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Posted: 11 years ago

LTL Written Update

Episode~ 101

19th May 2010

Episode picks up from the point where Kala urges her grieving mother to go to bed. she reminds her mother of the responsibilities they face.

Baji's room

Baji is troubled as to what conclusion he should draw regarding Naku. He is haunted by a spate of FB 's , how he sat at the back with Naku while driving home; how when Dutta gifts Naku the locket, he had studied Naku's face and had declared to Dutta that Naku loves him.. he recalls Dutta's words, the chaos in my heart is settled ,now as I have found my true love in Supriya.. Bhau! here on your dresser will be a pot of vermillion belonging to vahini! which she will apply in your name.. our people have caught vahini with that body guard Ravindra.. Saab they had eloped before.. and Dutta fires shots at Supriya's photo on the floor! If it hadn't been for Nakusha, I couldn't have eloped! It's true , that I love you, I'eve always loved you, so it was love for which you did all this! you weren't helping Supriya, but moving an obstacle in your way! you want to take her place don't you?

Baji wipes his tears and joins Sudarshan and Kishore with a scowl on his face, it's Nakusha! she must have plotted this whole thing! she's the one who ruined my Bhau's life! I am not going to spare her! Baji yells. Kishore looks at Baji and says Bajirao stay calm and think with cool head if you'll lose it! then who'll tend to Bhau? Sudarshan too says, yes Baji , just stay calm , don't do anything you just look after Bhau.. and both men calm him down.. although , Baji leaves in a big huff.

Baji comes down to the lounge and watches all the decorations come down. He looks around in dismay and finally his eye falls on Naku's family huddled up on the floor in a corner. Ganapat cheers up at the sight of Baji , but Baji gives them a dirty look and begins to walk off in contempt...

Dutta 's den

Once again the theme song "Kaminey"plays.. Dutta lies flopped on what's left of his bed bridal bed.. completely inebriated, one of his legs sticks off his bed ..the room is filled with smoky air, the room is drenched in bluish light and resembles a wrecked disaster no go zone. The wind blows through the curtains as Naku on the floor gathers her skirt to herself. She cries... Dutta's drunken eyes recalls, FB, himself coming to face the guests dressed as a groom..how his mother smiles, his friend blows kisses, how happy he was, happy enough to dance with his mother.. his pupils swim and he recalls moving the partitioning sheet and it is Naku's lone figure he sees, Naku word's, Tai has left all of us! the car blasted! The body being carried in, on a stretcher, him kneeling beside the stretcher.. Naku's words , accept Supriya Tai as your own. Dutta in torture moves on to his back.. Naku's words, once love comes ,all your pain will go.. Supriya tantalizing him, I want to start a new life with you.. Naku on the floor weeps bitterly.. Dutta has a FB, this is not Supriya's body! Baji's words, our people have caught Supriya vahine with her body guard Ravinder ! they were having an affair.. how he smashes the glasses at his bar!! Naku's words they ran once before, I caught them! the man points and says, yes that Nakusha sent us! Kala's voice, if it hadn't been for Nakusha , I couldn't have eloped. Naku has ,FB's Kala slapping her across the face! you decide this girl's fate!, her mother's voice , no Bhau ,she loves you! how Saab put the gun to her forehead.. it's true I love you! I've always loved you.. Dutta FB, smashing Supriya's photo! pushing Baji out of the mandap! smearing the vermillion on her forehead, putting mangalsutra around her neck. Naku's FB, Dutta's fingers around her neck, congratulations Naku! welcome to hell! hell! hell!.. she looks at the dead drunk Dutta on the bed, from the floor where she sits and she cries..

