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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hammie kya baat hai es baar bhi your in time👏
very nice ud like dutta and nakus car convo sab kuhauh hain naye ghar mein aa ke naku aur us ki family dutta ki family sab ek he ghar mein rahen gey AS ko koi aitraz nahi hai she happy roop bhi happy hai naku ke saath love bajis nautanki to
dutta ka andaz kuch badal badal sa hai kuch zyada he baho kah raha hai woh naku ke sath sudhar jao meena naku ke samane apni dadagiri na dekha tum
hammie lovely ud enjoyed every bit
thank you so much
waiting for next
plzzz ud soon ok take care beyy

ooyyee hammie lal gulab pasand aaye
mujhe bhi pasand hai bahut
yeh bhi tumhara liye







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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet fab ud 😊dutta got naku to PN & allowed her to work..dutta cares for her ..shabir & digu are 😆i actually feel they deserve it ..pls ud soon thank you Stock Photo - 19053740
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet liked the ud...dutta & naku car convo was cute 😊naku has already adjusted to new surrounding...babi is maid & ganpat maybe employed soon..dutta & sandwich was well wriiten...next part would be equally interesting😊ud... soon...regards uvi
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet superb ud! its dancing days for naku she is with dutta...babi ..ganpat ...AS & fly rest of gang with PN like house are dancing with joy😊ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi hamlet
awesome story...Dutta is in space where he is happier than before...he got naku somewhere he knows he like her...naku is deeply ,madly in luv 😊she is seeing him in different light
the sandwich scene reminded of PR😊even in LTL sandwich was dutta fav ...he is already veteran in business not a beginner the way he commands...story is good...😊waiting for UD
Edited by sona89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hammie its great to see you updating every friday

dutta is getting comfortable with his kali gori and moreover thinking why is she feeling awkward with him ..now someone tell him that his presence can make any girl go weak in her knees ..nakku is also smart , happily and easily moving in his house with her family * winks* ..good will get to spend time with him ..her fears and apprehensions towards his overnight change in status were well written ...liked the way he encouraged her to keep working ..maybe he fears that if she stays at home then will definitely spy on him ..lol..now this ff is looking like LTL with babi n company also getting screen space ..baaji is so cute ..enjoyed his interaction with dutta ..kala n leela also coming to PN ..but i think in this ff kala is positive and quite close to dutta ..i hope i am right ..wouldn't want to see her plotting against tasha
shabbir n deegu together ..what an awesome combination *yuck* i was laughing the way u described both of them ..dutta shall remain dutta full of attitude and arrogance ..even though jeera has done so much for him still he doesn't consider him as his boss ..in fact it seems like the other way round ..lol..chalo for the time being dutta didn't have to kill anybody but lets see how long will he keep himself away from this blood shed ..eager to know what will happen then
btw do u love feeding your dutta with sandwiches ..lol..i prefer to keep him starving in my stories
as always a very well written and enjoyable update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

hi hammie 🤗
ummm warrie.. this sure is a pleasant surprise to see your comment in time..no well done for you..though.. woh kya haina tu phir lazy ho jayea ge..

loved the update..its so beautifully penned...and you managed in such a short period ...its incredible 👏.."if once I commit, I don't even listen to my self!"..
finally dutta remembered to ask her if she is shocked over his decision lol...now he knows ab kahan jae gi 😆 humm.. "akhir tumhe ana hai zara daer lage ge.."😆oyeee ediut gana hai..
so formality puri kar lou...i was expecting naku's wide eyed correction wide green doe eyes reaction over the size of the housewhich i loved iy when dutta called it ghar .it was reminding me of the song yeh tera ghar yeh mera ghar.ohhh haan woh scene kya baat the ..now naku's concern over how her family is going to cope with dutta's family seems out of context as she knows them well how simple AS baaji and roops are...and its not that over night they are going to act all big...neither they are kind of people who will ever do so...they only thing which can aggravate her is that yes the comfort or more so freedom of your own house is something else aacha! you don't want to live in Dutta's PN..most people would love that..i loved duttas explanation over it ..so true that its the strengths and experiences of the members wich make a house turn into a ghar..and if incase she had any relation with dutta*cough* then her confidence would be something elsedekhaa ah gayea na tu line pe...ganpat and baabi seems the most excited one and baabi haiinn she giggles and blush at the thought of sharing room with ganpat*rolls eyes* 😆..haan mujhe babi ke expressions yaad hain..very amusing

