, indicating that a heavy shower was on its way.

Raj and Naina reach the wishing pillar and they cherish the memories of their first visit to the place together.

Naina then tells Raj-------------Pata hai Rajveer sir……………….when u had gone, I felt so miserable………………..and then I came to this pillar and wished that u come back to my life…………………..this time forever…………………and the next day, Dr. Nandini came to take me to u.

Raj says----------Naina socha toh maine bhi nahiin tha kii main phir doobaara tumse kabhi mil paonga………………but see as life would have it……………..we both r together today, and going to be engaged day after tomorrow.

Just then lightning strikes and there is loud thunder in the sky.

Naina is taken aback and scared she runs into raj's arms and hugs him tight.

Raj is stunned but happy and says softly------------Naina? Kya hua?

Naina says-----------Aap mujhe kabhi chod kar toh nahin jaayenge naa?


Raj says in his usual sweet and charming manner---------Naina tumne hii toh abhi kaha tha kii main tumhaari parchai hoon……………toh phir tumhe kaise chod sakta hoon?

Naina looks up and nods and smiles.

Just then it begins to rain really hard.

Naina is very excited and begins to enjoy the rain. She jumps. Laughs and enjoys the weather nd Raj's company.

While Raj just stands and admires her lovingly and in the background plays the song---------------Tumse hii from JWM.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai
Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai

Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi
Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai
Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi
Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi
Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se jayada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah wafa ka
Chode na chote kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka
Mein Tera sharmaya hoon
Jo mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi
Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi
Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Kaisa laga? 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
hey superb update...put in more dialogues na...n she's still callin sir!!

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