Kala's room

The evil trio congregate for their reactions. Kala finally turns up and asks her sisters, you haven't gone to bed yet? Leela replies, under the circumstances how can we sleep? Kala sneers ,why what's happened to every one's sleep? Leela complains, Tai all are game has been ruined! we thought Bhau would be put off women! but Bhau went and got married! a collected Kala suggests, Roops go get some wine for all of us, let's have a small celebration..Roops asked confused , a celebration? And Kala says yes a celebration! Leela moans, why? that maid has become a mistress! Is that what we celebrate? Kala sneer , why are you so anxious Leela ?and what marriage are you talking about? Nakusha is a one night bride! Bhau was drunk. When he comes to his senses, he'll kick her out of this house! and isn't that what we wanted? that Bhau should be pushed so hard that would begin to hate every woman on this earth! and look that's exactly what happened! In fact I would say we got a better deal! come on then! let's prepare to bid farewell to the bride in the morning! neither Bhau understood, neither Aye Sahib , let's she if Nakusha understands..

Dutta's den

Morning arrives. Dutta sleeps in a drunken stupor. Naku sits on the floor , her head rested against an wooden pillar. Kala enters the room, looks at the chaos. Bhau on the bed asleep. Naku on the floor. She glares at Naku, tugs at her arm , makes her stand up! and drags her out of Bhau's room to his study and confronts her... my Bhau was not in his senses last night! so you were his wife for one night only! so not for one moment think that you will rule over this house! worms like you I wouldn't even allow to live in my gutter! now get lost from here! and she drags Naku down the main staircase as both Naku and Dutta's families watch from the lounge.

Full of arrogance she drags Naku to the lounge and while all watch, she hurls her over to Babi! who goes to her daughter on the floor , looking for obvious signs of being battered! .Kala yells , stop your pretence crying! Babi tells her daughter to get up and Naku gives her mother a hug. Kala says clearly, before my Bhau wakes up! get your belongings and get out from here! let there be no traces left of last night's incidence in his house! I don't want my Bhau to see these fraudsters faces ! guards ! take their belongings and throw them !out she orders. Not one person disagrees with Kala Sahib!. Ganpat gives in, no please don't we'll leave! so does Babi , yes we're going !, and they collect their belongings as Kala watches in full authority. Babi turns to Naku , but Naku refuses to budge! She recalls the sindoor and managalsutra ceremony.She recognizes her status of being his wife and shakes her head.. Kala , Aye Sahib, Baji all stare at Naku's refusal.Naku remembers Dutta's words, congtraulations Naku! and welcome to hell! Naku thinks .. and does not move. Her father calls her! come lets go! do you want us all to get killed? Her mother gives her, her hand but Naku refuses to take it...she pushes Babi's hand away.. aye , babaa, I won't leave this place ! she says clearly for all to hear. Kala, Aye Sahib, Baji are all shocked, Naku defends, saab has married me! all the rituals were performed.. I won't be leaving this place! Kala is shell shocked at this girls claim.. Naku comes before Kala and pleads , Tai ,please don't turn me out, Saab married me in front of every one, I don't care how he keeps! Kala flies at her , and slaps her cross the face , how dare you! Dutta Bhau has married you! you are very smart Nakusha! my Bhau in a drunk state performed some rituals with you! and you think you've become his wife? is this what you call a marriage ?listen when my Bhau wakes up ,he'll realise his mistake! then this marriage will be of no importance in his eyes! Baji yells she's done enough damage! let me throw her out! he yells, and Kala stops him! it's like Baji too is a puppet in Kala's hands. Kala calmly says, I am saying this for the last time! and understand well! A fire lit by liquor doesn't count as a ceremony ..kala gives all the reasons to nullify the tasha wedding! She carries on, when he held your hand , it was out of hate! is this what's called a marriage? and she pulls off Naku's mundavlya from her forehead and throws it across the floor, then wipes off her vermillion with the brush of her palm! is this sindoor or my Bhau's blood? this mangulsutra? and she pulls that off naku's neck and throws it across the floor too.. Naku looks in disbelief at Kala's evil deeds of defiling the scared symbols of a Hindu marriage! Kala says this is not a mangalsutra! it's a noose tied around your neck by my Bhau! and even if then you think you are married! then go buy yourself a cheap mangulsutra from the bazar! and wear it around your neck all your life! it's got nothing to do with us, you can live as Dutta Bhau's wife anywhere in this world but not in this house! now get out of here, had enough of you lot! you saved my Bhau's life , so letting you leave alive! Kala is pulling the shots and loving it! this was her original plan any way.. was fouled , because Dutta decides to marry.. but even in this situation she manages to fire shots.. her language too sounds like Dutta's dialogues, like the noose around the neck.. she listened carefully to what Dutta said during and after the ceremony.

