FF: A Twisted Fate (TaSha) - Page 54

ATF

Chapter: 16

hi sher ka dil! gimmee high five!.. sorry a bit late.. thing is I was busy annotating and then doing my SS.. I wanted to get it out of the way.. so I could read your UD in peace.. at last.

nice start.. Dutta reasons why he wishes to protect her , spares her the news that her assailant was her father. Sometimes giving someone .. awful news can be unnerving.. so Dutta throwing her off track by mentioning Morey.. giving it to her in bits...haaahaa.. the slips from Dutta in his clumsy effort to conceal the truth about her dad..

Naku... feeling pretty! and Dutta feeling stupid .. I am enjoying this bit pappy.. ohhh it's like pulling a tooth... out! "he sold you... Ganpat"...well Ganpat's track record was interesting to read..you outlined his character very well pappy.. and such a sweet consoling embrace between the husband and wife.

So what an interesting transaction.. Ganpat puts Naku for sale and... mind you Dutta already had the love eye for Naku... so good deal.. it's not that she was stuffed down Dutta's throat..

Oh he came out of this sticky one quite easily.. well easier then he thought ..but then Naku keeping a sane head over her shoulders contributes to Dutta telling her the truth she craved for.. who was her attacker? and Dutta giving her the whys too, made it a very interesting chapter.. thanks papsi do continue waiting for the next one.. much love ,as ever yours..ummh hammie..