PERFECT ENDING....MY VERSION..[SHORT FIC] - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey too good pl continue soon
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huda led her towards him n his eyes was follown her as she neared him...
huda then left them 2getr n went off elegantli...
raj then thanked him wth a smile n then turned to naina....
as soon she reached his place as if preplanned,
the lights became dim n all the couples started 2 dance all aound them as thei wer in d centre podium...
then raj extended his hand to her n guestured her 4 a dance by tilting his head slightli ....
she shyli accepted by placing her hand in his.... they den startd 2 dance... which wud seem like eternity
they were lost in each othrs arms.... no sense of d surroundings...
they felt lik they were in heaven n they wer d onli ppl there....
n dei dint notice dat evri1 present der had stopped dancing n wer nw gazing at these lovli coupl....
they sureli were a beauty togetr 4 evribdi eyes 2 behold.....
then suddenli raj whispered smthng in her ears ..." i love u naina" he told those simple words in the most memorable way dat she almost knew no bounds of her happiness... even though she knew dat he luvd her , it was the 1st time he realli told her this...she then blushed n told him..." me too... i love u too....sss" ther was a pause... which he filled by sayn "raj"... n she smiled n tld "i love u too raj ".... n then he tuk a red rose 4m his coat poket.... n xtended it 2 her... he dint actualli giv it 2 her but still held on to it... she was amused n gave him a 'wat is dis luk' ...
he then did something n the rose opened n ther alas .. wer 2 beautiful diamond ring in the shape of 'R' and 'N' !!!! she was overjoyd n he then bent 2wards her told" wud u like 2 be mine 4ver ?? will u marry me.naina??" n she nodded a beautiful yyes...mixed wth shyness n immense limitless love....
n dat perfect moment confetti fell on them n dey hadnt evn realised dat 4 a long time nw, dat der was a spotlite on them !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey too good

pl continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u ... evribdi...will post d rest at nite !! 😊
Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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does any1 wants me to continue ???? 😕 .... plzzzzzzzzzzzz do post ur comments.... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue i m very eager 2 listen the whole storry........... plzzzzzzzzz
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sure yar.... i will post 4 u...........thank u........it might take some time... plzzzzzzz wait....... 😊
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i think u will post before 9:30.....................
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well it all seemed 2 perfectli planned... but who was d 1 who planned it... well not raj but .... shalini , suriji n lolita mam !!!!! dey wer the 1s behind all this romantic setup !! n then ther were other things gng on ..😉
lolita mam seeing all this romantic scene jus lukd at suriji n told..." suriji...aapko yeh sab dekhke kya sujh raha hai??" suriji.." ji lolitaji...woh mujhe ..mujhe.." then she told... feeln desperate wth his srtetchn of words.... " mujhe kudh hi karna padega n tuk out a small box out of her purse n showed it 2 him....he then shyli tuk out another box 4m his poket n opend it.... it contained a beautiful ring n her box too had 1... then both the couples exchanged their rings...
raj slid onto naina's slender fingers the 'R' ring n she inturn slid the 'N' ring onto his finger symbolising dat they belonged to each other 4m nw....well they dance on till d nite falls n all will stay like dat in each others arms 4 lifetimes to cum........ 😍


meanwhile... huda iwas dis time truli in love wth a new gal whom he had met on one of his outings n was seriousli comitted 2 her..😳n as 4 aalekh , he too was engaged to neelu... yudi was planning 2 confess his feelings 2 dr.shalini but thought he wud do it later ... atleast after confirming her feelings 4 him n completeing atlest 1 successful mission in his life n becoming a BRAVE MAN !! 😉 n as 4 ali n pooja.... it was pooja who proposed 2 him... n ali shyli accepted .... 😳As 4 Abhi... he had found his love too.. it was nandhini... yes...raj's x-girl frnd... she had cum 2 KMA as a faculti n had helped naina in her pursuit to save raj along th Abhi... she had realised dat Raj n naina wer made 4 each other n her true love had been always so near to her but had never realised it... it was abhi.. Abhi had alwais likd her but nw she too had fallen in love wth him... true love... jus as they say .. the person whom u like may nt b the one destined 4 u ... but to the person who is destined 4 u... u r sure to fall in love...true love... jus as Raj was d 1 for naina...jus as evri beautiful pair in d academi wer 4 eachother.....😳😳
dey all had enjoid dat nite n hoped dat better things wud happen to them 4m then on....coz life is all abt hope.............hoping 4 the best......😃 😍

[to b contd.... 1 last chota update left.....] 😊
Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago
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ok when u r going 2 continue tht.................

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