~~Rishtey~~(fan fic...RN) - Page 11

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the jeep drove thru the dry roads of rajasthan...

naina sat at the front seat as huda drove..
and aalekh and yudi occupied the rear seats...

they had been advised to follow a long route by the general..
and it was he who managed to get all of them together at one mission coz each one had a distinct role to play...

ali and pooja's marriage wud serve as a camaflouge..perfectly..

yudi excelled wid gadgets...
naina knew rajveer the most so she wud figure out his whereabouts better ...

aalekh was sharp..and huDa..a helping hand always!!!!

the cold desert air hit naina hard on her face and to her mind came a picture..

Teri yaadein....mulakate...wo raatein ....aur baatein........

Teri sanse woh bahe ab mujhko yaad aaye......

tere bina mera jiya sataye kyu piya,
yado ne teri mujhpe ye jadu kiya re....

she was unable to sort her feelings..

tu ........hai.....kahan.......
tera karu intejaar.......tu mere dil ka karar...
Itna hai aitbaar..........Manungi naa mian bi haar

Mere paas tum sada..........
wapAs aa jao....................

being away from him hurt..it hurt a lot..
she knew he was close to him..
but htis pain was strange..

she knew he had been her mentor ..her frnd..but..
was it bcoz of that night..two years back..??

Wo adao ki ghataye,mere dil ko chu jaye
Pyari ye duniya sari,maine hai tujh pe wari
Dil ne ...mere dil ne tujhse yari ki bazi hari re..




""naina??..""
she hurried away...

she dint know why...
for the past few days in fact the past month..she hadnt been able to get him out of her mind...

she had hurt him so much but that one note from navin ..
the note in the red box changed it all...

it had occured many years back..after which rajveer had left KMA..
but wen today he came back on the last day of their training..
she was reminded of the note again...

naina..meri pyaari naina..
shayad tuhe kabhi yeh pata chlae ki mujpar goli chalane wala koi aur nahi.
mera pyaara dost raj tha..
par naina..usne mujhe jaan se nahi maar hai..
usne mujhe nayi zindagi di hai!!
yeh MERI KHWAHISH THI ...
plzz naina ..mere is dost ko galat mat samajhna!!!
i love u sister..

..

""naina wait!!!"
no she cudnt wait!!!..she cudnt face him...

naina sat down on the bed...she wudnt go down...

a sudden anxiety overcame her...


"oye naina..tu yaha hai???.kyu sabse apna connection katke baithi hai..naina??kya hua..naina ??"

she went up to naina..
"tu ro rahi hai??kyun??"

"mein rajveer sir ka samna nahi kar paungi pooja!!..nahi.."
"naina!!yeh achaanak??..tujhe..."

""naina.."..
it was him...
pooja left the room...naina got down form the bed and stood by the wall..

he solwly walked upto her..and with each advancing step of his..naina retreated backward..

he came near ..
held her by the shoulder..his touch seemed so different..
but ..y??
naina looked up wid tear filled eyes..

"sir.....sir..i ...mujhe....i sir.."

"shhh..no naina!!..agar mein tumhari jagah hota to mafi nahi mangta..yeh karta.."

he hugged her...

naina shut her eyes..and cried..

that night naina lookde stunning at the party..the off shoulder gown in a soft shade of pink..was suiting her wonderfully...

a large tissue rose og a slighlty darker shade of pink was on one shoulder and the shoulder bare showed off the beautiful danglers in her ears..

that night they had danced together..been so close ..felt so close...

she remember hvng goosebumps evrtym rajveer touched her..held her close..

his lips had brushed agnst her cheek once and had sent shivers down her body!!..

wat she felt for him..was it...


SCREEECH!!!!!!!!!!!!

huda pulled the breaks..

"KYA HUAA?"

they had crossed rajasthan and just enterd punjab..
huda suddenly stood up held out his arms..
and breathed in the air!!!

"oye!!!punjab ki khUshboo!!!!!!!!!!kuch alag hi hai!!!"

evryone smiled ..

TRRRINNNG...

naina's phone rang..
"hello.."

