When Capt. Rajveer met Ekta’s men........ - Page 3

Originally posted by: S a r a h

Kunal is Yash TOnk from Kahin Kisi Roz, Shriyaa

and well done khyatii 👏 .... I was delighted to read your post that not only we but stars also get confused with characters.......... I liked Bajaj & Mihir confusion then that Paro and Sujal 👏 👏

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thnx sarah...😊

Originally posted by: lrl_01

hey its really v.funny 😆

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

kyati awsome 😆
one more time 😆

Thanks!! I'll try and attempt something similar, yet different soon!!!

Originally posted by: sweetncute

Awesomeeeeeeeee.......lekin Kyati....watching K serials instead of studying and do u watch LRL..... 😡 LRL ke TRp's vaise bhi kuch khaas nahin hai....tum nahin dekhoge toe aur bhi kam hojayenge.... 😉 aur padhai....karte bhi ho ya nahin 😉 haan....whose Kunal????
Swapna-Mobile 😳

Hum pagal hain jo Kekta ke shows pe time barbaad karenge??? My mom watches Kyunki.... (though only sometimes) and some of my class-mates do watch such K-Crap (Just class-mates, not friends😆). Aur LRL ko mis karne ki galati hum kaise kar sakte hain? I do watch it regularly. TRPs khaas ho ya na ho, LRL to humare liye khaas he rahega naa😳. I do study, just 1/2 hr TV viewing that too while having dinner........Aur rahi Kunal ki baat......'Kya hoga Nimmo Ka' ka Kunal Sehgal.....Ejaz Khan😊........Thanks for the sweet comment!!!

Originally posted by: mitali_s

that was soooooo hilarious...khyati yaar 👏

one more time

Thanks.......I'll try my best😊

Originally posted by: lrl_biggest_fan

Very good!!! 😆 Keep it up!!!!Kuch aise aur bhi likhte rahiye.This makes me realise how crap Kekta serials are!!!!!!What say guys???I simply loved ur writing.Write something like this with ekta's female chracters also plzzzzzzzz!!!!!!

I'm glad you liked my work.........I'll try to make you guys laugh again for sure😳

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

superb......amazing dialogues and gr8 work 👏 sabse best hai ki kashish ka dil captain rajveer par aa gaya 😳

Vo to Real 'n' Reel life fact hai he.....Right?😉

Originally posted by: sarah_23

😆 lol...that was awesome....keep it up...

Thanks!!!

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

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great work khyati... almost fell off my chair when i read this... 😆 😆 ...yeah, & i do hv d same question as swapna... huis kunal? 😕
but anyway... i wonder wat Capt. Rajveer wud say wen he read this... woh to yehi wish karega ki use roz Mogambo ki shakal dekhne ko mile, but in sab logon ki nahi... 😆

Thanks for the appreciation. I hope you weren't hurt while falling-off the chair😆!!! Kunal is Ejaz Khan from 'Kya Hoga Nimmo Ka'. And yes, abhi to Captain sirf Balaji men se mila hai, Balaji-Bahu-Brigade se meeting fix karvane ko sab request kar rahe hain......Sochiye tab kya hoga apne Captain Sahab ka😆

Originally posted by: S a r a h

Kunal is Yash TOnk from Kahin Kisi Roz, Shriyaa

and well done khyatii 👏 .... I was delighted to read your post that not only we but stars also get confused with characters.......... I liked Bajaj & Mihir confusion then that Paro and Sujal 👏 👏

😆

Sarah di app bhi sahi ho lekin hum 'Kya hoga Nimmo Ka' ke Kunal ki baat kar rahe the.......Dekha!! Yahan bhi confusion.....Vaise I'm glad my post made you feel delighted.😳

Originally posted by: togepe30

wow.......too cool yaar.......it was hilarious...... 😆 and the others r right,......plzzzzzz continue with the female actors too.....and gurry ....he he he...lolzzzzzzz.......aur mr.walia ki to watt laga di...he shud really lose weight....motu kahin ka

Thanks!!! I'll try and continue it for sure.......😳

Originally posted by: cool_subha2006

It is so hilarious.I liked the one with sujal a lot.

Thanks.....I'm happy that you liked it!!!

Originally posted by: angeliclooks_me

dat was amazing khyati di! 👏 t'was damn hilarious! 😆 i luvddd da sujal n jai walia parts 😆 plzzz do continu dear 😉

So Sujal and Walia are a big hit here!!! I hope Bani and Kashish steal the show for the female's part.........Thanks!!!!

Originally posted by: kiran87

I loved it Khyati!
Really wonderful and really hilarious!
Keep it going!

Thanks!!!! I'll try for sure😊

Originally posted by: angelic eyes

its really well written khyati.. 👏 👏 👏
i simply luved it.. 👏 👏 👏
i love ur posts dear they always make me laugh.. 👏
keep up the gud work dear.. 👏 👏 👏

🤗I'm glad it made you laugh di!!!!!

Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

Captain Rajveer.........Though a bit confused but surely the best prevailing character on T.V. screens today........very realistic..............jab inhe ek din ke liye, K-Serials ke heros ko train karna pada to pata hai kya hua??? I know your imagination cannot go that much wild but phir bhi, try!!!

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Koi baat nahi, do not fear when Khyati is here.....

Rajveer: Attention!! Aaj aap sabko ek din ke liye ek army cadet ki tarah treat kiya jayega. So be ready because........(Just then he sees Jai Walia standing lean).........Cadet Walia!!!

Jai: Yes Sir!

