New TaSha SS: My Very Own Stranger, updated Part 1- Page 2, 2.9.13

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emilymine32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hi swati
Thanks for the ss
Great start
Enjoyed reading nakus pov
Waiting for next

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mirage123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

hi swati

verdict👏👏👏😊fab story...first part awesome...continue soon...waiting to meet dutta...thanxs a ton...for writing a new ss...like click isn't working

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Nakusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hi swati

loved the new SS & UD...naku is bride waiting for her prince charming...😊😊okay as for now he isn't a prince a stranger...you described it beautifully...naku's state of mind...decoration of the suite...very imaginative...loved it ..precap is simply good ...we 'll are waiting to be intoduced to this stranger..

verdict is perfect 10👏

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Dibya Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: twinkle-star
Hi Swati🤗🤗
Wow....Awesome starting dear....Loved it sooo much.❤️❤️❤️...Naku married a stranger ..Our sweetheart Dutta.❤️...Loved her point of view... ...You narrations are really awesome dear...loved it so much..❤️❤️.Sooo sweeet of you🤗...Now eagerly waiting for the next update...Please update sooon ..🤗...Thanks a lot for your wonderful update dear🤗

Hi Dear...yup Naku married a stranger...but will prove to be her very own...thats why the title...i am so glad u liked the first part...you would dutta's pov too...will update soon...love youb dear...

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Dibya Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: emilymine32
Hi swati
Thanks for the ss
Great start
Enjoyed reading nakus pov
Waiting for next

Hi Emily,

I should be the one saying thanks for the love and support of you all. Thats the most beautiful part of writing in this forum. All are so encouraging. I am sure you would enjoy Dutta's pov. Thats coming in the nect part. Will update soon. Thanks again.

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Dibya Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nakusha
hi swati
Hi dear,
loved the new SS & UD...naku is bride waiting for her prince charming...😊😊okay as for now he isn't a prince a stranger...
The stranger will be coming in the next part. I am sure you will like the introduction. And there is a surprise too.
you described it beautifully...naku's state of mind...decoration of the suite...very imaginative...loved it ..
Truly speaking, I was quite nervous about the decoration part. I have no idea about the romantic setting. So I was afraid I would messed up. But you liked it. I am so happy.
precap is simply good ...we 'll are waiting to be intoduced to this stranger..
verdict is perfect 10👏
Will be updating very soon. Thanks for the perfect 10. Love you dear.

Originally posted by: mirage123
hi swati
verdict👏👏👏😊fab story...first part awesome...continue soon...waiting to meet dutta...thanxs a ton...for writing a new ss...like click isn't working

Hi Mirage,

Thanks for liking the SS. Dutta is coming in next part with his POV. I am having some problem with like click. It works fine sometime and sometime it doesn't work. May be some technical problem of IF or problem on my side. Neways thanks again. Will update soon.

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Iridescence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey Dibya, great UD. Naku's a bit uneasy with the whole thing since she feels she doesn't know the man enough yet trusted her family's opinion. She's celebrating a night with her husband...a stranger...definitely interesting...would like to see Dutta's thoughts on the whole thing...which I guess comes next :P ...do continue soon!

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afzal7861

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

hi swati great start like the first part waiting for next continue soon

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Dibya Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -daya-
Hey Dibya, great UD. Naku's a bit uneasy with the whole thing since she feels she doesn't know the man enough yet trusted her family's opinion. She's celebrating a night with her husband...a stranger...definitely interesting...would like to see Dutta's thoughts on the whole thing...which I guess comes next :P ...do continue soon!

Hi Daya,

I wont say Naku is uneasy. She's more than uneasy, you will know more about her feeling in future parts. Yup she love her parents very much. I'll introduce them soon. Naku isnt celebrating the night. What gave you this idea? Did I messed up things? Naku is supposed to be waiting while Dutta is out and celebrating with his friends. Well I am trying narrative for the first time. Yup, Dutta's POV is coming in next part and it will give the whole picture. Will update soon. Thanks for reading.