FF: Point Blank Protector (TaSha) | FF: Safe By His Side (Baaji) - Page 3

Originally posted by: afzal7861

daya 🤗

Originally posted by: meriyaar

OMG DAYA!!

OMG Meri Yaar! You're excitement is contagious😆

How have you been?

I've been good lol but we covered that in pms already...

I like seriously love you!!!!

And I'm like seriously flattered😳😛

Sooo happy you posted another story!

I am happy you are happy...!

This is beyond AMAZING! love it, it's so interesting and has me fully hooked!

Thank you, and yep so i've heard you're hooked and totally love that its a different story. I am glad you do...and of course will UD soon :) Thank you for reading and commenting and all the support !

Update soon

take care

xoxo

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Hi Daya🤗
WOOOWWW...You come back again with a n interesting story...How can I forget that little girl Sara!!!!!...She acted really superb in Deiva Thirumagal Movie...I love her sooo much.She is sooo cute...Perfect selection Daya👍🏼...Wow..What an introduction.Your Opening was really fantastic..I loved Jagdap,Pakhi ki characters...Its really Different And interesting story Daya...I love Naku's cute daughter Shrishti...Your Dialogues were really nice..I..Enjoyed reading...So shrushti is Dutta's daughter😉😉...Can't wait now...Its a suspense update...Please update soon dear😳😳...You're sooo sweet🤗...Thank you sooo much for your Awesome update dear...🤗🤗🤗...I'm sooo happy...Thank you... Thank you ..Thank you🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: uwith

hi daya

its great to have you back...our requests brought you back😊

read the prologue & chapter ...awesome start ...naku has a child from dutta...he is aware now...its very interesting how naku will react to it...pls continue & enjoyed reading .regards uvi

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya

Have I read this right daya you are back with a new SS I 'm so glad thank you. The Prologue and the first part was very good so Naku Is a mother and she Is living with jagtap and pakki are caring loving them both. Dutta and Baji are Investigators Dutta see the file of the case and see It's Naku and she has a child Dutta tells baji she might be his. Pls continue can't wait for the next part

Take care now

Originally posted by: aishwish

Brilliant start!!!!!

will b back soon 😳

****edited

Daya!!!

Aish!!!

Hugzzz🤗
*Hugs back*

Good to see you!

Okay somebody told me, you left the forum or something'..is it? Here I can see a brand new SS, and still wondering about your stay on the forum'.height of stupidity.😆

Lol i did leave. Well actually I was always here in my ghostly presence. No one knew when I was here and when I wasn't but now I'm back back...with an SS...short one though then I'll be M.I.A again😆
Anyways, lets come to the SS. Interesting, in fact intriguing is the word. I'm absolutely in love with the fact that the concept of "reviving old flames" this time has a flake of suspense. So, full marks on conceptualization👏.
Thank you! Lol personally I love a suspense stories...and thought why not go for one with them...
I don't know, how you'd planned your story and whether this whole anonymous messenger element will be a parallel plot, a sub plot, or just a cupid'.whatever, it certainly garners attention for your write up, and I'm quite sure however it shapes up, it's not getting an abrupt ending (always have been more confident about the ff writers than the cvs😆).
Its a secondary plot. One that will be the reason for the reunion and events surrounding it but its a secondary focus..their relationships is the main focus still...I just wove in a little suspense to make it interesting...I'm going to try not to make an abrupt stop😆 Since its a short one I think it'll shape up fine.
The whole naku jagtap bond is just so heart warming. As a character I've always been very fond of Jagtap. Talking about this, I would like to mention one more thing that I quite liked, that though this SS has nothing to do with the screened show, still the characters shares the bond quite similar to the show, like naku and jagtap, or dutta and baaji. I know once declared that the SS and the show holds no similarity the expectation to get the equations between characters same as show is unfair to you, and I should be prepared to witness something totally oppposite, for instance dutta may not be at loggers head with jagtap, and in fact I'm looking forward to such novel developments. And I quiet liked the fact that nakusha has got adoptive parents (I guess that's the correct term😆)''.it's easy to explain their absolutely okay approach on nakusha being an unmarried mother'.and I loved the firm tone of jagtap while mentioning it to baaji'the man clearly doesn't wants any sympathy for nakusha, or ashamed of her single mother status.
Yes, the story bears no resemblance but I wanted some of the key relationships. My reason for using Jagtap and Pakhi instead of Babi and Ganapat is because I found it was easier to work with. Jagtap had been a understanding soul in whereas there was too much baggage with the other two😆 since I am trying to keep some of the main aspects of the characters and their relationships i just figured Jagtap suited the role. Pakhi i threw in there as bonus...i wanted to write about the woman who ruled Jagtap's heart ...😃 You know, I'm glad to hear you caught onto Jagtap's tone when telling baaji about Naku's marital status. He doesn't want people to judge her and is protective of her.
Humm'.. So,Mr. patil is a man of flings impressive, and a detective, which means intelligent😲 now I can say this SS has nothing to do with the show😆.🤣 I concur ! haha. Just kidding, you know I liked the concept, well daya I must compliment you for all those work moments of baaji, (the way he was observing the surroundings, for example) and dutta ,though he hasn't started working yet and whatever work he has done yet, no doubt consists brilliant calculation, but still it's more of *ahem ahem* personal☺️😆'
Thank you. Of course since ther ex military and covert ops specialist...they need to show their worth with their actions. Dutta, you will see more of his work strategies but like you said this time it comes with a distraction he may even falter on his work😆
Seriously, you have hooked me up like anything'..and what I find amazing is the pace of the story, it's gonna be short, so everything has to be point blank,😉 there's only this one chapter dedicated to the establishment of the story, charcterters and their past (I suppose)..still it never came to be as a rushed chapter'..it is so steady and has a constant flow..I loved this quality the most.
I'm glad you thought so. I hoped it wasn't too fast or it didn't get confusing. Since its a short story...it had to be point blank. The past won't be in details per say but it'll come up again here and there...to explain things as we go. I guess lets see how this goes. I not only have to think about rekindling an old flame but i also have to think about the relationship btwn a little girl and Dutta...and i think i'm going to make that one more relaxed and enjoyable.

