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Posted: 12 years ago

HI Hamlet

Thank you for the lovely anno looking forwards to the next ud



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Originally posted by: LuvMishalRaheja


HI MISHTI.. sorry for late reply.. baat sun.. kya bat hai again..fab siggys.. my oh my at every scroll one gets to see a new expression of Mishal.. brilliant.. and some super ones of mahi.. at the top..

Hamletji , I've read the prologue n now reading the 1st chapter . One question...how old was Dutta when he got released from the jail in your story ? 😳 dutta is between 28/rising 29 you could say..

A lil request , can you please post your next updates in bold letter and in size 2 ? i will do that.. Actually , my eyesight is really very bad...so...are you a clever dude.. har waqat parhai.. studious sort.. top of the class type..😆 waise tell me would you be able to spot Mishal in a crowd?😆 bol??i bet you can even with closed eyes...😃 haina??
now..coming to the story...I can it's gonna take me ages to come to recent chapters...wow...you've an amazing hand in creating a dark , mysterious n foreboding atmosphere...totally loving it
thanks mate.. pata hai I am plodding on with the UD..for the minute, but me now want to crashhh.. its nearly 1.00 am in London..

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Hamletji , in whichever forum I'm visiting , everyone , just everyone saying that my siggies are beautiful . People who do not see hindi shows , asking who's the guy .
You are right , my eyesight was absolutely fine till class 5 , fir parhai karte karte ankho ki ye haalat hui hai . My studyroom is sort of a library , you can find more than thousand books there . Bengali and English , in both .
And yah..I would be able to spot Mishal in a bustling crowd anytime...if I can't shame on me then ! (-:
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Mishal Raheja as Dutta Patil

Fettered Affection ~ Chapter 11

"Dancing Days"..Shakespeare

From the corner of his eye he caught her finger fidgeting act in her lap.. it was strange that his presence made her edgy, seemingly she was a working lass and presumably au fait with male company..but mujhe mein kiya hai.. ye tu ye kali gori he jana. With his folded forefinger brushing underneath his prominent nose he smiled as he sided his face.Should be interesting, having her living in his house.. he pulled his lower lip inwards and mused, but that could pose possible snags as well..as the woman by trade is more nosey than wished for. Naku looked at him sideways and asked, "how far removed is your house Saab? seems a great distance from where we live.", "not far" he replied as he gazed at her sideways, amused at her impatience, she sounded so childlike, keen, bright eyed.. his eyes briefly captivated by her greenish amber pupils,"umh tell me are you accepting this sudden move from your own home? thujhe shock tu nehi laga"he asked gently.She lowered her eyes, well about time too he addressed this issue she reflected, "shock tu laga Saab, since you decreed that you give the orders, have to admit was a put off, but have you known that I too ,for the sake of my family seemed in agreement with you regarding this move.."she paused and then looked at him sideways,"waise I am grateful to you for this solution".He smiled shyly and replied,"ayee Naku, ab tu formal ho rehe hai, waise I like to be known as someone who does quick fixes!. She giggled,"humm haan.. fast track Saab.."she added shyly.. Dutta progressively warmed to her presence, her quips.. his previous angst at her seemed to have vanished somewhere.. He suddenly announced to her as he approached his locality,"Naku look ahead, that building on the left is mera ghar.. and then after a pause continued,"aur ab tumhara bhi.".Naku looked at that impressive white building with a red dome on the top.. and she withdrew her tiny body and clasped her petite hands in her lap. The largeness of the house suddenly reminded her of the lesser in status of her own being.. surely she would have to rise in some way, for she couldn't see the occupants come down to her level.Dutta give her a sided glance, concerned by her lack of reaction on seeing the house,"kya hoya hai hummh?he jerked his head upwards as he asked her. Naku, confessed,"well woh, main.. kya bolon Saab itna bare ghar mein main aur mera family rehien ga? kuch ajeeb lagta hai hum kaisa fit hoon ge humm?"she admitted helplessly.He looked, ahead as he drove, and responded quietly, "what rubbish! fit nehi hogi? it's just a bloody house! made of bricks and mortar! without feelings and sentiments, use mein rehena wale log hein that give it life and a sense of life.. woh kiya bolte hain emotions! so I don't want you to feel belittled by it.. bara hai tu so what? you and your family are bringing your experiences and strengths, soo is building ko hum sab mil ke home buniya ge"he solaced her. She nodded half heartedly, and shared, his positivity "but Saab I was referring to the mentality and mind set of people living in rich surroundings, how will me and my family adapt to that, especially when interacting with your family".He very nearly crunched the gear and griped angrily," my family? Naku you forget that till yesterday they too were living in the same basti in sparing economical conditions! ek do raaton mein who koi ameerzade nehi bun gaye.. got it!and tell you something tera pas woh hai jo meri AS ke pas bhi nehi! a decent education..now if just the scale of a house can make you take a dip in your self esteem tu lanaat behj aisa ghar ko! actually aur teri education par bhi!"he said vehemently..Naku drew back.. semi shocked at his mini outburst,"humm ap thek bolte ho Saab, she acknowledged, and he threw his head to the side and then turned to face her,"waise tell me main kab theek nehi hota hummh?"she smiled, so sure of himself he always is, but she concluded his heart is in the right place.

