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Posted: 11 years ago

LTL Written Update

Episode~ 103

24th May 2010

Out of his car, on the road , Dutta progresses towards the frightened family. He faces Naku, is that is it? this is your love? first chance you get and you run off! in one night your love has withered away? he rasps angrily...how can I let you you go just like this Naku? your game has ended, but my game has not even started yet! he cranks his neck at her like a lion. He raises the mangalsutra in his two hands and slowly puts it around her neck! Babi dreads.. but Ganpat smiles. Once done, Dutta grabs her by the arm and takes her to the front passenger seat of his car. Babi runs after him and cries, Bhau let her go, she's without fault! trust me Bhau you'll both burn in the fire of your hate towards her! Dutta glares at her, shoves Naku in the car and slams the door shut. He glares at Babi, Ganpat ,and Sethji. and they too.. full of fear! pile into the back seat of his car! without a word.

Patil Nivas

Dutta drives his wife and in laws back to his home. Kala and the rest of the his clan wait for Dutta's return. Roops fears, hope he does not shoot Naku? what does he want? Kala moans, he's gone after rubbish!, Sudarshan too , wonders, what does Bhau see in ths girl Nakusha? she's done so much harm , she doesn't even deserve his hatred and a powerful man like Bhau has gone after her!.. Aye admits, I don't know what is going on inside my son's head?, yesterday he took the step in anger and a drunken state , but now ?? All are baffled...

Dutta enters! pulls Naku by the arm! brings her into the house. All his family is shocked and he throws her amidst his family. Kala is stunned... as she notices Naku's family too entering the house as well. She stares at the mangalsutra around Naku's neck. Roops is worried, Tai would do we do? Kala tells her to be quiet and just watch what happens silently.

Dutta stands beside Naku and begins in no uncertain words his orders.. from today! nobody should interfere in my personal affairs! as from today, any matters concerning this girl! will be decided by me! and me alone! everyone is shocked and Kala moves to challenge him, but he roars with a finger up in the air! And from today! regarding this issue no one! nobody will question me !How long this girl is to stay in this house? only I as her husband will decide! if anyone tries to go against my decision! that person will be my biggest enemy! beware! and don't forget it! he warns. Kala's face is shown. There is irony in Dutta's words as she is Dutta's biggest enemy.

Dutta after he finishes with his family turns to Naku.. pulls her by the shoulders to face him, and you! you think you are very smart! get this right before every one here! this house is your prison! these walls! the doors! are your bars! and this mangulsutra is the noose around your neck! my room is your torture cell! I want to see you suffer every moment! I want this pain to be alive in my heart! that for the first time I have suffered in my friendship! from now on you will do whatever I command you to do! if I say that you walk on your head, then you will! now you and your family can try to escape from my prison! then try! show me! he glares at her, this house is your cage where your wings cannot be clipped! but for flight there will be no sky over your head! he roars, and Naku lowers her eyes resigned to receive her punishment!

All around hear loud and clear Dutta's so called punishment for Naku.. Kala and her sisters are delighted to see both Dutta and Naku suffering..

Parents on both sides are devastated by Dutta's decree..

Strangely enough after pronouncing his judgment on Naku ,Dutta gives Kala a look, as if to say, I hope you will not complain now. Dutta lets go of her shoulders and walks off..

Baji glares at the family .. he still bears angst against them..

Evil trio meeting

Kala muses and paces in her room. Roops moans, what are we going to do that dusky witch will live here with us as our vahini? Tai we be a laughing stock! Leela moans, I am so ashamed, has Bhau lost it? Kala calmly replies, no I don't think so , I think for the very first time Bhau has done us a good turn! Yes it was my mistake that I kicked Nakusha out! but Bhau did well by bringing her back, because had Naku gone forever, then there would be the chance that Bhau would forget this pain, and bring someone else in his life! but now Nakusha will stay before Bhau 24/7 she won't let him forget this complete incident! she'll gnaw at his wounds! and I'll pretend to heal his wounds, but silently and systematically I will poke at his hurt!. She won't have a peaceful night's sleep! and my beloved brother will never trust a woman all his life! and this is exactly what I wanted... says Kala to her sisters. But Leela says, but Tai she will be before our eyes all the time! no the very thought makes me angry! Kala smiles and consoles her sisters , have you not heard why Bhau has brought Nakusha back? It's to punish her, torture her, and to give her pain.. not so he can plant her on our heads as his wife.. Nakusha was a servant! Is one and will always remain a servant! We'll help Bhau in punishing Nakusha, we won't give her a moment's peace. What punishment will Bhau give her?.. I'll be the one to make her life hell! confirms Kala .

