FF: A Twisted Fate (TaSha) - Page 57

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ATF

Chapter: 17

hi sher ka dil! gimmee high five!.. oyee sun Baji rao.. you could have done this UD earlier but you were up to chatter! chatter !chatter.. kitna bolti hai tum.. me sighing..

firstly paps.. I love the siggy.. fantastic! creates the mood.. how talented you are sherdil! However do I get one too .. a new siggy? humm? reason.. season's greetings!

Love the start.. Naku always in a situation where she is left wondering if he loves her or loves her not? her general bashfulness about being vocal on the question.. do you love me? have you begun to love me?.. is not the done thing.. but have to say Dutta's awkwardness on his feelings towards her other than perhaps getting her out of a sticky situation! makes it worse.. but this is what makes their relationship interesting how will Dutta face what he really feels for her.. it's confusing .. is he petrified by the idea on loving.. or is he really dense?

It certainly is a talking point though.. however with regards to Dutta, there is definitely a steady improvement ,in his speaking skills..

Heavens it's sad this bit.. she decides to check her heart from falling further for him .. good at least she has self respect. Mind you Dutta doesn't mince his words either.. straight forward, surely he feels some affection for her, that's why he confesses.. can't guarantee love but the marriage stands! him as her lord protector.. but Naku too as a woman wants a declaration of love from him.. yaar aur kaise batae is larki ko? bol ke... ummm dream on Nakusha.. or work on taming the lion! use your biwi ka haq[ if he lets her]

Brilliant point! Naku's sense of desolation with regards to the key males in her life. One she cared for, her father he used her.. now this other male figure.. husband /saviour grants her freedom to live but not to love and be loved by him..

Nothing heart rendering.. then Naku having so much to say to him.. and not being able to.. and all because of his unflinching cold front and words.. great section ,enjoyed the sentimentality V rationality??

Lovely mother and son discussion.. sometimes it's best to listen to others so matters can clarify .. Aye Sahib grills him, all with her motherly love.. again he owns up bit by bit.. but not wholly..

Heaven's talk about procrastination!! ...

Loving the story... no one makes Dutta act..only Dutta himself.. slow and steady where matters of the heart are concerned.."only fools rush in ...

Thanks papsi , well written..glad I read it straightaway.. please continue waiting for next instalment.. will he?or will he not?.. will Naku carry out her threat?? much love, as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi sher ka dil! gimmee high five!.. oyee sun Baji rao.. you could have done this UD earlier but you were up to chatter! chatter !chatter.. kitna bolti hai tum.. me sighing..

🤓 so much for keeping a secret :P

firstly paps.. I love the siggy.. fantastic! creates the mood.. how talented you are sherdil! However do I get one too .. a new siggy? humm? reason.. season's greetings!

Thanks! I haven't done anything new on them in ages. This is first since whatever I made for my previous FFs. And as for new sig for you...you know I was gonna ask because quite frankly I'm bored of your current siggy😆 Consider it a christmas present...what do you want ?

Hi curly locks

loved the ud...so dutta can take care of naku but ...this but & if caused him a lot...😆.naku made a immediate decision ...no false hope ...thanks no pity ...liked her confidence ...she want morey to be killed to live a safe life

She told her plan to dutta ...she want love, family, kids...dutta didn't knew how to handle

AS acted along...like the convo ...continue soon..Love reading as u enjoyed writing it😊