She continues, let's hope I don't forget this and burn you alive right here! now loud and clear! even if by mistake you are seen in this area, then you'll lose your life and you won't even know how! she threatens. Ganpat , Babi move, and pull Naku by her arms as well forcing her to leave! on her way out Naku glances back tearfully at his room and balcony.

They leave and Kala looks at Dutta's balcony and room scornfully.. and then leaves, but also looks at the mangalsutra , mundavlya scattered on the floor..

The family is kicked towards the front gate bag and baggage! by Sudarshan. Ganpat begs , Saab we are poor people! and Sudarshan shouts, yes I've seen poor men! I don't repeat myself just get lost from here! Ganpat begs please let us stay here!.. Naku looks towards the house.. waiting for Saab! Sudarshan says menacingly, don't you understand once? get lost! and Ganpat begs , but where will we go Saab? Dutta Bhau has given us permission to stay here! he took pity on us Saab , that's why we are

alive! I promise you this will not happen again! saab we'll end up on the streets! almost clapped for Ganpat here! he's right! Dutta Bhau said they could stay in his house!

But Sudarshan tells him to shut up! and puts his gun to Ganpat's head, and Ganpat rolls his eyes in terror! you will come to the streets ? why are you begging here then! threatens Sudarshan! will you leave or you'll wait for Dutta Bhau to arrive?.. Ganpat says, no! and they all rush to the gate ..except Naku.. she still stands looking backwards at the house.. Sudarshan turns to look at Naku.. he raises his gun and looks at Naku's waiting face.. episode ends Hamlet53 ~ 16.1.13

Precap: Nakoooshaaah! yells Dutta! where is Nakusha?

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Baji's position.. Baji is typical of the person who follows the herd instinct at the moment. One who goes with the flow. He tries to weigh the evidence which has like all others a great bearing on the judgement against Naku. But there is a conflict within him, FB's, as initially he did give Naku the impression that he supports her. also within him he recalls he alerted Bhau that Naku loved him.. Baji may blame himself for being so blind. Yes she had duped him as well, by aiding and colluding with Supriya in the elopement move. Bhau is devastated! and within Baji's mind , he doesn't have further doubts as Naku withheld the truth to further her own love.. so for him too Naku is damned. It's hard for Baji to support Naku, so the other way for him is to condemn her, that is the gangsters way.. no middle way..

Kala is busy debriefing her sisters now. She spells out the present scenario of Bhau's marriage.. in fact even explains how she plans to deal with it.

If only Naku had the sense to see , that with Kala it's a power struggle with Naku.. she says to Naku , don't think you'll rule over this house.. it's because that power only Kala wants , and she wants to snatch that from her brother too! his status, his clout ,his money , his house , his power!.

In the end .. she does something which her brother will challenge.

Naku the puny little guttersnipe, digs her heels in to the very last minute till she is bodily thrown out of her rightful home. She has given a taster of what she is made up of.. people of Patil Nivas have a rough idea of the steel steadfast spirit Naku possesses. For Naku it's not about the want of rags to riches life style. Her take on refusing to leave is also to show Dutta and his family, she gracefully and honorably is ready to go through her punishment for her charge.

N.B~ many thanks for reading the last WU~ tammy, twinky, fassben, sona, warda.


Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dutta using nakku as punching bag kala pouring her frustatration of flopping her plan and throwing her out
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi hamlet

everyone is spectator...nobody to help naku

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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode 100:
First of all take a bow on completing 100 updates...Omg the number is giving me butterflies in my stomach I don't know if anyone has done it on IF before...given 100 written updates in a row...but you did it ...Indeed you are an asset of our
forum 👏

Another enjoyable ud ...poor naku going through the worst phase she has to take such words from the man she loves the most...it must be hard for her to bear his hatered... now for the first time he commented on her looks too very unlikely of dutta. ..she was least expecting that too from him thats why the disbelief was so evident on her face otherwise it was always common for her to get such remarks about her looks

The most sorry sight for me in this episode were baabi sethji n ganpat...they looked so helpless and rejected sitting there while rest of the family members in their rooms mind ypu naku too...ganpat and his dreams ...dutta is there ready to punish naku as his wife how could he think he will give him any regard as FIL...seriously ganpat is one funny man lol...but you mentioned that right his false belief that one day naku will rule duttas heart came true...baabis concern was so genuine that I didn't mind her roona dhoona at all it was very touching infact.