Dutta's den

Dutta has changed back to his black pathini. He sits on his settee , studys his files.

Baji enters..and says gently, you sent for me Bhau? Dutta looks at him and says , sit down. Baji over come with emotion for his friend, moves behind Dutta's sette and rests his hand on his friends shoulder sympathetically.. Bhau I know.. he begins, but Dutta snubs him , move your hand! and sit down.

Put off Baji sits on the armchair , and Dutta gives him a sided glare,and says, talk about business! Baji replies, Bhau don't worry about business I'll take care of it.. Dutta snubs him again , why? what wrong with ?.. have I become old in one night!!! what is wrong with me hummm?! Baji is embarrassed, Dutta asks coldly, what's happening about that piece of land in Poona?.. Baji replies, they want partnership Bhau! there's one guy from the corporation who is meddling! Dutta glares at Baji and throws his file across the table! and stands up... then break his legs! If any one dares to raise a finger against Dutta !then chop their hand off! maim him and send his body home! If any one dares to conspire against Dutta ! then destroy his world! if anyone even dares to betray Dutta ! than incapacitate him! but this Poona deal has to be done! roars Dutta and Baji listens to his orders! .. episode ends.. Hamlet53 ~ 19.1.14

If Naku outlined her rights of being Dutta's wife in the previous episode.. Dutta too in this episode confirms before every one that Naku is his wife, and he holds the ultimate decision in determining her fate!

It is quite clear that Naku has not told Dutta that it was Kala who had thrown her out of the house..

Dutta's judgement can it be seen to be fair? He tells his family Naku is his wife but on the other hand he tries to please the likes of Kala too, that Naku is his wife because he has married her and not because he wants to have and to hold her.. Naku will stay here now, not as mistress but as a common criminal. But there is some confusion in the way he addresses her.. his words seem what is expected of him..

In the end looks like Dutta Bhau is back in business! black pathiani and the colded blooded gangster vocabulary.

N.B~ many thanks for reading previous wu.. twinky..tammy ,warrie



Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi hammiee
it 'll be long before dutta accept naku truly...till than its hurdle for her...loved reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
dutta taking nakku back and warning his family to stay away from his business nakku geet tortures
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Our dearest coolest Sizzling lion🤗🤗
Awee ..Loved the update sooo much dear.❤️🤗..Awee Dutta again tied the mangalsutra around Naku's neck...He challenged to Naku.....Awee Angry Lion..❤️..Loved Dutta's warnings to Pagal Niwas wasis...He admitted Naku as his wife...Awee Loved the way he raised finger against Kala...But Hate his hatred towards Naku🤢..All PN wasis delighted to see his hatred talks to Naku.😭.Specially Evil trio.😡..Hate evil trio's venomous talk.😡...Naku is not a servant.😡..Hate Evil trio to the core😡...Dutta back to his Dutta bhau avatar..Awesome update dear.🤗...Sooo sweeet of you.🤗.Thank you soo much for your lovely update🤗...Hats off to you Hammie lion..🤗.Our Dearest lion..🤗..Love you soo much🤗...Eagerly waiting for the Friday's update dear....Thanks soo much hamari sweetest lion🤗..Big hugs from twinky baby..🤗.





























