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uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

hi daya awesome ud...finally dutta met his daughter & naku...naku admiited srishti is his daughter...some killer is behind naku & dutta needs to tackle his personal problem too...nice story...😊continue soon

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hi daya

The story is turning great.😊.so dutta met his naku ..Naku was dumbfounded when she saw dutta..Finally the ice broke with curly locks..I love this name daya..U named the character after you..Do u have curly locks?😳

Now back to awesome ud..Dutta is ready to accept his responsibility..With cute daughter why won't he😊..Surveillance camera weren't arranged & that creep pushed a letter..He wants to get rid of child...he deserves a big punch..Maniac he has..Jagtap & pakhi knows the truth..The child & granny are saved..How would dutta deal with his new found daughter & how would she react to it..Waiting for next ud..Daya

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

its a beautiful story...loved it...continue sooon...

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

HI Daya

Once again love the ud Dutta meets Naku and his daughter but she was not happy seeing him not this time Jagtap and Pakhi find out srishi Is dutta. Some one still sending letters I hope very soon we find out who he or she Is. Do continue really so

Thank as always take care now

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twinkle-star

@twinkle-star

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Hi Daya🤗
Wow...What an awesome update dear...Loved it a lot❤️...Enjoyed reading a lot....Wow...Loved Dutta-Naku's Convo dear...Its really awesome....You described Naku's feelings very well...I loved her confidence.❤️...She don't want Dutta's acceptance just because of the Baby👍🏼...She wants true love from Dutta...Loved baaji-Shrusti's Friendship...This cute little girl is really nice....Jagdap didn't find the truth.😳...Wow...Dutta carried Shrushti..I love his care & concern dear..❤️..He felt something by her touch❤️...Who is that person who sent these letters & flowers to Naku???😲😲😳...Dutta will definitely find him & give some punches on his face...Awe..Can't wait now dear.😳😳..Its really a wonderful update ....Please update soon..😳😳..I'm Eagerly waiting..😳😳..Thank you sooo much for your mindblowing update dear🤗...Take care🤗

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jedy25

@jedy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

hi daya superb ud! dutta met naku...their daughter...dutta know abt his daughter...the firing & who is behind it...story is going great..pls ud soon😊

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mirage123

@mirage123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

hi daya fab ud! dutta & naku convo too good...srishti life is in danger ..her dad dear will safe her...😊in future too...the assassin is real trouble...ud soon

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

|| Tamanna ||

Hey Tams! Yep, Dutta and Naku met and the circumstances spell danger for many reasons...D's natural father instincts kick in whether he wanted them or not...and you'll have to wait to see how it all unravels and comes to a complete circle. Thank you for reading and commenting ! Phir milenge chalte chalte.

|| Uwith ||

Hiya Uvi! Yeah, the meet and greet is all over...Dutta discovered his daughter and his heart naturally wants to protect her...there is a psycho on their heels and Dutta and Naku have unresolved issues also. I have yet to tackle the heart of all the problms lol so stay tuned. Thank you for reading and commenting Uvi. Means a lot :) Glad you are enjoying the SS.

|| Nakusha ||

Hey Nakusha! Dutta and Naku's ice-breaker is definitely Srishti and her own instincts are as good as her fathers :P And haha yeah Curly Locks is named after me and I find it does work well for this character. And yes M'aam my hair is indeed curly...if i straighten it, it'll be at my upper back but when i leave it naturally it curls just above my shoulders😆 Anyway like you getting back to the UD related comments :P Yeah Dutta's now got a daughter, a ex-girlfriend, and a pyscho to deal with...anyway thank you so much for reading and commenting and always being such a great support...now lets see how it unravels...stay tuned my dear...hum phir milenge chalte chalte

|| Ushankitvc ||

Hi Usha, thank you for reading and commenting. Glad to hear you like the SS. 😊

|| Fassben ||

Heya Fassbender!

Yep, the main couple have met...and you're right she's not exactly thrilled but at some level she is okay with his being there for Srishti...just not for herself...i'm sure i can fix that :P The pyscho after her will be discovered with time...not to worry! Thank you so much for your support...for reading and commenting always. Keeps me going. So thank you. Phir milenge chalte chalte

|| Twinkle-Star ||

Hey Lallii!! First, did you watch naduvula konjam pakatha kannom ...omg good movie...haha i laughed at the title itself...you should watch it if you haven't yet ! I also have yet to watch Theeya Velai Seiyannum Kumaru😆 all these fun titles...lol anyway getting to your comment ...glad to hear you're loving it...writing the dialogues and their feelings is hard work and am glad you thought they were good and described well. There is lots to explore with these three...and hopefully it'll shape up well. You know I enjoy writing D's relationship with Srishti most...its innocent and natural...it just happens. Anyway lets see how it all unravels. Thank you for your lovely remarks and for reading and commenting. I really appreciate all the support :) Phir milenge chalte chalte...

|| Jedy ||

Hey, thank you so much for reading and commenting. Glad you are liking the UD. Lol i am not even sure when they'll discover the perp but soon :) Take care. Adios Amigo!

|| Mirage123 ||

Hey there! Thank you for reading and commenting. Great to know you're liking the story thus far. Let's see how the trouble folds and the rest of the story unravels...thanks again. See ya!

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Daya,

Comments edited in the resd spot 😳

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

hey daya , wonderful update ...really loving the pace of this story , as you said everything shall be point blank so indeed it is . One thing that i forgot to mention in my last comment, the fact that dutta thought that the little girl could be his daughter impressed me a lot ..i hate it when a woman has to prove to a man that the child belongs to him ..its so demeaning ..i mean the guy may go around and sleep with anyone but it is the girl's responsibility to prove that the child is his ..ridiculous ..therefore i am so happy that despite of dutta having so many flings still at once he thinks that child might be his ...thanks daya

okay so tasha have met and their meeting was beautifully written ..love this stubborn and strong headed nakku ...she has self respect and is not throwing herself at the man she loves...now who is this creep who wishes to eliminate this beautiful girl of tasha's ? the father daughter scene was also heart touching ..very well done

waiting for next update

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