Babi, Ganpat and Sethji were not far behind, Dutta and Naku, and their eyes popped out in shock as they saw Patil nivas from a distance, Babi couldn't contain her glee"Deva re Deva! humare tu din he phir gaye!.. intnaa barah ghar Baji! us mein tu bahut sarre kamra hoon ge!Baji smiled and replied,"haan mausi, bahut kamre tu hain, par log apne apne he kamre mein he rethe hain..pun tumhe tu apna kamra ye tumhara pati dev haina! us ke saath bedroom share karna pare ga!"he teased, and Babi giggled, blushed and covered her face with her sari pallu."hailaa!kaise baat kerte hai tum Baji!".Sethji, clapped,"phir tu mera bhi apna room ho ga, tai ke saath nehi share kerna pare ga!", Baji assured him while driving towards the house," nope Sethji! your tai will have her own room.Naku's family had visible dreams of the good life pasted on their beaming faces.. Babi chanted little prayers of thanksgiving to her Bappa..

Naku was perturbed by the body guards dressed in black as the gates to the house were opened.What was the need for them ,and by the looks of it they seemed to be equipped with light weapons as well, she wondered if they had the license to carry them.Dutta sensed her scrutiny and decided to ignore her till she broached the subject, no point in creating a storm in a tea cup, as he knew this dame was no soft cookie!.. eventually she spoke,"ye BGs, itne formality?.."she observed,"why what's your issue? it's a big house, lots of burglaries take place, people are short of cash, so atny opportunity they can get common criminals can strike! woh kya haina Naku family ke protection is of paramount to me, aur ab tu tum bhi shamaal ho mera family mein.. waise I am glad you can see with your own eyes that you are truly safe from that joker Morey salla!"he reasoned with her in the hope that he may have convinced her enough.Naku seemingly accepted his explanation, in the hope that it's his house he knows how to ensure its security, but also in some way felt that the security cascaded to her family as well.. it was true every thing about this man seemed larger then life.. take his house for example..uppar se uske security.. she almost giggled and he looked down at her puzzled..wonder what goes on in that pretty little head of hers..

Ultimately the Ganpat Mahale's arrived inside the great house.. in their case benefactor..Dutta Patil.. they carried with them simple bundles of a few clothes.. what Dutta said meant!koi saman nehi.. Naku carried her Ganu bahiya in her palms as all four walked wide eyed in the corridor of PN. Their eyes and heads shifted all over the house height ,width ,breadth and depth.. Naku was quite amazed yet baffled by the stark difference between the before and now shelter of her Saab. Yet, the sight of AS and Roops, subsided her misgivings ..AS came towards her fondly and the two women embraced each other,"Jagdammbe! Naku hum bahut kush hain aaj ke humari, social worker ab humare pas he rehe ge!, she looked at Babi,"hum kabhi mile tu nehi pun milna zaroor chata the tum se.."she welcomed them.Dutta sat on the red velvet lounger and with narrow eyes he watched Naku secretly, she seemed relieved by the welcome, less weary now..Babi goaded her son to offer salutations to AS, and both her and Ganpat stood as menials before AS..Babi, couldn't contain her excitement, "main tu kab se ap ka pas anaa chate the, poochein us Naku se, woh bole AS ko maadat ke zarorat nehi who khud apna sara kam kerti hain, pun maan bahut kerta tha ap se milna ke liya".AS, smiled,"tu theek hai Babi ab tu humra pas he rehe ge har woh kam ker ju tu kerna chate hai..humien koi aaitraz nehi, haina Dutta?"she looked at Dutta for approval and Dutta bowed his head as he stole a glance at Naku.. Babi clasped her hands with a big smile, and announced,"tu bas thek hai AS, main rasoi ka kam sambhal loon ge..aur Naku bhi meri saath madat ker de ge", Naku looked at her mother in dismay and Dutta noted her expression and slowly got up from where he sat and raised his palms,"nehin! Naku apne Rehab ke kam pe jaye ge mausi.. kitchen mein help de ge apko, jab uske pas time hoga! ap basti choor ke ayea ho zaroor maagar wahan bhi Naku kam kerti the! aur yahan bhi kare ge.. samaj sawa ka kam hai! is liye use roko maat"he nearly ordered.. as he looked at Naku who blinked her eyes and smiled secretly..every one thought it best not to challenge his decision, in fact Roops, sparked up too,"ohhh Bhao tu does that mean that I can work too?. Dutta walked over to her and tapped her cheek lightly with his palm,"of course you can chotti!,main aur Baji bhi tu kam kerte hai,so, edhur PW mein bhi call centre hai, you can work there, it will inspire other girls in the area to work as well"he suggested. Roops looked at Naku and did a victory sign at Naku.. who giggled, but soon stopped as she noted his eyes on her face. Sethji, looked helplessly and exclaimed "aur main? I suppose I have to go to school?".Dutta walked over to him and placed his palm over his head, and said firmly,"haan you suppose correctly, school it is for you.. local middle school". Sethji pulled a face and Dutta, encouraged him,"dekh apne tai ke theran aacha sa job kerna hai thujhe humm? and the boy nodded, Dutta continued,"tu phir you have to get a good education got it?"Sethji turned his head up and looked into Dutta's strict, no nonsense eyes.. AS, smiled "chalo jab sab thek ho gaya hai tu , Baji in logon ko un ke rehena ki jagaa dekha de",suggested AS. Baji nodded and led the way.. as the Ganpat family followed.. Dutta watched them go towards the self-contained annexe of the house..

