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sasisri

@sasisri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

hi hamlet
nice start😊...loved it..didnt expect naku to b a social worker...and the first meetng..nice one
waiting for the next part😊

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uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hi hamlet
its a awesome UD...the story is different ...dutta a criminal released from jail ...baji & his bonding reminded of LTL 😊...naku is a social reformer ...guessing is over gals...looking fwd to a beautiful FF & ud ...regards uvi

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: tahera57
nakusha ji thanks for all he information, waisay ek raaz ki baat main bhi aapko bataon, mujhay thodi mystry pasand hai, warna maza nahin aata. baki masti khatam aaj se writr ji ki amad honay wali hai.😛.

tahera raaz faash ho gaya...na tum jano na hum 😆😆😆😆writer ke entry zabardast hai..baki masti chalo rakho

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

😆hi my amazinggg hammiee

jis ka hame thaa intezar woh ghadi aa gai , 😊hammiee u supressed all our expectation & intution 😆i hope you got the pun

loved the inaugral ud ,😃would be back with comments

the starting scene our duttas entry & his attitude established it as a character with attitude

hammiee like always you gave detail description 😊& made it picture clear ,he is known as bhao in prison too ,yes the scar of spending best yrs of his life in confine of jail has made him bitter

while passing through the jail you described it wonderfully made it viual ,the preaching by the jailor to do good & not return back .hopefully our dutta never gets in back

the changing scene to his old clothe ,he realised much has changed when he looked at his reflection

baji is ever faithful friend ,dutta is one lucky son of gun 😆PR effect hammiee, FA dutta ka takya kalaam is actually quite dabangg goes with his rustic personality

seema 😡thankfully is married to old chap ,mooti & with 3 kids .hamara dutta ke way se out

the fly reunion brought ut the gluf btwn AS & dutta ,as you like to keep suspense😊 we like to get the reason for the rift & why he murder his father when mem decides

the adda scene with baji brought memory of LTL

saab ko pata chal gaya hammiee naku social worker hai😆u have to think different

she applies soot & here is the twist ,rowday guys actually need somebody like dutta😡

dutta & nakus meeting was in strange circumstances ,he did notice her & cared for safety ,wish more of him around

the precap with AS & naku discussing duttas job can't wait

great start hammieee PR has set a mark & u lived upto it

it was again & visual treat felt like watching rather than reading ,u can only do so hammiee

haato mein mere mehndi lage hai hammiee magar comment bina nahin rahsake 😆

as always you are amazinggg hammiee ,big hug lots of luv😃

Edited by Nakusha - 12 years ago

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

nice ud hammie thanks for pm.

bit confused how did dutta's 27yrs old when he was only in jail for 6and 1/2 yrs 😕. i must've missed something. so he's not a don nor a criminal IMO he's innocent, his father's death seems more likley to be an accident. seema married to GO means he might not get the job with baji as a mechanic. nakku a social worker is probably going to help him find his feet outside of prison, don't see him doing that somehow. n.o softenning towards AS even Baji trying his best to make him understand how she missed her son daily. nice start hammie thanks for ud. TC.

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

HI Hamlet

👏 Awesome first chp. Dutta released from jail yet he's and Bajis friendship still as strong. Thank you for making seema married and with kids in you FF. Naku and dutta met and she is a social work I hope naku will help him in some way or another.😉

Thanks as always look forward to next part. Take care

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: tahera57
nice ud hammie thanks for pm.
bit confused how did dutta's 27yrs old when he was only in jail for 6and 1/2 yrs 😕. i must've missed something. so he's not a don nor a criminal IMO he's innocent, his father's death seems more likley to be an accident. seema married to GO means he might not get the job with baji as a mechanic. nakku a social worker is probably going to help him find his feet outside of prison, don't see him doing that somehow. n.o softenning towards AS even Baji trying his best to make him understand how she missed her son daily. nice start hammie thanks for ud. TC.

taheraji😊

kya confusion hai ,dutta was 17yrs when he was convicted of crime & he was sentenced to 10yrs imprisonment & ab calculate 17+10=27yrs😆he was quite young ,in India few yrs back they changed the law & below 18yrs is considered juveline unfortunate for dutta he was convicted as per old .

agree with you nice start😊

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hain i thought 7 yrs milay thay and 6 months pehlay release hogaya.

10 yrs for a crime with not a 100% certainty😡 and that to a juvenile. na reason i wanted clarified was i was thinking he would b about 23yrs and then get into dongiri but he's already a mature man so he can't now so expect him to do something decent now. there goes my don Dutta. ab kiya karay ga. more predictions from ur side please till next ud.

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: tahera57
hain i thought 7 yrs milay thay and 6 months pehlay release hogaya.
10 yrs for a crime with not a 100% certainty😡 and that to a juvenile. na reason i wanted clarified was i was thinking he would b about 23yrs and then get into dongiri but he's already a mature man so he can't now so expect him to do something decent now. there goes my don Dutta. ab kiya karay ga. more predictions from ur side please till next ud.

prediction chalo rakho ur fav baji style😆

don kyon naku haa na koi dhanka job delade woh bhi khud ke association mein 😃

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Nakusha
prediction chalo rakho ur fav baji style😆
don kyon naku haa na koi dhanka job delade woh bhi khud ke association mein 😃
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nakusha ye mehndi kis khushi main lagi hai humse sharenahin kiya.
and i checked prologue it's 7 yrs. sentence tha.

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