Good to see baaji kishore n suds engagec in this discussion. ..finslly kishore is the only person eho believes nalu is innocent. ..even baaji is confused over it ...dutta aur baaji ki jagah kishore ko don hona chahiye tha atleast he is sensible to judge people. .

Kala ohh so clever strikes again making AS believe that the marriage is void...well she can keep dreaming ab kuch nahi ho sakta lol...
will be back with next part!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode 101:
So baaji too finally gave verdict against naku...atleast he should have stood with her...I loved your personal views a lot about this episode ...very well written that baaji must be feeling guilty why he became so blind specially when he noticed that naku is falling in love with dutta...

Dutta is looking so broken and the song ohhh so apt for laagi...by far this show was the best one in selecting songs...it was heart wrenching sight to watch both naku and dutta like this...dutta though trying to punish naku here was giving a picture as if he is being punished himself and naku was feeling terrible because of his pain only.

So kala dared to enter newly weds room without knocking it 😆 btw why didnt dutta lock his room isn't he aware of the kabab main haddi habbits of all patil niwasis😆 ...naku is innocent to notice kalas motive here that why she is interested in throwing her out asap...my heart actually skipped a beat at the thought will they part actually the moment naku stepped out of the house but that loud roar nakushaaa made my day 😆 lion has woken up at the right time lol
waiting for the next episode eagerly. ..thanks a lot hammie enjoyed reading it to the core:)
congratulations once again for completing 100 episodes ...you deserve all the appreciation for this. ..thank you for your countless efforts for this forum. ..keep giving us the joy of your beautiful threads...we are blessed to have talented and dedicated members like you...naku is right "you are amazing hammie"
Edited by Warda. - 11 years ago
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Hi Hammie🤗
Superb update dear🤗..Enjoyed it soo much...Oh Noo.😲..Baaji too didn't believe innocent naku.🥺..His words are hurtful.🥺His bhau's devastated state made him like that .Loved your analysis about Baaji's position dear❤️... Naku & Dutta had FB ❤️...Poor Naku.😭..heart wrenching situation😭...Errr Kala😡...One night bride??.😡.Kala misjudged his brother.😡.Dutta won't kick Naku out.👍🏼..Hate Kala's evil acts..🤢Poor Naku😭..PN wasis silently watched Kala's drama😡. Evil Kala brutally snatched away Naku's Mangulstra & wiped off her sindoor😭...No one has helped Naku.😭..Poor Naku😭.She tried her best to save her Mangulsutra🤗...Baaji to became Kala's puppet..😲.Finally Naku & her family kicked out from PN..😭.But Lion's angry Roar is waiting for all PN wasis..Loved your footnote soo much dear.❤️🤗...Wonderful job Hammie lion🤗..hats off to you.🤗..You are soo sweet 🤗...We all love you soo much🤗...Sorry for Twinky baby's late attendance.☺️.Eagerly waiting for the next update dear.🤗..Big hug from Twinky baby🤗



Congratulations for 100 golden Episodes dear🤗🥳..Hammiee lion🤗 !!.Please accept meri dost ki request...😳






























@ Warda
Awee dear.🤗.Loved your superb comments dear..❤️❤️.Totally agree with you.🤗...Soo sweet of you...🤗..Big hug from twinky baby🤗


Edited by twinkle-star - 11 years ago
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hi hammiee
sab ke sab wants to get rid of naku...magar cha ko rakhe saiya maar sa ke na koi...dutta 'll come back to her...loved reading ur note😊
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hi amazingg hammieee
amazinggg 101 episodes ...👏
Congratulations
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Originally posted by: Warda.