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Dutta held his hands behind his back and lazily walked over to his mother who sat like a lady of the manor in a easy chair, he looked at her,"woh ap na bura tu nehi maniya main in logon ko lae aya hoon.."AS, raised her hand just pleased that her son had bothered to show some justification.."nehi Dutta hum nehi poochein ga kyun? tera faisla hai tu thek he hoga"she confessed. Dutta yanked his head, and coldly responded,"haan magaar main phir bhi batana zaroori samhejta hoon.. koi police wala thang kar rehe tha is khandan ko.. bikwas bak raha tha.. utha ke la jaya ka Nakusha ko..tu maine ye kadam uthaya! ab edhur aya tu use utha doon ka main duniya se !he growled..and began to leave.AS, caught her son in this quiet moment and lauded his efforts,"aacha kiya tune Dutta, unke help ke, hum tu kush hain Nakusha bhi humara pas rehe ge, Roops ka dil bhi laga rehe ga aur Babi aache aurat dekhte hai".. Roops pranced over to her brother and garlanded her arms sideways on his wide shoulders.."haan main tu bahut kush hoon, main aur Naku ab girlie chit chat ker sakte hain.. so cute na! Bhao! woh fed up of blokes now..."she announced by flicking her hair and Baji who had returned, "and me and Bhao too, very happy ke tu ab humre dum bun ke nehi ghume ge!".. and he gave her a dimpled smile..so cute na Roops!", Roops glared at him and then turned to her brother,"aur Bhao, mujhe aur Naku ko drop and pick from work ke duty should be given to Baji! waise bhi he's a waste of space kuch nehi kerta sawaia bar mein brands check kar ne ke!.. so cuuute na Baji" she snapped. Baji shook his head, and felt the side of his head, uncomfortably.. and Dutta , folded his arms across his chest.."nehin Roops, Baji mera right hand man hai tera aur Naku ka driver ya chauffer nehin!" Baji cackled hysterically and winked at Roops, as Dutta glared at him, "ab tu apne nautanki band kare ga ye thujhe chauffer demote kar doon.. chal kamra mein".

Seeing that both Dutta and Baji were in a light state of mind,AS, spoke her mind,"woh ek baat aur kehne the Dutta"..Dutta tarried and turned to face his mother who remained seated on the arm chair.."dekh ye ghar itna bare hai, tu hum ye sooch rehe hain, ke kitna acha ho aagar Kala aur Leela bhi humare saath he reheian, humre pas"She suggested, Dutta raised one of his arms cross his chest and felt his indented chin in a pensive mood, and Roops chipped in,"haan Bhao we have so many spare rooms, it'll be one big family living together! she tempted.AS put her foot down a bit,"waise Dutta tu Naku ke family ko bhi tu lae aya hai , tu Kala aur Leela tu teri behnain hain, dekh unka rent ke bhi baachet ho jaya ge..",Baji, looked at Bhao, and felt he should be supportive of AS,"waise Bhao ,idea bura nehi, you know they both are hard up as well, both Kishore Bhao and Sudarshan are so to speak jobless, so if they move in with us it'll be like family standing up for each other.. aur family tu family he hota hai.."he said as his voice faltered.. Dutta turned his head towards Baji, almost as if his friend's take on matters, meant the world to him, they overruled everyone else's opionions. For Baji had been for him! with him! in thick and thin...Thus Dutta bowed his head once and looked his mothers way.."haan phone ker ke bata dein unhe, phooch lena phele if they like the idea, phir moving ka bhi sooch lein ga".. he decided and then relaxed his arms and held them behind his back and started to move towards his den..Baji following him..