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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Hi Our dearest coolest Sizzling lion🤗🤗
never mind about sizzling more like freezing lion.. its 6C here

Awee ..Loved the update sooo much dear.❤️🤗..Awee Dutta again tied the mangalsutra around Naku's neck...He challenged to Naku.....Awee Angry Lion..❤️..Loved Dutta's warnings to Pagal Niwas wasis...He admitted Naku as his wife...Awee Loved the way he raised finger against Kala...But Hate his hatred towards Naku🤢..All PN wasis delighted to see his hatred talks to Naku.😭.Specially Evil trio.😡..Hate evil trio's venomous talk.😡...Naku is not a servant.😡..Hate Evil trio to the core😡...Dutta back to his Dutta bhau avatar..Awesome update dear.🤗...Sooo sweeet of you.🤗.Thank you soo much for your lovely update🤗...Hats off to you Hammie lion..🤗.Our Dearest lion..🤗..Love you soo much🤗...Eagerly waiting for the Friday's update dear....Thanks soo much hamari sweetest lion🤗..Big hugs from twinky baby..🤗. I was pleased with dutta .. at least he cleared it that yes he married her, and that she is his wife.. thanks for your great comment.. love the shots.. takes your comment and my WU to another level.. thanks much love.. read friday's wu.. 😃 hammie.




























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LTL Written Update

Episode~ 104

25th May 2010

Dutta's den

Episode picks up from the point where Dutta tells Baji that the Pune deal has to be finalized. Aye Sahib stands in Dutta's door way... she signals for Baji to leave and she comes into her son's room.. Dutta turns to face her. She looks at him sadly but he turns his face and his nostrils flare up. She moves closer to him and feels his shoulder lovingly and says, Dutta how long are you going to conceal your hurt behind your anger? He seems disinterested ..she appeals, you need to overcome this hurt if you want to move ahead in life. I am your mother, one has to give up, to gain something.. and pain is very much part of life. Dutta has a blank expression on his face..it seems that people around him are not allowing him the time to tackle his grief at his own pace. He coldly replies ,I have work to do , I'll see you later .. and leaves his room. a disappointed Aye Sahib stands pushed away by her son ,and eventually leaves his room..

Lounge Area

Naku and her family stand in the corner of the hall. Maids are doing their chores. Babi consoles Naku.. if this is Bappa's will then so be it, but my child , I will be with you always, so never think that you are alone. One of the maids comments ,this is the height of being disloyal! look at her stature , and she dreamt of becoming Bhau's wife.. now watch what Bhau will do to her ,she won't know from day to night! Babi turns to tell the maid off but Naku, just smiles and her face shows , she means let them be. the servants too have caught on Naku's status in the house, that she is none and so she's treated with great disrespect.

The family collect their stuff and are about to head for their previous room , when an angry faced Aye Sahib arrives and glares at them especially Naku ... she says , you made me realize Naku, that servants should be treated like servant, people like you take advantage of generosity, I regret that day when I gave you people refuge in this house. She looks at Naku and says, you have betrayed our trust, now I'll never be able to trust anyone. She looks at Naku and says, Dutta has decided to keep you in this house, but never make the mistake of considering this place as your home! she warns... and yes once you have conspired against our son, but now his mother will keep a watchful eye over each and every move of yours! and with that Aye Sahib turns and walks away from them.

The destitute family ,collects their bundles and make way to the out house .

Out house

They enter the room , and Babi looks at Bappa 's wall mount and thanks his grace. Ganpat is pleased they have a roof over their heads, but he remarks the room is in a mess! and hands on they start to tidy up. Naku is the last to enter. She appears disinterested. While others clear up the mess , she goes and stands before the mirror and looks at the vermillion in her parting, she feels it with her fingers. She has a FB of Dutta putting sindoor in her parting..so really the realization that she is now a married woman..this room is like her parental home.

She also feels the mangalsutra with her fingers; and has a FB, his voice.. this is your noose! she hears his mother's words.. a mother will now be keeping a watchful eye on your every move. Naku turns from the mirror and pulls her trunk and starts to fill it up with her clothes, even the blue chunni he gifted her.. she has a FB , in the shop when she put it on , he said it's nice.. her mother turns to her, seeing that Naku is packing her clothes, Naku! what are you doing? Naku replies, Aye ! now I don't belong to you. Babi is surprised at her words andNaku continues, I'll stay with my husband now. Ganpat is pleased to hear those words . Babi realizes the implication of Naku 's words and says with a smile, oh god we have to bid you farewell today!