ohh so naku well noticed the bodyguards there usko pata nahi hai abhi eh kitne nikame hain.haaa hoo fantastic comment😆..neither dutta knows that sab kaam security ke usay aur baaji ko hi karne parhe gay.
the thing note worthy is that this is just the beginning that naku raised a question dont know how she will react with the passage of time and how is he going to work freely.😕 dekho kiya karta hai sherro.. hero giri tu kare ga..

so pagal niwas main mahale's bhi enter ho gaye hain great combo with patils 😆 ...baabi all set to show her skills in kitchen but for a change good to see naku making face over the idea of
working there...and im so pleased by dutta who supports that women should work too and wants to set an example for PW people through his sister and and woh kali gorri 😉...well shall I say he has some sense of modernity about him.. women power..

with every ud we see more and more interactions between AS and dutta ... good observation warrie.. yes that is the general aim.specially here he thought that she must know the reason why naku and her family were there ...this is a surprise that kala and leela will live there too...dont know how they are going to react over naku... i hope they are a positive addition in the house.ummm..lets see, I just felt hey needed to be included.

dutta is in deed a hard nut still not satisfied now when he has shifted to a big house...but this attitude always leads a man to attain more...isi andaaz par tu jeera marta hai😆 Jeera ke tactics read in next UD..
security cameras interesting ...naku ke room ke paas bhi laga dena aik 😉..hummm may be..
now now supriya jealous ho rahi hai na hehehe ...and even provked naku to spy him hawww he is surely going to kill both of them 😆..they can say we are doing our duty...though its true the change in his status is questionable but we are too pleased to see him as a don.both supriya and naku have gone beyond the patient/healer relation now ...im more shocked for supriya though for naku me all happy shappy😃oyeee supriya duty ker rehe hai..

you know apart from duttas room their dinning hall is my most fav place of PN as it was most captured in ltl too where we can see the whole family.now hold on what does dutta wants for breakfast...yeh dou din pehle hi basti say ayya hai na..sandwiches?? .white bread crusty sides trimmed...nakhray😆 yesshh.. sandwiches ke bahger meri writing in complete..Dutta ka connection hai..
now my reaction is exactly like nakus is he actually fond of sandwiches
he did say it's easy to consume..finger food..
jeera heheh mujhe lagta hai yeh admi duniya main bas dutta se apni insult karwane ayya hai.😆😆..haa hoo yes looks like it warrie.. he puts his foot in his mouth...wese dutta is a bad boy kabhi tu maaf kar diya kare beechare ko kyun? he bloody asks for it all the time! ...har bar classic insult karta hai😆 kiya kare poor jeera dil de baitha hai dutta ko😆haann!dutta an awe inspiring object ..dutta is one of his kind ive never seen anyone taking thier boss so lightly 😆 he knows he is indispensible!
shabbir and deegu another good for nothing lot ...saath karne kiya aaye thay agar yun pitna tha...hahaha tooo good warrie ...and man that seth sher ko daikh kar picture hi badal gaye beti ka lagan...ummh yes he pressed the right button on dutta!
poor deegu and shabbir unki dhulae kyn ki woh kaunsa uski beti ki shadi ka khna lay kar bhaag rahe thay hahaha but what a sight...full on paisa wasool scene hai ...thank you.. warrie dil mein angst hai..ummh has to come out somewhere..
precap ohh is it dutta at nakus office ...chalo bob ko bhi darshan ho jaenge iss mahan hasti ke😉
yep you may be right girlie.. read in tomm's UD..
thankyou hammie for an amazing update ...and i know in two days you managed it ..hats off to your commitment.👏.you always make your readers happy...😊..thanks warrie.. glad to make you happy..thanks also for your great comments ,funny, me was chuckling the other night when you told me you hd edited..
waiting eagerly for the next ud .
take care!!!...pms main tu aap milte nahi*sniff* 😛 ummh kam nehi kerne dete tu.. aur ye pariyaan kaun hain? iam a doggie person.. you should know that.. chaal ab mau thek kar..😃thanks for the comment.. much love, yours hammie..
lots of Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Res 😆...Twinky 'll make her Blah Blah on Tomorrow😆...