For the minute , he sat at the wooden desk and armchair in the balcony area before his room. He stood against the railing and his fingers gently felt the mahogany pillar that held the beamed ceiling.. he looked down at the first floor.. it was like an open plan view of his home. He could eye the dining table, parts of the lounge, the entrance and Bappa's murti.. grand secure, standing guard and watching.. what went on..He palmed his face and walked up to his desk and sat on his high back desk chair.." kya sooch raha hai Bhao?.. prodded Baji.. Dutta his eyes on the first floor, replied.."kuch sooch nehi reha Baji.. dekh raha hoon..humra naya tekhna".. he said with sobriety.. Baji, backed off a bit as he sensed Dutta was morose for some reason, and tried to divert his attention.. "aree Bhao.. you are making me uncomfortable as well, what is it? I thought this is what you hankered for..", Dutta, shifted his eyes towards Baji and admitted, "yes I desired a big house, but now that I have it, I continue to feel dissatisfied.. In fact I now feel more under pressure that I need to have eyes all over the place.."Baji rubbed his palms."aree Bhao tu thand rekh !samhej tera kam ho gaye..tomorrow he I'll call the security systems and get camera's around the house working!" ..Baji vouched.. but Bhao nodded as he held the pillar on the balcony but watched with interest, Babi making her way towards the kitchen..Dutta suddenly moved and made his way down the wooden stairs and walked gradually, towards the annexe, his hands held behind his back in his black pathiani.. Baji gazed from above, and spread his palms in despair.."ab ise kiya ho gaya hai..?he watched Dutta walk and turn round the corner.Dutta paused in front of an ajar door of a room, that stood before a white wall with creeping ivy. Noises of Sethji's laughter brought a smile on his lips and he began to turn.. when he heard, the yell,"Bhao! tai Bhao!.."he looked downwards as he felt like a being out of bounds.. Sethji held his arm and tried to pull him into his room.."Bhao check my room..!dekho maine ne apne desk ko set kar liya hai apne books ke saath", Dutta stood at the door step and smiled shyly ,"very good ab main chalto hoon" he announced and began to walk away.. hurriedly .. he delayed his walk slightly though, as he was about to pass the next room.Naku stood in her door way as he continued to cross her almost .."Saab.. mujhse nehi phoocho ge if I have settled in or not? he faced ahead and answered ahead in the empty space.."mujhe nazar ah raha hai you have settled",he mumbled, and she too stood opposite him and replied,"how can you see? you are facing the other way..", she teased, he took one step backwards and only cranked his neck towards her.." kush lag rehe hai tu thek he hoge..."he said seriously, and she studied his profile "pun ap mujhe kush nehi lag rehe ho?" she observed.. he then turned his full frame towards her while she stood bemused in her doorway.."tu aur kya karoon dahmaal daloon.. baat kerti hai.. subah ready rehna kam pe jane ke liye, Kaley choorne jaya ga tum dono ko Roops and you,.. ab sau ja.. ummh me to going to sleep.."he mumbled turned and walked away.. She watched him till he disappeared round the corner..gosh talk about being aloof, what is he trying to show?.. that this is how he is going to behave from now on?..ajeeb aadmi hai, in the car he was all chummy and chatty, now he appears, tum kaun? tu main kaun? Naku mused . She felt her eyes sting and she turned ,and closed the door behind her.. But the sight of her own, simple yet lovely cosy room with en suite shower gave her a welcoming feeling and with that she lay on her belly, limp folded legs up in the air.. she dialled the number.."guess who?","hi Nakusha, kaise hai tu good you rang me, I was going to ring you to enquire about Dutta, so tell me?".Naku sat up on her bed her thighs tucked under her,"ohh Supriya , so much has happened and so quickly ke I don't know whether I am coming or going.. woh to cut a long story short , I had a spot of bother with a sleazy policeman who believe it or not wanted to marry me!.. the thing is we were his tenants, he never gave us receipts for the rent we paid, now call it pure naivety or a serious slip on our part , but he blackmailed us that we owe him rent in arrears.. that if we are unable to pay up, he will kidnap me so to speak!, explained Naku, "what?!oh you poor thing! I am so sorry to hear this, what is the world coming to! Supriya responded with her typical middle class attitude".Naku had to reply,"world ka tu pata nehi, but if this happens in my part of the world than I act.. as Supriya there were other vulnerable people too in my basti that he was blackmailing.. he needed a good hiding.."Naku reported and then giggled,"pata hai Supriya who was the crusader who delivered the people from this policeman , it was our patient.. ummh Dutta Patil..!she said with great difficulty..honestly seeing it was believing it! the police man literally ran for his life!, but now for the big newsss! me and my family have been moved by your patient to his house!for me and my family's protection, in case the policeman strikes forth with repercussions!.."she narrated.A sigh escaped Supriya's lips and she soon checked herself, with a nervous laugh,"incredible! Naku so now shall I say you are living in the lion's den! tell me how often does he roar!.. need to keep a count on the number of roars he gives out!"joked Supriya. Naku looked round her room and then dared to laugh, her green eyes wide open, "no Supriya you have done a super job with him ! he doesn't roar as much! seems meek now.."she defended Dutta quietly. Supriya, added, "early days yet Nakusha just keep an eye on him, waise if you guys too have moved into his house, it must be a reasonably sized house?"she queried.Naku admitted,"haan it's a proper mansion , Supriya.. bahut shandar hai.."Suriya's, interest heightened, "really itna paisa kahan se ah gaya us Dutta ke pas?..Naku you understand what I am saying? thujhe us par nazar rekhna hoge, I know it's not a nice thing to suggest, but we both want the best for him.. his welfare, I guess we both are committed workers, our patients always come first, don't they Naku." said Supriya suspiciously.. Naku, felt like a prying body.. there was a degree of fear, a segment of unease regarding his house but still she can count herself lucky that she was close to him.. well in terms of living in his surroundings , whether, she can be more was a bit farfetched and far removed. Both women wanted to bid goodbye, but before that Supriya, reminded,"Nakusha tell Dutta I am still waiting for him to pop by..", Nakusha without meaning to be nasty replied, "may be he feels he doesn't need to Supriya..", Supriya most put off, throw her weight, "then tell him I will pay him a home visit!how does that sound to you Nakusha?", Naku replied,"ab main kya bolon ye tu woh he bata sakte hain..", Supriya teased, oh hoo "woh" ? you mean that Dutta? the not so easy going patient", she jested lightly , and the two friends called it a day!.Naku lay flat on her bed and folded her arms and rested her face sideways on her arms..."eeey, kya sooch rehe hai chorri! sau ja ab, subah uthe ke mera saath nasta bunana phela din hai kal.. phir chale jana apne kam par" Babi yelled as she wiped her face with her pallu.. she suddenly looked at Naku's face.. her daughter had a strange lost expression on her face, her green eyes spelt of a certain vacancy... "hayee Bappa! ab ise kiya ho gaya hai?. She tapped Naku lightly on the head in order to get her out of her reverie ..but to no effect.. Babi shook her head and just before she walked out of her daughters room she turned the light out!.."Deva.. kya ho gaye hai is lardki ko.. khole ankhoon se sapne dekh rehe hai"...

