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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

HAILA.??

Two days ago hammie i thought you said havent thought abt the UD even? 😆 But its great to see you committed with the friday date 😉 , wil be back soon...ummmh rolling my eyes... and taking a deep breath.. waise tu ye baata eyeballs? tu hai kahan?? playing hard to get... oyeeerrrahhh you'd better make your presence known!

Hammie
Firstly have to ask how you managed the update which i assumed was one week away,.. maybe i took ur words too seriously, good one thou 😛. Anyway thank you for the update, pm n all...well you know me never do what i profess.. occasionally might..😛
Now can anyone stop Dutta from havin his way.. No way ! he decides to take naku with him n here she is following his orders meekly. Naturally she is overwhelmed with the overnight swing in his fortunes but lacks the courage to take him on... well just like Dutta lacks courage in comin clean with naku, is amazingly evasive n brushes aside her queries 😡..slim chance of him saying any thing either
Hmm is he proposing to her in a clandestine way? noerhhh absolutely not! hum dono milke building ko ghar banayenge, woh kaise, care to explain duttaji ? 😆.. But naku is not so sure of herself anymore just as her parents position in the house.. Stunned at the overnight change of their status
Wow, now its time to fill the house i gues, lol... Leela n kala too joining for some family drama. Wil be interesting to see their reaction to naku,s special status in the house. Atleast roops n AS have no issues. Naku getting a taste of his mood swings, his indifference to her invitation.. tum kaun tu main kaun? ... This reminds of someone very similar 🤣..grrrhhh😡
Yeh toh shuruwat hai naku baby, aage aage dekho hota hai kya...lol yeh admi tujhe yedha na banaye toh ? 😃..or her him.. yaad hai bart, baji ka dialogue.. ye lardki thujhe yera buna de ge..😆
Kali gori, waise since she has shed her dark avatar for good, this name doesnt invoke the same fun it used to.. naku updating sups alerts the lady, but the two ladies fail to understand they are haples in his matter if not already dancing to his tunes, its he who decides if he has to see the counseller n not the other way. Haan, kabhi kabhi emerald eyes does cast a spell.. 😉..ummh dutta no way takes orders.. from pushy females se , you must be kidding
Not even jeera is spared of his downright insulting rude boorish attitude, koi pagal hi hoga jo isko kaam pe rakha hai ...hainnn we'll see.bartee But still waiting for the price that dutta will have to pay for jeera,s extraordinary favours. Gosh! Now its the turn of some baboons, two excuse of an henchmen, brilliant description ! 😆 if one asks me their very existense is an excuse. isko kethe hain venting off Hope dutta takes all his frustrations on these two namonas.. Hammie your description of the two were perfect, ofcourse you have mastered the art of naming people too, no match. un dono ke tu main#😡😡..
Chalo dutta apna haat gandha karne ki naubat nahi ayi, changla,s goons did the dhulai to perfection 😃 But no such luck when one deals with dutta bhao, Hardluck changla bhai !..more of changla in next UD...
Hmm looks like a special visitor at naku,s office as per the precap? 😉 UMMM haan read all about it..
Thank you hammie dilse once again for a delightful update, entertaining as always. Do continue to enthrall the forum with your passion, Take care !
Sayonara.
oyeee.. enthrall... ko choor ! filhal tu you in particular I want to appall!😡 you are to come out of your.. hiding... roarrr... ummmh ok.. thanks for your comment bart.. much appalled ... hammie.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Hamlet
hi fassben, great to see you mate😊
awesum ud Dutta and Naku conv In the car was nice she and her family were shocked to see how big his house Is. Good to that Dutta told naku and the rest that she will continue going to her job. So Kala and Leela with they husband will also live with them. Hope kala Is not bad In your FF.
Iam so pleased that you warmed to the main points in the UD..keep reading and commenting..
Thanks always It's a joy reading It take care have a lovely weekend
many thanks fassben.. and i love the butterfly very pretty.. much love , yours hammie.


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Posted: 12 years ago
tammy... what a beautiful comment.. thank you from all of us... ohhh the screen shots were so live.. the main plus points were the expressions of the characters.. babi's was mindblowin'..😆 haaa hoo.. dutta /naku brilliant.. all scenes.. and baji.. well he is another wide eyed beauty... awww.. dutta is gadhoss ..some great shots of naku as usual jeep wale scene mein I remember he had a HAIR CUT.. note his hair fall on forehead..😆.. listen keep posting more shots they are winners.. we ❤️ loveee you... many thanks hammie


Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update dutta understanding nakku nervousness

thinking nakku will be intersting to live with


nakku askig distance

not far asking about her view on shifting


her gratfulness dutta smiling
dutta asking to look ahead to house nakku shocked
dutta seeing reaction
nakku asking how can she will live here will she fit here with his family
dutta out burst

nakku asking about security dutta giving lame excuses
nakku family reaching everyone happy with hous and different roomsas with to meet nakku


babi happy to meet as


dutta asked them to let nakku continue her jobroops nakku happy to be together

dutta asking sethji to follow his tai and educateddutta telling reason behind nakku moving as trust bajji roops as usual


bajji nautanki
as asking about kala leela moving with them dutta told her to ask them
dutta thinking


sethji happy and mking dutta sa his room
nakku also want to show his room but dutta nahin supriya nakku talking and nakku telling about moving with dutta supriya asked nakku to keep an eye on dutta breakfast table

nakku in kitchen
dutta inquring about nakku job nakku answering that she can go anytime nakku knowing about dutta sandwitch love

finally nakku leaving to job jeera call to dutta new work

dutta team working

precap nakku saw dutta







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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi hammie kya baat hai es baar bhi your in time👏
hi kaka balli yes I try to please.. when ever I can

very nice ud like dutta and nakus car convo sab kuhauh hain naye ghar mein aa ke naku aur us ki family dutta ki family sab ek he ghar mein rahen gey AS ko koi aitraz nahi hai she happy roop bhi happy hai naku ke saath love bajis nautanki to
dutta ka andaz kuch badal badal sa hai kuch zyada he baho kah raha hai woh naku ke sath sudhar jao meena naku ke samane apni dadagiri na dekha tum..haaa hooo.. oh come on ab woh lamb bun jaye sher se.. NO! HE ROARS.. NO BAA BAA BAA!
hammie lovely ud enjoyed every bit thanks so much for enjoying the update..
thank you so much
waiting for next
plzzz ud soon ok take care beyy listen balli! look out for he UD tommorrow!

ooyyee hammie lal gulab pasand aaye
mujhe bhi pasand hai bahut
yeh bhi tumhara liye
thanksss balli... yes me like flowers.. roses.. and as for the little kitty thank you.. nice one.. oyee sun give my love to bhabi..😃..much love yours hammie.






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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet
hi mirage, great to see you mate..😛
fab ud 😊dutta got naku to PN & allowed her to work..dutta cares for her ..shabir & digu are 😆i actually feel they deserve it ..pls ud soon pleased you enjoyed the UD.. haan now thwey will get what they deserve.. thanks for the smiley...😃😃 back to you with much thanks for reading and commenting.. much love hammie. thank you Stock Photo - 19053740

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet
hi uvi good to see you mate.
liked the ud...dutta & naku car convo was cute 😊naku has already adjusted to new surrounding...babi is maid & ganpat maybe employed soon..dutta & sandwich was well wriiten...next part would be equally interesting😊ud... soon...regards uvi
thanks for reading and iam happy you enjoyed the UD..haan woh sandwiches bhi LTL1 ke stars hain..😛 .. next update will be up tomm.. so read on.. much love yours ,hammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet
hi jedy ,great to see you..😛
superb ud! its dancing days for naku she is with dutta...babi ..ganpat ...AS & fly rest of gang with PN like house are dancing with joy😊ud soon

brilliant that you found the UD enjoyable, carry on reading and commenting ,next UD will be tomm.. much love, yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet
hi sonaaa.. listen i love your comment..😛 thank you so much for it..

awesome story...Dutta is in space where he is happier than before...he got naku somewhere he knows he like her...naku is deeply ,madly in luv 😊she is seeing him in different light
so rewarding to receive a good comment sona.. haan naku does fancy him..
the sandwich scene reminded of PR😊even in LTL sandwich was dutta fav ...he is already veteran in business not a beginner the way he commands...story is good...😊waiting for UD
ummmh oh yes sandwich ke bagher dutta in complete.. 😆 so had to give them coverage.. thanks for your comment and lovely image.. next UD will be tomm.. much love, yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

hey hammie its great to see you updating every friday

helooo rosie posie!.. i am inspired by you.. every monday.. hummh so following your sense of commitment..😛
dutta is getting comfortable with his kali gori and moreover thinking why is she feeling awkward with him ..now someone tell him that his presence can make any girl go weak in her knees ..nakku is also smart , happily and easily moving in his house with her family * winks* ..good will get to spend time with him...dont get your hopes raised up too much, ab uske goodi mein tu woh beitne sa raha! ..her fears and apprehensions towards his overnight change in status were well written ...liked the way he encouraged her to keep working yeah believes in equal opps! ..maybe he fears that if she stays at home then will definitely spy on him ..lol hummm you may be right..now this ff is looking like LTL with babi n company also getting screen space ..baaji is so cute ..enjoyed his interaction with dutta ..kala n leela also coming to PN ..but i think in this ff kala is positive and quite close to dutta ..i hope i am right ..wouldn't want to see her plotting against tasha..ok boss will keep that in mind..
shabbir n deegu together ..what an awesome combination *yuck* i was laughing the way u described both of them ..dutta shall remain dutta full of attitude and arrogance ..even though jeera has done so much for him still he doesn't consider him as his boss ..in fact it seems like the other way round ..lol ye jeera is the pain in his neck!..chalo for the time being dutta didn't have to kill anybody but lets see how long will he keep himself away from this blood shed ..eager to know what will happen then ..he needs to follow his brain not brawn...
btw do u love feeding your dutta with sandwiches haaann sandwiches and dutta go together.. its just they may be unsung heroes ..lol..i prefer to keep him starving in my stories haaa hooo👏 loveddd this ace remark... that too is true his birdie appetite.!😆
as always a very well written and enjoyable update
thankyou for your lovely comment rosie... keep reading and commenting, next one tomm.. much love yours hammie

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hammie aaj annotations aur kal ud wow tum kitni achi ho schi mein😃

thank you for the annotations

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