PERFECT ENDING....MY VERSION..[SHORT FIC]

hai evri1...im a bit new to this forum... so i dunno wetr v can post it here....🤔Aniways...its a short fic...i wrote after dat depressing trial episode.... n its my first attempt at writing something... so there might be many mistakes... so plzzzzzz pardon me 4 all the mistakes n do post ur comments on this....both +ve n -ve r welcum...😊

then wen naina reached her rum...ther was a parcel lyn der on her bed... it simpli said..." 4 Lieutenant .naina ahhh .singh wth.......love....." she read it n was blushn immenseli.... she knew who it was ...n in d parcel she found a red sari wth black sequins stuuded in them ... wth a black border.... it was a bit shiny.... on the whole jus 1 word cud describe it....beautiful !!!! she tuk them in her hand n hugged it.....she caressed it.... n suddenli unknowingli ..a tear had dropped 4m her eyes... she was happi , happi like nevr b4... n dose wer tears of joy....
now the final moment had come.... alll wer gathered in the beautiful banquet hall... as expected decorated with red roses....white roses.... mistle hoe leaves which added the much needed green to those beautiful roses.... red n white satin drapes wer all ovr the place... placed estheticalli....on the whole it was lukn lik paradise..." romantic paradise" if 1 may say so.... then der wer all the male cadets ,as usual in formals... but 4 a change thei had worn all colored suits... like pastel green, pink,n ther smart colors... n all wer lukn dashn.... there was a centre podium or 2 sai a slightli elevated area cicular area.... n as expected our raj is standn der eagerli lukn at the staircase.... he is in dark black suit... white shirt n a black satin neck tie....[imagine huda's outfit in freshers ball]... n well he was the centre of attractn!! not 2 sai coz he lukd smashn n ohhhh so handsome in those stylish outfits n wth his immpeccable style of caryn it off wth ease !!

THANK U !! I WILL POST THE REST 2MRW.... 😊

Wonderful fic yaar.Good job. 👏

Originally posted by: cutipie.niki

THANK U !! I WILL POST THE REST 2MRW.... 😊

i will be waiting...😃

Great 👏 👏 👏 Can just imagine 😳

wow!! so sweet....its so cool and a wonderful fic....will wait for the remaining part.....

tht was such a cool one...gr8..cont soon

now there he stood ...
his eyes searchn eagerli 4 d one he lovd so desperateli ...dat he cud tak any blame 4 her....
n der ....wen he seemed to b lost in his own thoughts ... d much awaited persn had arrived ...n he was brought bak 2 reality bi the commotion there.... n wen he saw...all were wide mouthed .... he felt funny seeing their expressions... n lukd at the direction of thier eyes n alas !! his mouth too fell open !!! he wasnt in dis world 4 a moment or so.... the scene he saw... he cudnt believe his eyes... she was der.... or 2 say an angel was der.... or a godess of love .... she lukd heavenli.... a red halter blouse , long black n red danglers in her delicate ears... her beutiful sari fallig till d floor almost touchn d ground...her black high heels, her hair let loose....and a few strands fell on her face as the wind blew gentli.... god !!! he jus melted der.....then he finalli came 2 his senses when their eyes met... she was almost laughn at him 4 he lukd funny wth his mouth wide open !! but then she herself was takn aback by his stunning luks...4 she has never seen him this way... nt even in freshers ball dance... this time he was altogetr different but more better or 2 say at his best..... nw she felt an odd feeln... nw she wasnt lukn at him as his mentor . her teacher , her superior officer but jus as Raj...the 1 whom she madli luvd n wud go any extent 4 him.....
well the whole romantic thoughts r brokn by claps n announcement 4 the ball 2 begin... n by now evri1 had alreadi knwn abt their love story n cheered 4 them... n then huda came 2 her... she was a bit shocked or scared 4 a moment thinkn dat he wud ask her 2 dance wth him.... but our huda, smiled at her reaction as though he understood her fear n told, "oye phoolan ghabra mat.... mai to tujhe sir tak escort karne ke liye aaya tha..." she gave him a smile n went along wth him....