The family sat around the breakfast table.. Dutta's figure dressed in a steel blue pathiani aroused a degree of interest and he noticed the head of the table chair left empty for him. He came and looked around, and nodded at his mother ..he gave her a fixed look before he sat down on the dining chair,"waqat kaise badal gaya hai.. zameen par khana khane wale aaj, table par beithe kar kha rehe hain.. ummh ab dekhna ye hai ke kahane ke sawad mein bhi koi faraq hai ye nehi?he said curtly.."Baji too sat down and replied to his friend,"woh kya haina Bhao.. bhook jahan pe bhi lagi ho, khana utna he sawadish lagata hai",but Dutta, shook his forefinger at Baji, "ghalat! khareeb insaan ko kahana hamsha he sawadest lage ga bhook ju kabhi nehi mete us ke"..he paused.. aur umeer ka tu ek niwala kha ker he paithe bhar jata hai"he said dryly.. Suddenly he looked up, and his ears strained as he heard her in the kitchen.. ye kali gori kam par nehi ja rehe..!in annoyance he got up and aimed for the kitchen, but braked as he almost collided with her , this time carrying a tray of poha.."ohhh Saab! she exclaimed, he and abruptly moved to one side as he let her pass.. as soon as he set the poha dish on the table she retraced her steps to the kitchen and he glared at her enough to make her stop in her tracks...she looked up him and he stared her into the ground from his height.. she preferred to remain silent , and he finally .. growled down at,"tujhe bola tha kam pe ja.. tu kitchen mein kya kar rehe hai?, she raised her green eyes and simply replied, I am helping my aye, with breakfast.. woh kam khatum hone pa chale jaon ge .. Saab" she whispered, he held his head high, "hummh,so tera jaane ka koi time nehi hai? iska matalab hai tera job start kerna ka bhi koi time nehi hoga.. huumm? he asked as he lowered his head and looked directly into her eyes his eyebrows frowned a little.. she was speechless.. and blurted.."nastha mein ap kya lein ge?", he raised his head shook it and then looked the other way and said clearly, "sandwiches...", her hazel green eyes opened wide.. "sandwiches? she echoed and he tuned his face to look down at her with hooded eyes," hummh.. thujhe time waste kerna hai na yahan? tu go in the kitchen and breakfast mein let it be known I only eat sandwiches.. white bread, ummh crusty sides trimmed".. he said and chuckled and then walked off slowly towards his seat, one arm folded behind his back..He sat and waited, his eyes glued to the kitchen door.. till she finally arrived and came to his side and placed the plate of sandwiches before him .. he looked at them approvingly, she leaned and asked him, "waise Saab, I don't understand, why sandwiches? he shifted his eyes sideways at her and replied," nothing profound.. bas they are easy to eat ,I like finger food, no getting my slender fingers dirty.. he chuckled.. she straightened up rolled her eyes and , thought, at least he has short bursts of subtle humour.He tucked into a sandwich, may be this kali gori finds my sudden change of palate from poha to sandwich a bit hard to swallow.. hummh main cheez he aise hoon ke halak se neeche nehi uther ta!...she suddenly emerged from the kitchen and patted on Roop's back ,"chal Roops, let's go.. you go for your interview and I go for my job"... she emphasized as she looked at Dutta.. who wound up and glared at her with a reply.."Naku , yaad rehe ja kar mujhe pe tu koi eshan nehi ker rehe.." Naku felt snubbed..why the rude man.. so full of himself.. erratic! odd! and eccentric.. must jot these behaviour patterns of his on her detailed notes on him.. Dutta held her eyes captive and messaged her with his eyes.. main aagar bura hoon to tu bhi dhoodh ke dhule nehi... kali gori!.. Naku tore her eyes ,smiled at AS, waved at her mother and walked down the corridor past the wooden arches and turned right towards the entrance where Kaley waited with the back door opened of the grey four by four..

