PERFECT ENDING....MY VERSION..[SHORT FIC] - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nw..... actualli mi comp is hanging up in b/w.... i wantd to update it b4 9.30pm... as u told...😊

THEN AFTER 7 YRS.... our dear "ghost bana dost"[as many of our frens here call him !!] narrates ...that dis is happenin after 7yrs n happenin in raj n naina 's household...
voices r heard in a livn rum .... naina shouting" tweeti , navi....!! what d hell r u dng Huh!! jumping on d sofa ...!! " kids , Navi or naveen 6 yrs ol n tweeti or Nikita 4 yrs ol ..." mama its a goal !!
" naina " so wat ?? wat if its a goal ??!! u shud remember its a army officer's house n nt 1 but 2 r der !!!"
kids" mama !! wat r u sayn Huh!! jus luk der !!" n wen naina turns ...
to her horror finds raj himself jumping on another sofa ... on the other side ...!!!!!!!
she dint notice him coz he was behind her .... but nw she was in a shock !!
n he ... he was too engrosed in the match to hear their conversatn !!! he was joyfulli cheern 4 brazil's match winning gaol in the fifa world cup .....!! she wantd 2 shout at him but then was 4 som wierd reason smiled at his cheerful , happy face n wat Huh? joined him on his sofa !!! 😳😳jus then he realised her near her n hugged her out of happiness n all d 4 cheered happili .... 4 brazil's victory... their VICTORY ..... VICTORY OVER ALL OF LIFES HARDSHIPS WHICH THEY HAVE DEALT 2GTER WILL CONTINUE 2 DO SO....!!! ....😃
CAMERA ZOOMS OUT..... OF THE LIVN ROOM 2 THE ENTRANCE N BAK ...OUT 2 THE GATE.... N THEN FOCCUS ON THE NAME PLATE WCH TOLD COL.RAJVEER SINGH SHEKAWAT N MAJ. NAINA SINGH ALUWALIA SHEKAWAT..... [SHE HADNT CHANGED HER SURNAME BUT ADDED HIS TOO......]...........
THE END !!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzzzzz evri 1 ... post ur comments... as i told b4... +ve or - ve comments r welcum... since its my 1st effort ... plzzz pardon all my mistakes... thank u .... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
wonderful 👏 ...really wonderful... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
wowo nice ff 👏 👏 👏

but i wanna cry for huda 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
really very nice.you shud giv some ideas to the makers. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

wish we had a happy ending to RN luv story.

Edited by riti@infy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing.. 👏
lovely... 👏
wonnderful... 👏
mindblowing... 👏
awesome... 👏
superb... 👏

i cant say anything else...the epilogue was simply MINDBLASTING... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot evribdy.......!!! 😳 ..... but i realli expected more replies.... 😭 😭 2 say very frankly..... guess ...it wasnt up to the mark.... anyways.... thanks to evribdy who appreciated it n read it..... thanks again !!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ yoginisahakari
thanx a lot yar... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ candee
thanks a lot candee..... i will sureli try n keep upto ur hopes..... 😳

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