"hello..lt.naina singh???"
she knew that voice!!!

""yes speaking"
"hello naina......HUM bol rahe hai...i hope aap bhul nahi gayi hai hume!!"

"AAP??!!!"

THAT WAS TODAYS UPDATE!!!


I hope u all understood that the writings in MAGENTA were glimpses of the past...

naina's last day at KMA...

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"oye phoolan..kaun hai??.."
"chup kar huda..han boliye kaun bol raha hai.."

"areh naina ..hum bol rahe hain..yaad hai..??"
"ABHIMANYU???!!"

SCREEEECCHHHHHHHHHHHH.........

...huda brought the jeep to a screeching hault...

"woh jhabreela geet gataaa ummmh..."
naina had put a hand on his mouth....

"abhimanyu aap???...aap suddenly mein...aap yahan..."
"naina...hum..right...actually u see general bakshi ke do haath hai...unka right hand to rajveer hai..
lekin..unka left hand..i m not boasting but.."

"aap hai.."
"ji han..and ..i dont know if it will help..but..is mission par apke commanding officer hum hai..."

"AAP.. HUMARE COMMANDING OFFICER HAIN???"

SCREEECH!!!!!!!!!!

naina gave him a stern look...

"yes aur hum aap sabse punjab mein hi milenge..kal sharp 8:00 hrs par at point 567N"


they were waiting for him at the decided place and finally abhimanyu arrived ...
"hello evryone..kaise hain aap sab.."
evryone smiled willingly or unwillingly{u kn who dat was...}
"well hum sab yahan aa to gaye hain..but we have to see wat v can do next..
mere paas ek plan to hai..lets c if it works ...come on..."



hey guns and roses
the prince of bamar{i m not too sure of the name} has a message for you..

the prince.. along wid his commandment and wid your princess is waiting for ur coronation..
we wish to see u soon..

the battalion is ready to fight and no fear beholds
u know the venue.. and we will know of it wen u contact the princess at 907246183209!!!


kutte kamine lafange zindabaad

this was the message that was flashed in all local papers ... and thus began their search...

naina cud see her hopes bloom again..

dil karta hai nadaniyan
sehta hai laakhon sitam
raahi chalna hai ab tere sang yuhi...
tujhe mein dhoondhta phiru
meri har chahat hai tu...

The next two weeks were out of their nightmares for the group..

On one hand they were waiting for a reply to their message ..
and on the other they were looking out at a few places where landlords reported odd behaviours of their tenants...

and till date there had been five instances in wich the tenants were civilians either innocent or engaged in some petty crime..

And six such evidence in the two weeks wich suggested that the tenant occupying the house was none other than MAJOR RAJVEER SINGH SEKHAWAT..

but each time it had been the same story.. just slightly altered at each instance..

Naina and the young group of soldiers were sitting at pooja's home..the wedding had been their biggest camouflage..

It seemed that they were here to attend only the wedding ..

However pooja and ali had not been involved actively in the mission but they were no doubt the greatest helping hand..

now this dedicated team cud only wait...

TRRRRINNNG!!!!!!!!!
"hello...ABHIMANYU??? KYA???HAN..HUM AA RAHE HAIN..."

"kya hua naina...?"

"huda aalekh yudi...hume abhi nikalna hoga..abhiminya ko ek aur khabar mili hai..chalo.."

they set off..naina still hoping that this instance too dint turn out to be like their last encounters..

they met abhimanyu at a set location..and planned to set off.
just b4 they boarded the jeep..naina held abhimanyu back..

"naina..v dont have time..kya hua??"
"abhimanyu is baar bhi kahin..like last time.."
"naina..tum ek soldier ho...aur ek sipahi kabhi himmat nahi harta.."
"mein.."

abhimanyu held her hand..but anot her hand came to rst on naina's shoulder..she looked up..

"naina!!..huM akhir tak ladenge..tu akhir tak ladegi..samjhi.!
mein hun..kaidi hai..hum sab hai tere saath..hum sir ko wapas laenge.."

naina hugged huda and held out a hand to aalekh too...

they thn joined all hands and let out a shout..
the jeep started off..