Episode 100: warrie .. ummh trust you to notice that.. quite overcome Iam..

First of all take a bow on completing 100 updates...Omg the number is giving me butterflies in my stomach I don't know if anyone has done it on IF before...given 100 written updates in a row...but you did it ...Indeed you are an asset of our
forum 👏
thats your meetha nature that makes you say this.. Iam sure people who did previous LTL/WU must have done so ,warrie
Another enjoyable ud ...poor naku going through the worst phase she has to take such words from the man she loves the most...it must be hard for her to bear his hatered... now for the first time he commented on her looks too very unlikely of dutta. ..she was least expecting that too from him thats why the disbelief was so evident on her face otherwise it was always common for her to get such remarks about her looks
yes , it is final expression of hatred towards her.. but knowing naku his words of scoffing her loks just bounce off her.. she knows gussa mein bola hai.. that's love..
The most sorry sight for me in this episode were baabi sethji n ganpat...they looked so helpless and rejected sitting there while rest of the family members in their rooms mind ypu naku too...ganpat and his dreams ...dutta is there ready to punish naku as his wife how could he think he will give him any regard as FIL...seriously ganpat is one funny man lol...but you mentioned that right his false belief that one day naku will rule duttas heart came true...baabis concern was so genuine that I didn't mind her roona dhoona at all it was very touching infact.
it was like a war zone where the people taken hostage are stripped of all dignity.
Good to see baaji kishore n suds engagec in this discussion. ..finslly kishore is the only person eho believes nalu is innocent. ..even baaji is confused over it ...dutta aur baaji ki jagah kishore ko don hona chahiye tha atleast he is sensible to judge people. .
yes but kishore too has a flaw.. is frightened to stand up for the truth..
Kala ohh so clever strikes again making AS believe that the marriage is void...well she can keep dreaming ab kuch nahi ho sakta lol...
will be back with next part!!!
humm but kala is the press media of PN.. WARRIE thanks so very much for your warm wishes.. hammie is humbled by your praise.. much love hammie

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Originally posted by: Warda.

Episode 101:
warrie ,again😛.. must be my lucky day..

So baaji too finally gave verdict against naku...atleast he should have stood with her...I loved your personal views a lot about this episode ...very well written that baaji must be feeling guilty why he became so blind specially when he noticed that naku is falling in love with dutta...
humm ,warrie, baji ka attitude really wound me up.. I think.. bhau ke age he can't see any hing beyond.
Dutta is looking so broken and the song ohhh so apt for laagi...by far this show was the best one in selecting songs...it was heart wrenching sight to watch both naku and dutta like this...dutta though trying to punish naku here was giving a picture as if he is being punished himself and naku was feeling terrible because of his pain only.
yes i love the song.. kaminey.. i often sing it.. there is a clear bitterness and element of self pity in it.. ohh tune dekha twinky has added it .. loved it..hope you can hear it warrie..
So kala dared to enter newly weds room without knocking it 😆 btw why didnt dutta lock his room isn't he aware of the kabab main haddi habbits of all patil niwasis😆
haaa hoo love tere remark ..was needed in such a sad episode
...naku is innocent to notice kalas motive here that why she is interested in throwing her out asap...my heart actually skipped a beat at the thought will they part actually the moment naku stepped out of the house but that loud roar nakushaaa made my day 😆 lion has woken up at the right time lol ..yesss me two wanted him to pull the place down.. and strangle kala! but for times to come dutta will continue to remain blind.. till he loses his eyesight..
waiting for the next episode eagerly. ..thanks a lot hammie enjoyed reading it to the core:)
congratulations once again for completing 100 episodes ...you deserve all the appreciation for this. ..thank you for your countless efforts for this forum. ..keep giving us the joy of your beautiful threads...we are blessed to have talented and dedicated members like you...naku is right "you are amazing hammie"
warrrie me looking the other way now.. you know how I FEEL about writing.. for LTL.. I GUESS I get lucky when I get readers who manage to read and appreciate my work.. thanks warrie for your on going support.. much love , yours hammie..

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