Once breakfast sorted and Naku out of the house so to speak ,the coast clear. Dutta headed Baji ,"chal lets go up to my room.. It was a strange sense of timing, but the phone did ring and it was whom they had expected.."ye phoochna tha you settled ok in your dream house Dutta?", "haan Jeera, have to say its spot on! ..Dutta paused though, didn't want to give, Jeera the upper hand,"you can say it's adequate".. Jeera, rattled,"aree Dutta sirf adequate? tere liya maine ne apna best makan chuna aur tu hai ka. abhi bhi kush nehi", Dutta slanted his head and replied ,"main itne jaldi kush nehi hota Jeera, dard bhi aas pas rehkta hoon, so if happiness suddenly deserts me I am still left with my old companions.. ab chaje woh mera ghum ho,"and Jeera butt in "ya tera gussa jaise ekurh!", Dutta smiled at the other end and retorted curtly," I bet none ever told you but you are a baadtemeez aadmi! baat ko katata hai.. waise have you know that mujhe pasand nehi meri baat koi bhi kate , chahe woh tu bhi ho", he said firmly. Jeera smiled slowly,"tera yehe ekdum bindass andaaz mujhe pasand hai.."he said slyly. Dutta rolled his eyes at Baji, and replied,"ab kam ke baat bhi kare ga ya, meri tareefoon ke pul bande ga? mujhe pata hai main kiya hoon.. dossera kiya soochte hain mera bare mein I have never given a toss about it!.. so let's talk business.. " said Dutta irritably. Jeera, sat up at his red and white plastic desk and began," chal phir tera kam yeh hai ke, Changla seth se mera.. paisa vassoli kerna hai , 6 months se mera 40 lakh daba ke beitha hai.. tu aj he yeh kam kerde!..ordered Jeera.. Dutta pulled his mouth to one side and appeared a wee bit disenchanted, " ayee Jeera ye kiya baachoon wala kam mujhe de diya hai tune, ye kam tu apne baachoon ko de woh karien , Shabir aur woh Digu, kya decoration pieces hai?.. tu kahe tu un mein jaan phoonk doon main" scoffed Dutta. Jeera felt embarrassed at his two fairly experienced guys being ridiculed by Dutta , but still managed to keep Dutta to his right!"haan ye dono he , tera maqabale mein anari hain may be they should go with you..", Dutta stood up with the phone still held against his ear.. "eyee Jeera ! woh mera saath nehi ja rehe, main un ko le kar ja raha hai, they will work for me! not with me.." clarified Dutta.. Jeera, scratched his head, heaven's how he has to pander to this Sher's emotional swings,"haan wohi tu jaisa tu bola Dutta! ab kuch kam start karien? pleaded,Jeera.Dutta, jerked his head towards Baji, "haan address lekhwa, us ka!"he ordered and threw his mobile over to Baji, who made a note on his mobile..

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They arrived at the destination, it was a bit of a surprise that the huge warehouse with the sign saying, Changla constructions fell in the district of his home territory of PV.. Baji alerted him too, as they pulled up, "looks like the geyser belongs to our friendly neighbourhood, so.". Both just sat silently in the black jeep , watching the entrance of the warehouse. Dutta moved his head as he heard a small black van pull up, and both him and Baji, looked at each other and raised their eyebrows at the arrivals.. With the loud bang of the two front doors, popped out Shabir, looking a right mess! like he had been dragged out of bed and Digu, who looked he'd come out of a spaghetti western!.. tight jeans open neck shirt ,faux leather jacket, chains ,spurred boots, medallion the lot!

Dutta watched them from his black jeep, his folded arm stuck out of his black Wiley's jeep's pulled down window.His narrowed eyes keenly studied these two excuse of henchmen as they walked towards him.They stood at a distance from his jeep and held their clasped their hands in namaste to him.Dutta, raised up his two fingers and then almost immediately jerked them towards the entrance of the warehouse.. Shabir confirmed,"Woh hum phele jaien, Dutta?! Dutta slowly moved his head towards Baji who sat beside him in the passenger seat.. and both men with displeasure showing on their faces, disembarked their black jeep and confronted Shabir and Digu,"kya reee.. thumhje Bhao ka haat ka ishara nehi samjhe ata?, Shabir looked embarrassed as he ran his fingers through his thick mop of umkempt curly hair, but soon enough turned to enter the premises.. Dutta looked at Digu and called out to him,"ab tera liye koi special invitation aye ga tabhi tu undar jaya ga?.Digu nodded his head , and turned and ran off to follow Shabir.. Dutta shook his head once and felt his chin," unbelievable we really didn't need these two bloody delaying tactics did we Baji?"he asked calmly.. Baji sniggered ,"haan Bhao.."and Dutta folded his arms as he pressed his bottom against his jeep.. his eyes squinting in the glare of the sun, "bet you any money, bas abhi ate he hoon ge.."and so corect Dutta was as a bloody faced pairs of baboons! both Shabir and Digu were kicked out of the premises by Changla's goons!.One of them dusted his hands and shouted out to Dutta,"salaam Bhao, ye kin namonoon ko behja diya tum ne? laga tha.. apne patloon gale kar dein ge, chalo ap ko buliya hai Seth na ender".Dutta turned to Baji with a twinkle in his eyes.."chaal Baji ab Sher jaya ga jab usko invite aye ga.."