The episode touches on a woman' place, her home, once is is married off.

Babi cries tears of joy.. what can a mother say on her daughter's going away! that your husband's home is your home from now on. Give him respect. His life is your life now; what else can I say to you Naku .. she cries and looks at Bappa .. god what else should I say ? Sethji realizes, and he says, Tai now you won't stay here? Naku tearfully goes to him and hugs him, and says with a smile, I'll still be around, and if you are naughty , I will come and scold you , and pull your ears! Sethji you must study properly, and look after every one! and look after babaa. She turns smiling to her mother, Aye you keep this family together, I can't forget you, I will want to come here every day, but won't be able to.

Babi stretches her arms towards Naku, come! and they both hug each other, and sob.. Babi says, Naku remember what I am saying, that bad times come so that we value more the good times..in that house , no one will understand your pain and suffering, but I have full faith on my daughter, you stay blessed and be happy ..and she folds her palms before Naku. Sethji chips in .. tai you don't need to worry now, now I've grown up , I'll do all the jobs around the house and I'll come to see you as well ,Tai .

The BG's enter and orders, Nakusha! Dutta Bhau has called you in his room!.this then is a summons ,and time for her to leave her parent's house. Ganpat looks delighted , as obviously he has something up his sleeve.

Naku then says her good byes to her father, babaa I know that you love Aye a lot but you never say it. I know that, babaa, but after I leave , Aye will become alone, you'll look after her won't you?.. Ganpat says , yes.. for sure. He then sits Naku down tenderly on the bed, and sits down on the floor before her. He tells her, look Naku if you stay happy in your home, then I'll look after everything here. Look child! we're poor people. If we lose this shelter, then we'll end up begging on the streets, humm? you tell me Naku ?look Naku use your brain now! bhau's house is a gold mine! you need to win his heart! after that! me will be Ganpat seth and your brother will become a prince! and Babi! how can I say Naku! she'll just look unbelievable! After that Naku , we'll buy a huge mansion! a big car and I'll cruise around the neighbourhood!and buy everyone free drinks ! so now you don't mess things up! Babi intervenes , eyeee! your daughter is going to hell! and you're concerned about booze.

Ganpat challenges her, oh don't be crazy! what hell is she going too? eree Bhau 's house is like heaven itself! see for yourself ,his bar is filled with the finest drink! I know Naku will convince Bhau with her love !that Bhau will go crazy over her! he'll become her slave! look Naku , show your real face to Bhau! once he sees your real face he'll be stunned into silence!

Naku is perplexed..at Ganpat's suggestion... Babi and Sethji are shocked at Ganpat's words. But Ganpat continues giving Naku this tip, now when night time comes, you light up your room! and just wash your face and come out! here you come out! there Bhau sees you ! and your life will change completely! well it sure does change as we'll see later on.. Ganpat shouts, and I'll hit a jackpot!

Naku in panic stands up on her feet and alerts .. Aye! but Saab has only seen me like this! if he comes to know the truth.. she dreads. Ganpat presses, well this is the right time to tell him Naku! he turns to his wife, Babi this is the correct time, to show Naku' real face! let him see she is as beautiful as an angel! After that Bhau will melt like an ice cube melts in a glass of alcohol! Babi snubs him, shut up you shameless person! and he has a go at her, what's wrong with you , mad woman?

Naku stands confused and goes to the window and looks out and confesses, Saab thinks I am a fraudster, and when he finds out about this thing , then he'll think that all of us have betrayed him.. Babi does considers this, this is possibly added in, so that Babi as a mother's image is not tarnished.. as here Naku seems to be giving a reason why Dutta should not be told about her real face..

Babi walks to her daughter and, agrees , no! you remain the way you are, don't reveal your real face.. Ganpat dreams to riches fade.. Naku replies, but how will I, as I 'll be with him all the time.. Babi, urges, but Naku we'll have to keep this a secret.

