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Posted: 10 years ago
Looking toward to it Daya :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Watson! I'm reading your chap 16 at and well I got to this part about a tattoo and I had to say: Let's find Nemo!🤣

Edited by .LionHeart. - 10 years ago
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Hey Watson! Guess whose back? *taps cane on ground*

Mmhmm, I've finally read chapter 16 and 17 and jeez were they ever short *gives you evil eye*

Tease.

And as always...bits and pieces with you! Enough to hook and lure but not enough to answer my many many questions. But, isn't that additional charm of this FF or of any FF...discovering the unknown. So yes, as always I shall be impatiently patient

Chapter Sixteen:

Okay first I have to start off with the mention of what happened during Baaji's night of drunk fun. LMAO I am still laughing at the thought of it...and you know what? I can totally picture this happening haha. Well done with that...and well I'd like to know more about that tattoo, Watson. Do enlighten us soon :P

Ah, I loved the instant friendship that strikes up between Haya and Nakusha. Of course, I love even more how (even though they don't know it yet) their lives all connect in some way. The beauty of twists and turns in life...thanks to fate eh! I have expectations that this newfound friendship brings things more forward for the story of that hermit and our doc!

On that note, there is this mystery woven around Dutta's life and (as much as I hate to admit it) I love it. His life after the wedding is definitely shaping up to be something else! Maybe unexpected, maybe expected. I mean, it did sound like he'd had a plan when he'd made the decisions he made (whatever those were...waiting to know more there) But, the thing with his character is that he's always had difficulty seeing the whole picture or getting the all the angles and perspectives beforehand. So could this mess be something of his own making? I think so! Things never do go as planned, right?

Haya's reference to the hermit troubled friend and then the present showing of a man on guard and distant definitely is very telling. Clearly, this man has gone through things and it's caused great deal of grief in some way. Things that has his walls up and defenses high...and why? Now isn't that the big question. Why has it all happened...why is he different...guarded now? Hmmm

Perhaps the man should learn about that word...you know...communication < this is his problem...the lack of it...

You know, regardless of his distant behaviour/words, I love how they are still in sync! Meant to be...it's what the red string is all about! He knows whatever Naku is saying about her walking away from her wedding there is more...because he knows her. And that's something considering they've only met up a handful of times...

Chapter Seventeen:

This chapter was all about the unravelling of layers while piling on more LOL . The past does explain things but where it may ease some things it doesn't necessarily set things right. Maybe just puts things into a different light.

And where Naku gets answers to things she'd seen or dealt with in the past, there is also a lot of confusion floating about. Sure she has the answers to a lot of things about her, Sheila, her family...but having the answers and accepting them are completely different. Working through what she's always believed and with what she's learned and then finding a middle ground to accept it enough to move forward. Perhaps this where Dutta is needed. But then again, the man has his own issues to work through!

You know what I truly found amusing. She walked away from a marriage in the end heeding the advice of a man (even though technically her father - DNA sense only) she doesn't know. And then she hadn't listened when Dutta had said the same. Of course, there is a whole different set of emotions revolving around each person. Sure her father is a man who's made plenty of horrible mistakes but I suspect the one thing the man asked of her and his reasoning is something she already wanted and knew. So, was it much of a stretch that she did end up following through on his advice? I think not. As for when Dutta said the very same, the situation had been different. There was anger and a feeling of helplessness (both were in no situation to do anything about their feelings for a wedding band stood in the way) and on top of that...I do believe we discussed Naku has a tendency to go up the wall irrationally...and not think straight under duress.

Well, excellent chapters. I rather enjoyed getting back into this FF. I hope you'll UD like yesterday! LOL
I can't wait to unravel the entire story! It's getting good...and we're getting close to learning more about Dutta's side of things...looking forward to it!

Now me will catch you soon! Laters!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .LionHeart.

Watson! I'm reading your chap 16 at and well I got to this part about a tattoo and I had to say: Let's find Nemo!🤣


I was dying to see you reach that part! LOL>
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi naila, finally on this ff. reading all chapters , esp those unread. really good work. please continue like this 4 ever.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CUTE_SAPNA

hi naila, finally on this ff. reading all chapters , esp those unread. really good work. please continue like this 4 ever.



Well Hello Cute, or rather I shall call you Cutie-pie henceforth, ok?
Pleased to know you're enjoying it! Thank you. Hopefully it lives up to expectations.
Continue forever? Oh my, forever is a long time, that's a lot of writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Daya-Lionheart-Joey-BabyKangeroo-Sherlock-And the million other names I have for you... I will be responding to our rainbow tonight, hopefully!

Got caught up as you already know :) also promise I will get down to some writing!

Sincerely,
Watson.
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pls ud

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