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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
the description of dutta walking in the long corridor of the jail while being taken to shamlal was so well written that i could actually imagine the whole scene ..dutta the brooding guy doesn't want to forget his past and wears his old clothes ..although wishes to live in the present but is clearly stuck in his past .
.baaji admiring his bhau ..naughty ..lol..somethings can't be changed like him running n hugging dutta 🤗..gold digger seema marrying that old garage owner ..good riddens from bad stuff ...
but one thing which is so different in this ff is AS - dutta relation ..always imagined , seen n read about their warm love where dutta is fully devoted to her but here things are not as expected ..like this change
alright so nakku is not fair but dusky hope she is not hiding her true color and what she refused to take his help and lift 😡???? silly woman when he clearly said " aaja meri gaadi mein baith ja" 😆
now AS needs nakku's help ? lets see how she helps her out

a wonderful start 👍🏼 oh how can i forget ..hammie you certainly don't need to include this line * , part of his curly black chest hairs evident* we know that hammies dutta will always have phulwari on his chest ☺️


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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

hi hamlet

awesome ud😊

entry of dutta was great!
baji is a dependble friend
naku is a social worker& she appilies soot
dutta company may make her brave😊
dutta has a good heart but with a past
seema is married its good😆
i liked the ff & million thanxs for giving to our demand
can't wait for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: tahera57

oh accha nakusha, i thought meri shadi ki ghalat khabar denay wali naku n kahin apni sagai ki baat gol kar di.

chalo abki tum involved nahin jab hogi toh chupkay chupkay nahin karna mujhay bhi dil khush karnay ki ijazat dena, meharbani hogi😃

tahera
kya khicdi paka lete ho khicdi nahin biryani😆😆nahin yaar abhi kuch aisa nahin ha .hoga toh shout from the rooftop .tujhe nahin baataon ge toh kise😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Hi hamlet was waiting for something spectuclar ...you didn't disappoint 😊PR was highly sucessful & it had me & my mates longing for ...FA is very engrossing ...dutta is criminal unlike LTL but not don...naku is a social worker not maid...its a different story😊 dutta past ...long sentence in jail...finally free...
how dutta & naku path crossed...the development is interesting ...like their maiden meeting
we are loving it👏waiting for friday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
hi hammie 😊 its a awesome ud
great start 👏 dutta entry was great dutta a criminal released from jail loved the baji dutta bonding
and good to know semma is married with 3 kids
naku is a social worker hhmm something different
hammie nice story enjoyed reading it
waiting for next
ud soon

i miss you all so much but ghar mein shaadi hai aur shaadi ke chakkar mein main gana chakkar ban gay hoon
love you all🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: afzal7861


i miss you all so much but ghar mein shaadi hai aur shaadi ke chakkar mein main gana chakkar ban gay hoon
love you all🤗

Oye ganchakar enjoy the ocassion 😆 congratulations betaji , waise kiski shadi hai? teri toh nahi 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Oye ganchakar enjoy the ocassion 😆 congratulations betaji , waise kiski shadi hai? teri toh nahi 😉

ooohhh bharti mere mama ke baat ki shaadi meri khala ki beti se hai

aur wise bhi meri shaadi ho chuki hai 2011meni hoi thi aur doosri shaadi karke mujhe jhoote
nahi khane meri biwise aur meri amma ji se

and thanks for your wishes😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
edited post on page 8 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: afzal7861

ooohhh bharti mere mama ke baat ki shaadi meri khala ki beti se hai

aur wise bhi meri shaadi ho chuki hai 2011meni hoi thi aur doosri shaadi karke mujhe jhoote
nahi khane meri biwise aur meri amma ji se

and thanks for your wishes😊

😆 no afzal i dont want you to be in any kind of trouble, adab to ur ammaji n biwiji 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
@warda.. Brilliant comments on pg 8 👍🏼 i wished you had continued.
@nakusha.. luvd your comments as well.

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