Outside their door a shadow is cast and in walks Kala the apex of the evil triangle and the other two follow into the room as well. They stare at these servants.. and Naku, Ganpat, Babi, Sethji ,stand in shock.. has Kala heard the last bit of Babi Naku dialogue ?.. episode ends.. Hamlet53 ~ 20.1.14

Precap: stop right there! , don't try to runaway!

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Well this last episode, of the week is pretty weighty in content.

Firstly , the production house deals with the formality of Bidaai, going away of the bride from her parental home to her husbands.. the best is made out of a rather awkward situation where the bride already with her family, lives at the mercy of her husband in his home..

Still viewers too are informed that Naku wouldn't be living in the outhouse with her family, but in her husband's bedroom..

A fond farewell is exchanged, Babi the bride's mother, says the right words to her daughter, and Naku the sensitive daughter too bids them well.. clearly states that she doesn't belong to her family any more as she is now married.. but the bombshell is dropped..Ganapats words regarding face revelation.. are spoken in no uncertain terms..

This makes me wonder that even though Ganpat wants Naku to reveal her real face before Dutta to fullfil his own selfish needs..is he right?

Babi give her logic, and then finally Naku's final decision about face revelation.. is exposed in this episode..

So we end up questioning who is in fact guilty of concealing this important evidence from Dutta .. Babi, or Naku ?

Face revelation, be reminded is the one of the key factors in this serial used for promoting viewership.. and holding on to audiences...

N.B~thanks for reading the previous wu.. fassben , Naku, warrie, twinky, tammy


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dutta in angry mood oops babinakku crying ganpat money dream now will start evil trio and dutta torture
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Hi Hammie🤗
Awesome update dear..Enjoyed it so much..Yes weighty content.❤️..Loved it.❤️.Aye saab advised to Dutta..But he didn't bother & went away.😊..Poor naku😭...PN wasis always insult Naku.😭..Hate pendulum Aye saab ki stupid talk.😡..She should first keep eyes on her daughter.😡..Loved Babi- Naku's part soo much.❤️.Heart touching❤️..Loved babi's good advices.❤️.Good mother..👍🏼.loved Naku's sensible talks❤️...Greedy Ganpat dreaming about rich life.😆..Finally babi advised Naku to hide the face truth from Dutta😲..Biggest mistake...Yes babi is the main reason behind FR scene...Loved your lovely analysis soo much...🤗Naku said bye bye to her parental home..She will going to stay with Dutta...But More tortures are waiting for Naku..Eagerly waiting for the next update dear..Take care..Thanks soo much.🤗.Soo sweet of you🤗.Hug from twinky baby🤗





















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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi HamletAwesome UD...they were cruel...dutta too...ganpat was selfish
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Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Hi Hammie🤗hi twinkerella..
Awesome update dear..Enjoyed it so much..Yes weighty content.❤️..Loved it.❤️.Aye saab advised to Dutta..But he didn't bother & went away.😊..Poor naku😭...PN wasis always insult Naku.😭..Hate pendulum Aye saab ki stupid talk.😡..She should first keep eyes on her daughter.😡..Loved Babi- Naku's part soo much.❤️.Heart touching❤️..Loved babi's good advices.❤️.Good mother..👍🏼.loved Naku's sensible talks❤️...Greedy Ganpat dreaming about rich life.😆..Finally babi advised Naku to hide the face truth from Dutta😲..Biggest mistake...Yes babi is the main reason behind FR scene...Loved your lovely analysis soo much...🤗Naku said bye bye to her parental home..She will going to stay with Dutta...But More tortures are waiting for Naku..Eagerly waiting for the next update dear..Take care..Thanks soo much.🤗.Soo sweet of you🤗.Hug from twinky baby🤗

i too am eagerly waiting for her first meeting with dutta.. uff she's stil wearing the bridal outfit.. and these are great shots of dutta and baji.. thanks for your great comment as usual.. much love hammie



















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