Dutta raised his legs one by one over the dust and blood smeared faces of Shabir and Digu,"aisa karo tum rest karo thori der mein main ata hai.." and then slowly he regally walked towards the entrance of the warehouse where both him and Baji raised their arms up to be frisked.. only to be greeted with folded hands instead by the short seedy looking bouncers at the door..Dutta went in the dark ware house marked with baled and boxed items stacked here and there.Wires held high powered bulbs, hung precariously from the metal beams of the warehouse pyramid ceiling..Changla, an old man, stood up and squeezed Dutta's arm warmly,"bahut suna hai re tera liye Dutta Bhao!! he paused and then continued with welled up eyes,"ke tera seena mein dil hai..", an amused,yet firm Dutta, threw his head to one side and replied,"aur yeh bhi ke fawlad jaise jigara!.. ab dhande ke baat karo.. tumahra udhar over due hai..40 lakh.. abhi nikalo main wohi lena aya hai.."Changla dropped down to his knees,"dekh Dutta, meri do betiyoon ka lagan hai do hafta mein.. ye paisa abhi udher phessa hoya hai. mehina baad rakam laut de ga.. Deva shapat! the men begged. Dutta flared his nostrils, took in the man's predicament, and announced.."thek hai Seth! maagar mahene baad 20 lakh ka interest laga ga..total 60 lakh dena ho ga.. manzoor?? he asked coldly.Changla grabbed Dutta's legs "manzoor hai Dutta! mein lekh ke deta hai! bas mera betiyoon ka lagan ho jane de.."he beseeched. Dutta , bent his arms and stood up the elderly man and turned his head towards Baji... who was ready to get it written down, but Dutta raised his palm,"rehena de Baji upne dhande mein, zabaan ke kemat hoti hai.. waise bhi kadher jaia ga tum Seth, tum bhi edhur hai aur main bhi edhur he hoon.. yaad rehe " he threatened , and turned and walked towards the exit.. to be continued

Hamlet53~ 10.5.13.

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Precap: Naku, looked up from her monitor and blinked her eyes..what on earth is he doing here!

Edited by Hamlet53 - 12 years ago
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hi hammie 🤗
loved the update..its so beautifully penned...and you managed in such a short period ...its incredible 👏
finally dutta remembered to ask her if she is shocked over his decision lol...now he knows ab kahan jae gi 😆
so formality puri kar lou...i was expecting naku's wide eyed correction wide green doe eyes reaction over the size of the housewhich i loved iy when dutta called it ghar .it was reminding me of the song yeh tera ghar yeh mera ghar ..now naku's concern over how her family is going to cope with dutta's family seems out of context as she knows them well how simple AS baaji and roops are...and its not that over night they are going to act all big...neither they are kind of people who will ever do so...they only thing which can aggrevate her is that yes the comfort or more so freedom of your own house is something else..i loved duttas explanation over it ..so true that its the strengths and experiences of the members wich make a house turn into a ghar..and if incase she had any relation with dutta*cough* then her confidence would be something else...ganpat and baabi seems the most excited one and baabi haiinn she giggles and blush at the thought of sharing room with ganpat*rolls eyes* 😆

ohh so naku well noticed the bodyguards there usko pata nahi hai abhi eh kitne nikame hain...neither dutta knows that sab kaam security ke usay aur baaji ko hi karne parhe gay.
the thing note worthy is that this is just the beginning that naku raised a question dont know how she will react with the passage of time and how is he going to work freely.😕

so pagal niwas main mahale's bhi enter ho gaye hain great combo with patils 😆 ...baabi all set to show her skills in kitchen but for a change good to see naku making face over the idea of
working there...and im so pleased by dutta who supports that women should work too and wants to set an example for PW people through his sister and and woh kali gorri 😉...

with every ud we see more and more interactions between AS and dutta ...specially here he thought that she must know the reason why naku and her family were there ...this is a surprise that kala and leela will live there too...dont know how they are going to react over naku... i hope they are a positive addition in the house.