Oh! Daya do update soon, ''''..I'm eagerly waiting.

Okie dokie smokie. Will do😃

P.S. I promise I won't force you to make this SS longer.😆

Good to know😆

P.P.S ''..Is the guy sending her the letters is going have a name of Sudershan, suresh, worst deegu'more than worst any of shristi's playschool mate😆

LOL nope...if i use common names you'll know who it is before i even build it up to the final exploit...but hey i am sick and tired of those names ! haha

Anyway Aish, thank you for reading and commenting. Means a lot. Loved reading your thoughts.

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi daya

you are back with a bang😊..i 'm also thrilled like everyone...missed you

awesome writer is back & fab prologue & story

naku is single mom with daughter...good support in jagtap & pakhi...dutta will be back in her life for better ...continue it soon

thanxs for come back😊with beautiful story

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi daya

Hey Nakusha! Yep me back, it's true😆

..Enjoyed reading the new story the premise is too good..Naku is receiving letters but it sounds more like somebody is stalking at her. My fav character of jagtap is there..You did include jagtap in your previous ff but for pakhi it's a new character & u weaved it well

Glad you enjoyed it ! Thank you. I thought Pakhi's character would be a nice little bonus in the SS. Since Iwasn't following much about LTL except the characters I thought why not. Glad you liked the addition.

Naku has cute daughter😊baji gave her a cute name curly locks & he takes up the case..I was waiting for dutta's entry & he is bajis partner in crime I mean detection😆..Dutta had flings before but it seems he fell of naku & it's been work & work after she left..Now he has chance to amend the wrong he did & make up with naku & curly lock

Yeah, I enjoy writing Srishti's bits. Curly Locks is a name someone used on my once and i found it rather amusing. Of course, it wasn't a nickname for me just a comment in passing but i remembered it when I thought about this little girl's character and thought hey why not!

Yep Duji together forever 😆😆 haha i couldn't separate them. I love them both. You know I've been thinking about something. I know this story is short and if I know you all well, once i end this SS i am going to get a 'plz write more' comment. And though I usually write on Dutta and Naku I've been considering doing a spin off from this specific SS and giving Baaji his own love story. Suspense and all as well :P After this one. I dunno for sure yet. I guess I will wait and see :P

Who is this stalker? Ud soon can't wait

Lol you'll have to wait and see😉

Thanks for reading and commenting Nakusha!

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi daya awesome ud😊 i 'm happpy to see you back...its a awesome suprise... the prologue & the chapter is too good

all the character jagtap & pakhi baaji are awesome

dutta & naku have a cute girl curly lock..

i 'm waiting for next chapter ..pls pls ud soon

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

hey daya ..its so good to see u back with another wonderful story..i always maintain that this forum is addictive and its hard to quit it , we may come here less often but leaving it completely is out of question.

Hey Rose, I have to say you are absolutely right. I can't leave forever but I do come less often. Its surprisingly good to be back with a story and all. I am enjoying it really. And it truly had helped unblock my mind for the other one. All these ideas flowing around now.

first and foremost , i loved the title of the SS gives, it gives a james bond kind of a feeling ..lol..especially after reading it where duji are investigators and the banner is beautiful , without going through the prologue and update i thought that the little girl might be young nakku but nope she is tasha's daughter, indeed very cute like them.
Thank you, i thought it to be appropriate title since its a short ss and everything will happen point blank 😆 As for the the little girl. I remember seeing that picture and thinking she is wearing Naku's clothes haha and then when I thought of this story it came to mind and worked well as their kid.

so our dutta has a playboy kind of an image , interesting , goes well with his profession ..lol..although this story is quite different from the show but still you have kept the essence of duji's relationship intact..i quite like the fact that this time instead of ganpat n babi we have jagtap n paki as nakku's supposed parents or caretakers , it would have been difficult for babi n ganpat to accept an unwed mother. the bond between nakku n jagtap is beautiful . then i am loving the kind of mystery that you have woven into the story.definitely a very promising start and i am looking forward to knowing more about tasha and of course who is the one sending letters to Nakku

Yep we have a ex-playboy really😆 and of course I am a huge fan of duji so naturally I've decided to keep their relationship. As for babi and ganpat being dead...they came with too much baggage i decided i didn't want to deal with them😆 Found Jagtap suited the role more and pakhi is my bonus addition. I wanted to see what i can do with her being alive...since she happens to rule Jagtaps heart. I am glad you like the way its started...the mystery is just to make it all a little more interesting.

Thank you for reading and commenting Rose :)