Hi Hammie🤗

hi twinks😃.. how are you.. was busy doing UD .. noticed your pms will reply.. girlie.. will you forgive hammie for being a lazy so and so!

Wah..kya Zabardast update hai👏 !.Liked it to the core❤️.wow! What a smile from our Dutta !I liked naku's eagerness to reach Dutta's place😃.dutta behaved very gently with Naku❤️.I liked their car convo❤️. Naku feared about their status😭. But our Dutta is sooo sweet❤️..Yeah..Naku is an educated person😃..Oyee Babi😡!Yeah It's a big house..Baji teasing Babi🤣 & Babi got shy. Why Babi😡?? babi is a silly billy she comes out with these odd turns.. Why this shy & blush🤢???...Please stop your expression..We can't bear with it. Dear Dutta😳!! Do You know one thing😳?.Our Naku is an intelligent girl😳.So you can't hide the truth about your job from Naku.😳 ummh should be interesting to see.. what happensYeah this Roop is soo cute na😃..Sweet Dutta..He allowed naku to continue her job😃.Baaji is a right hand to Dutta..I liked these two friends ki convo.Yeah ! Dutta is a complicated person😕.He changed his behavior from time to time😕.Shabbir & Diggu are baboons😆Awwwinteresting precap😳..Naku is searching about Dutta's job😲..Can't wait..Can't wait😳..iam sooo pleased that you are warming to this FF.. for me its regression.. going back to the original LTL1.. with my own spice of course.. thanks so much for your, mighty impressive and colorful comment.. I loved going through it..and as for the screen shots.. brillianttt.. always welcome they give my update more meat.. keep reading and commenting, thanks for the lovely images too twinky.. much love ,yours hammie..



Its really an awesome update dear👍🏼Liked it sooo much❤️.Thanks sooo much for your Excellent update👏👏. Eagerly waiting for the next update😳...Please update soon dear😳






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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet
hi dilse ,great to see you again mate!
awesome ud ..dutta & naku in PN..glad to receive a positive response

dutta is sher
diggu & shabir 😆they deserve it
ud soon
thanks for reading and commenting.. love the image.. you are welcome my friend.. will UD tomm. much love hammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee

loved the ud 😊
hiii naku tu ah gaye.. great to see you!

Naku arrive at PN aur uske aan ban shan mein ghoom ho gai😊..babi ate he shuru kitchen pe kabza aur naku ko bhi bai banana pe tule hai..wht is wrong with this woman ..dutta is sensible guy to understand she is educated & needs to work..i was wondering if dutta wouldn't have interrupt naku might have just kept her mouth shut

ummh no I don't think so..she seems clued on..

I hope other fly members are positive & kala isn't a witch .. may be so that she is not..

Roops & naku will carry on with their work ..its good

yes they can't waste their qualifications

Sups is quite smart & she feels something fishy abt duttas sudden rise..naku was saved by dutta & she might now perceive his power differently ..morey was a evil & dutta a savior for her

supriya looks at things objectively..Naku ummh might be more subjective

Dutta apne kaam mein lag gaya ..he has good heart & extended the time period considering man difficult situation

well naku .. this in keeping with he man with the golden heart.

Enjoyed the trip to PN once again got a glimpse of sethji & nakus room 'ganpat hopefully is better than his LTL counterpart😆kahin bar ko baar baar na dekhe..touche! haaa haa

hammiee as always u r amazinggg😊big hug tc
thanks for your lovely comment naku.. much love, yours hammie. thank for the sweet image..😛
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