dutta is in deed a hard nut still not satisfied now when he has shifted to a big house...but this attitude always leads a man to attain more...isi andaaz par tu jeera marta hai😆
security cameras interesting ...naku ke room ke paas bhi laga dena aik 😉
now now supriya jealous ho rahi hai na hehehe ...and even provked naku to spy him hawww he is surely going to kill both of them 😆...though its true the change in his status is questionable but we are too pleased to see him as a don.both supriya andnaku have gone beyound the patient/healer relation now ...im more shocked for supriya though for naku me all happy shappy😃

you know apart from duttas room their dinning hall is my most fav place of PN as it was most captured in ltl too where we can see the whole family.now hold on what does dutta wants for breakfast...yeh dou din pehle hi basti say ayya hai na..sandwiches?? .white bread crusty sides trimmed...nakhray😆
now my reaction is exactly like nakus is he actually fond of sandwiches

jeera heheh mujhe lagta hai yeh admi duniya main bas dutta se apni insult karwane ayya hai...wese dutta is a bad boy kabhi tu maaf kar diya kare beechare ko ...har bar classic insult karta hai😆 kiya kare poor jeera dil de baitha hai dutta ko😆 ..dutta is one of his kind ive never seen anyone taking thier boss so lightly 😆
shabbir and deegu another good for nothing lot ...saath karne kiya aaye thay agar yun pitna tha...hahaha ...and man that seth sher ko daikh kar picture hi badal gaye beti ka lagan...
poor deegu and shabbir unki dhulae kyn ki woh kaunsa uski beti ki shadi ka khna lay kar bhaag rahe thay hahaha but what a sight...full on paisa wasool scene hai ...
precap ohh is it dutta at nakus office ...chalo bob ko bhi darshan ho jaenge iss mahan hasti ke😉

thankyou hammie for an amazing update ...and i know in two days you managed it ..hats off to your commitment.👏.you always make your readers happy...😊
waiting eagerly for the next ud .
take care!!!...pms main tu aap milte nahi*sniff* 😛
lots of Love
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Hi Hammie🤗

Wah..kya Zabardast update hai👏 !.Liked it to the core❤️.wow! What a smile from our Dutta !I liked naku's eagerness to reach Dutta's place😃.dutta behaved very gently with Naku❤️.I liked their car convo❤️. Naku feared about their status😭. But our Dutta is sooo sweet❤️..Yeah..Naku is an educated person😃..Oyee Babi😡!Yeah It's a big house..Baji teasing Babi🤣 & Babi got shy. Why Babi😡??.. Why this shy & blush🤢???...Please stop your expression..We can't bear with it. Dear Dutta😳!! Do You know one thing😳?.Our Naku is an intelligent girl😳.So you can't hide the truth about your job from Naku😳.Yeah this Roop is soo cute na😃..Sweet Dutta..He allowed naku to continue her job😃.Baaji is a right hand to Dutta..I liked these two friends ki convo.Yeah ! Dutta is a complicated person😕.He changed his behavior from time to time😕.Shabbir & Diggu are baboons😆Awwwinteresting precap😳..Naku is searching about Dutta's job😲..Can't wait..Can't wait😳



Its really an awesome update dear👍🏼Liked it sooo much❤️.Thanks sooo much for your Excellent update👏👏. Eagerly waiting for the next update😳...Please update soon dear😳






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Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi hammie thanks for the lovely annotations 😊


@ nakusha kunu mazaq orar rahe ho kaka billi ke matlab ka kaka billi ke matlab bharti ne already bata diya hai chota bhai aur twinkle ko pata hai meaning of kaka billi 😉

@bharti very nice ROMANTIC song mein bhi yeh pehle baar dekh raha hoon 😊





@ Afzal bhai
KAKA BILLI???😕...Its KAKA BALLI ...Toal confusion...Yeah Bharti said "KAKA BALLI means Baby brother/small brother"...But...But...I think something is wrong in somewhere...Anyhow...You are my elder brother not small brother...Chota bhai nahi...Bada bhai😳 ..so Twinky stops this matter😆..( But I think Warda spilled some beans ...😳😳)

@ Naku
Meri guru ji ( you didn't help me in this KAKA BALLI matter😭😆) !!! Really ???😳...Thanks soo much for encouraging me dear...
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hi twinkle nothing is wrong and dont confuse your self just listen to me and bharti for hammie im a small brother and for you im big brother just remember that now teka chill pill and give me a big smile

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Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi twinkle nothing is wrong and dont confuse your self just listen to me and bharti for hammie im a small brother and for you im big brother just remember that now teka chill pill and give me a big smile





Oh Mera sweet Afzal bhai...Sooo sorrry bhai...Now I trust you...You're sooo sweet...OK...You're bada bhai only for Twinky baby😉😆...Thank you sooo much ji...Now nooo confusion...Only big smile...😃😃😃...
This is for you & All friends ...Thank you😃







@ all

Hey what this??? I can't believe ???Misti,Hammie ,Warda,,...,rose...your signatures are really superb...Im in a dreamland...Thanks sooo much for teaching me How to add video avatar Misti dear,,,Thanks sooo muchh...
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