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Iridescence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
great update

Thanks aamirkhanfan. Glad you liked it 😃

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Iridescence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
ganpat bas... poor nakku but nakku question waiting for dutta answer

Yes, my feelings exactly about Ganapat! Oh he'll answer it and some other things and i don't think you'll like it😆😉 stay tuned for that :P

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
I ,me and Myself.. will be back.. me bakkk..
Hiya hammie! me finally getting around to annotating...I need to start doing this as they're posted...might make it easier instead of doing them all at the end :P

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Chapter: 16
hi sher ka dil! gimmee high five!.. sorry a bit late.. thing is I was busy annotating and then doing my SS.. I wanted to get it out of the way.. so I could read your UD in peace.. at last.
hiya-five-A! 😆 No problemo...you are forgiven because I well ummm was late to all three of your latest uds and well you were nice...nice? about it...hmmm...
nice start.. Dutta reasons why he wishes to protect her , spares her the news that her assailant was her father. Sometimes giving someone .. awful news can be unnerving.. so Dutta throwing her off track by mentioning Morey.. giving it to her in bits...haaahaa.. the slips from Dutta in his clumsy effort to conceal the truth about her dad..
he is out of his element around her. He needs to accept that he likes her and do something about it...more than just protect her ;)
Naku... feeling pretty! and Dutta feeling stupid .. I am enjoying this bit pappy.. ohhh it's like pulling a tooth... out! "he sold you... Ganpat"...well Ganpat's track record was interesting to read..you outlined his character very well pappy.. and such a sweet consoling embrace between the husband and wife.
Lol oh the slips of his tongue at the most telling, no? Revealing his most inner thoughts...but just you wait...without a straight out confession Naku is going to give him hell😉😛
Glad you like their chemistry and connection...
So what an interesting transaction.. Ganpat puts Naku for sale and... mind you Dutta already had the love eye for Naku... so good deal.. it's not that she was stuffed down Dutta's throat..
He did...he was smitten from first sight not that he realizes it or anything :P Gadha!
Oh he came out of this sticky one quite easily.. well easier then he thought ..but then Naku keeping a sane head over her shoulders contributes to Dutta telling her the truth she craved for.. who was her attacker? and Dutta giving her the whys too, made it a very interesting chapter.. thanks papsi do continue waiting for the next one.. much love ,as ever yours..ummh hammie..
Yes lots answered and lots not and yet there is so much more to come...wait till you see what suddenly hits Naku...thoughts that will definitely put Dutta on his toes😛

Thanks so much for reading and commenting...love reading your thoughts always!!!

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Iridescence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
fab update daya... know ganpat and morey dealing but tasha conversation is fab...

Hey Ranju,

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: mirage123
hi dayafab ud...dutta gave out the truth naku knew ganpat was leeach but fell to another level down.now that she know truth 😳...dutta is vouch higher not just luv its respect too..ud soon

hey mirage123,

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD. Naku knows the truth now and Dutta's finding somethings about himself and her in the process but wait she's not quite through with her questions or throwing in a spanner...let's see what I can do with these two...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
awesumly toouuuching part...nakkkus step father is ba$#@%$ ...and more also the same...loved the tasha convo...continue sooon

Hey Usha,

Thank you so much. Glad you liked the UD. Yes, I agree about Naku's step father...and as for TaSha convo...well it's not over quite yet so let's wait and see what she has in store for him or vise versa ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI LionHeat

Loved the UD poor Nakku gets to know that her so called step father sold her but she whats to know why did he marry her why did her what to help her I wonder what he will tell her. The whole covn between them was really nice Pls ud really soon

Thanks as always take care now

Hey fassbender!

Thank you glad you liked the UD. Lol well he's not exactly sure much about what he feels so he's surely not going to confess...but let's see what happens next...glad you liked the convo between them!!!

Originally posted by: sona89
Hi Daya
Awesome UD...Ganpat crime need to be narrated ..Dutta did well by telling Naku...He like her ...love her ...He would be made to confess by Naku ...stubborn girl for mule

Hiya Sona!!

Thank you! Glad you liked the UD. You're right he definitely feels something for her and it's not just some friendship kind of feeling but sigh he is our gadha so naturally he's too confused to really understand in fully...let's see what the stubborn girl does...hehe I already know :P

Originally posted by: jedy25
hi dayasuperb ud...ganpat was no else an evil than morey..deserve to be blasted..feeling of realization on dutta is seeping in..naku is stronger with dutta with her now..ud soon😊

Hi Jedy,

thanks for reading and commenting! Definitely he is realizing more than he expected...and he's confused about it...he cares and he wants to give her everything and yet the word love doesn't factor into his mind...so where does that lead them? Guess we'll have to wait and see...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi curly locks
Hiya Nakusha!

Loved the ud...storm before after it breeze blew...dutta made confession to naku...
And not the kind we all want😆

Ganpat deserve lot more ...he treated her like commodity ...that dirt morey still behind naku😡
yes and don't you worry our sher will take care of him when the time comes!

Dutta admitted lot many thing to himself..He care for her like her...is he scared to admit he loves her...
He does but you're right he's scared...and you know what Naku is determined...to get an answer...you'll see...now it's her turn to give and ultimatum .

Naku daring question why me? I want to know too why naku why not many of beauties on our forum😆
Everyone wants to know...and yet I think I might be a tad evil 😆

Loved reading every word..ud soon
Thank you for reading and commenting...will UD as soon as I can...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: Sushmita75
Read the whole thing in one go. BeUtifuly written. Pls go on

Hiya Sushmita!

Welcome to the forum and thank you for reading it. I'm flattered you went through it all in one go and liked it :D thanks so much ...will UD soon :)

Originally posted by: uwith
hi dayaawesome ud...dutta & naku convo awesome highlighted naku's past ,dutta's intention ...his feeling towards naku..pls ud soon...regards uvi😊

Hiya Uvi!!

Thanks! Glad you liked it. Lots to come in the upcoming uds...he's going to have to sort through his mind after what naku says to him :P

Originally posted by: dilse14
hi dayawonderful udhey dutta you spoke about naku's pastyou gave her shoulder to cryyou deserve her ...she deserve youcoz its love btwn you too😳😳ud soon

Hello Dilse!!!

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD.

My my dilse you're quite the poet :P I loved your comment and you're right they're meant for each other now they just have to accept it verbally! And TALK! Phew lets see how this goes...