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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi daya welcome 👏the new SS is superb like previous one...its a masala story...luv,betrayl, investigation ...enjoying the new D-N with curly locks ,jagtap ,pakhi, & baji awesome characters...pls continue & ud fast



Hey jedy! Thanks for the welcome back. Glad you're liking the new SS. Thank you for reading and commenting. Keeps me going always :) Will ud soon. Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi daya its a pleasant suprise...happy to have you back...you gave a gift to us...from birthday girl...its a great start...naku is staying with jagtap & pakhi...they are great support to her & daughter...curly lock is cute just like the pic dutta 's past came in front in form a case...the suspense is good...dutta & naku together again...wow! can't wait hope you have a great birthday😊



Hey Sona :)

Yep birthday girl is giving you all a treat for her birthday 😛
I'm glad to be back Sona and good to hear you like the SS.
Will UD soon...and thank you for the bday wishes 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hi daya
thanxs for anno...next chapter soon...pls...regards uvi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Daya🤗
Thank you sooo much for your awesome annotations dear...Loved them a lot❤️...Eagerly waiting for the update.😳😳...Please update soon dear.😳😳..Take care..🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi daya
thanks for anno,u r one talented gal & u should keep on writing ..i just want u to keep on spining new stories & ideas...i 'm sure u have many ideas..u won't be ever short of appreciation ..😊story is interesting & wait for next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

HI Daya

Thank you for your lovely anno. Looking forward reading the next part will be waiting


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Res..

Hi daya
Oops! almost missed the bus.. 😳
Dutta worried of naku,s reaction seein him, basically he,s guilty of his actions n the consequences thereof.. But the reluctant casanova had made it clear for naku from day one of his aversion to commitment.
If He knows her in n out, then why hadnt he guaged reason for her sudden disappearance from his life, how reckless of him 😛 Now he,s raged that someone dared to stalk naku? where was he all these days?
But Dutta very particular with the secrecy n rightly so.. jagtap pleased with his commitment. Have to wait n watch how long ? Lol..
So Shrishti the little bundle of joy hasnt let naku forget the man who fathered her, ofcourse its expected she would be carrying his physical n emotional traits atleast to some extent... aww daya the way you describe the mother daughter duo brings out a smile and warmth. Atleast there is no animosity inside her with regards him which is a plus point for reconciliation.
Ooh think of the devil n here he is, the shock surprise, the confusion was beautifully written... naku,s racing heart, no wonder she fell for his charms then n looking at her situation if he remains any longer she,s a goner. But i was waiting to see any hint of feelings in him, blank 😲 I gues He has it all covered up behind his under cover job lol.. It was amusing how he was trying to force himself in n naku hoping against hope he would somehow vanish n inbetween you have the little one asking her mum to move aside .. Lol.. If naku is blanked out by dutta, dutta is blanked out by shrishti, he had no answers, only questions... Its hard to imagine what a person goes throu when he/she comes face to face with a child they didnt know existed. Naku has no respite, its raining surprises..😃 Baji barging in n moreso his familiarity with his curly locks., Thats a very "cute na" moment
So Baji is naku,s childhood friend ? Yet he let her disappear ?? 😲 But he,s all ears n eyes with the current situation.. quick to notice, his observation of nisha saxena,s expressions does raise suspicion, good goin baji..
Oh what a palava 😆 the biological parents having a tuff time answering curly locks simple question "what should i call you" poor little thing or should we sympathise with the adults lol...
Yes, it must have been like bein hit by bullets, those words from naku when he asked if shristi was his... God! I luvd the simple question, "is shristi mine" Its so profound.. Hain? Dreams of House full of children ?? Lol .. which century he belongs to, enjoyed his time with women ahem ahem.. 👎🏼 yaar daya this piece of info is hard to digest, he sounds more like a M&B male or a james bond, a playboy for sure.. He is uttering all the wrong words for starters, as if a daughter was some kind of a burden, an obligation... Instead of rejoicing or atleast regretting for missing out on the joy of becoming a father, or for inflicting unintentional mental, physical, financial trauma on naku.. she,s has had to deal so much all alone. 😔
But whats amazing is that the two were dealing with the whole thing in a mature way, very candid bereft of any display of emotions..
Gosh! Shrishti is the target n this stalker is no joker, he means every word which is making things worse than imagined.., oh no, colateral damage.. pakhi mehta,s hurt but heartening to see her calm, unperturbed by the bullet injury.. All the while watching Dutta n his anguish, lot to explain for dutta lol...
Daya would luv to see our dutta drop his cool cucumber exterior, a peek a boo into his vulnerabilities... But thank you for a brilliant update, waiting eagerly for the next. Take care 👏


Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
update tasha met and cnfrontation letter attack dutta protecting shrishti



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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
RES
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OMG that was sooo effing AMAZING!
so much happened, seriously loving this story!
You are just pure genius!
I love how much of a wonderful person Dutta is, he's so understanding <3
Sorry for late comment 😳

update soon,
take care
xoxo
Edited by meriyaar - 12 years ago

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