Rajveer: Stand straight!

Jai: I can't Sir!!

Rajveer: What?? Why???

Jai: My tummy doesn't allow this.......

Everyone else starts laughing.

Rajveer: Stop it guys! And you Cadet Walia......Lose some weight please.

Shiv: Sir!

Rajveer: Yes Cadet Shiv Kapoor!!! What's your problem?

Shiv: Sir my wife is going to die soon.

Rajveer: What? I mean what happened?

Shiv: Sir meri kundali me dosh hai!!! (He starts crying)

Rajveer: Kisme kya hai???? (He gets a bit confused)

Just then Karan speaks up…

Karan: Sir don't worry, rote hue aadhe words samajh nahi aate iske! Aap drill continue keejiye ye theek ho jayega.

Rajveer: So you're interested?

Karan: Of course Sir!! Aaj to mai vaise he bahut khush hun na, jo kahoge, karunga.

Rajveer: Vo kyun?

Karan: Sir! (with full emotions) Meri Nandini mujhe mil gayi hai Sirrrr!!!

Rajveer: Ab ye kaun hai??Hey bhagwaan!! Cadets….Back to your positions fast.

Everyone gets back……….Anurag Basu's cell rings……

Rajveer: What the hell is this Cadet Basu???

Anurag: I'm sorry Sir, just a minute……(to the caller)……..Ha Prerna bolo….Kyaa??? Mr. Bajaj papa ban ne wale hain?? Phir se?? Kyaa??? Tum maa nahi ban ne wali?? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha Prerna……..(Rajveer takes the cell from him and disconnects the call)

Rajveer: Meri class me indiscipline ki koi jagah nahi hai. Class ke baad cell le jaana.

Anurag gets angry and runs to hit Mihir who he by mistake considers Mr. Bajaj.

Anurag: Mai tumhe nahi chodunga Mr. Bajaj!!!

Rajveer: Arrrrrrrrrr………Cadet Basu…..Ye Cadet Bajaj nahi Cadet Virani hain, leave him. Aapki punishment ye hai ki aap 5 Km ki daur lagayenge ye bulky sac uthakar. Move it!!

Mihir: Thanks Captain Rajveer!! Aapne meri jaan bacha le. Aap mere ghar pe bhi aa jaiye naa…(whispers)…Wahan Tulsi meri bahut jaan khaati hai……..aur vaise bhi, Viranis ki daughters me se koi na koi to aapke liye perfect match hogi he!!!

Rajveer: Mujhe koi match nahi chahiye apne liye. Aap sab drill complete kar lo yehi bahut hai!!

Just then Kamal enters searching for Parvati Bhabhi.

Kamal: Bhabhi……bhabhi…….

Rajveer: Cadet Aggarwaal!! Ek to aap drill me late hain upar se apni position lene aur sorry kehne ki bajay aap chilla chilla kar disturbance create kar rahe hain??Aur ye kya??? Aapne pee rakhi hai??

Kamal: Kaun kambakht bardasht karne ko peeta hai…..hum to isliye peete hain taaki
Parvati bhabhi ki shakal wali us Jaanki ko bardasht kar sakein!!

Rajveer: Haan to vo bhi to bardasht karna he hua naa!!!

Kamal: (extremely dramatically) Mai jaa raha hun!!

Rajveer: To aaye he kyun the?? (Kamal goes away) So Cadets, aaj hum shooting practice karenge!!

Just then Sujal enters the scene on a wheel chair.

Sujal: (Dharmendra style) Captaaiiinn……..

Rajveer turns back.

Rajveer: Now who are you old man?

Sujal: Mai old nahi young man hun!!

Rajveer: To ye saadu-look kyun dhaaran kiya hua hai? Tum bhi drill join karna chahte ho?

Sujal: Mai drill-wrill nahi karta. Seedha challenge karta hun!

Rajveer: Amazing!! Tum mujhe challenge kar rahe ho? Good!! Commendable guts!! But mai barabari me vihwaas rakhta hun.

Sujal at one stands-up from the wheel-chair!!

Sujal: Mai taiyaar hun.

Rajveer: Bravo!! But tumhari taangein achanak kaise theek ho gayi??

Sujal: Ekta-booti khakar.

Rajveer: Wao!! Seems like a magical medicine!

Sujal: Tumhe chahiye?

Rajveer: Haan! In cadets ne mere sar me dard kar rakha hai!!!

Sujal: Ye lo….(he steps foreward to give Rajveer the medicine, just when Kunal enters the scene…. )

Kunal: Nahi Sirrrrr……………

Rajveer: Kaise kaise namoone bhare pade hain yahan? Ab tumhe kya ho gaya?

Kunal: Isme zeher hai Sir!! Ye Sujal aapko maarna chahta hai!!!

Rajveer: Mujhe? Lekin kyun?

Kunal: Kyunki….

Rajveer: Kyunki……

Kunal: Kyunki……

Karan:……..Saas bhi kabhi bahu thiiiiiiii………yehi naa?

Rajveer: Oh just stay quite Cadet Virani!

Kunal: Sir kyunki iski wife Kashish ka dil…….

Rajveer: Kya hua unke dil ko???

Lakshya: Sir unka dil aap par aa gaya hai!!!

Rajveer: What????????? God!!! Mai pagal ho jaunga!!! Heeeeeeeeeeellllllllllppppppppppp!!!!!!!

Aur humara bechara Rajveer behosh ho jaata hai.

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So you see, how dangerous can be this Ekta brigade???😆 Do comment……….I hope you liked it!!!!