FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee
hi naku tu ah gaye..

mein aa gai nice ud 😊hammiee u asked do we miss major ..yeh dutta ka bhi apna style hai😃..oh Iam glad you say so

liking him too ..its all hammiee affect real hero rather heroine is our story writer & LTL & dutta will always remain inspiration ,

well for me too mishal as dutta is the inspiration to write..

dutta went through hell & lost his childhood ...the nightmare scene brought it all & you were very good with it ,the demon of his past & toture had harden him ..slowly getting to know abt his past

you have put this very clearly.. yes he lost a part of life in prison..

hammiee is buliding up past & truth abt why he killed his dad we 'll get to know eventually😊sabra for time been

yes you will know eventually.. naku

loved the seema ka description 😆dutta kahin kush ho raha hai mera peecha choota,

ummh.looks like courtesy of her he has a job..

she did help dutta with job ,maybe desire to have past flame closeby

well we'll have to see what happens...

AS & naku meeting was good ,they jelled so easilylekin dutta ne aa ke apna rang dekha deya😆zor zor se chila ke ek tea set tha woh bhi tod deya

haaa hoo 😆 haan .. sarr phera hai.. some things dont change with him chahe kuch bhi bun jaye.

naku still remembering the good samaritrian dutta,dutta did make a impact on her ,bob & her conversation was interesting

glad you warmed to these sections.

the icing on cake was mujhe dutta nahin saab bola😆😆hammiee naku ko kabhi bhi dutta bolane ka chance nahin dege.saab bhi acha lagta hai

well bart ke bhi dutta nam ke demand the, aur ab tu bhi.. tu NO.. HOW can she call him duttah..??

ab lets see how can naku help our dutta with job & mental well being ke liye doctor kya uska pravachan he kafi hai,ek bar doste toh ho jai😃

haaa hoo warrie ko bhi ise ka intezzar hai ke jaldi se kuch ho jaye tasha ke darmiyaan. kya ho tum saab.. one track minds..

i 'm loving the new story 👏as always ur amazinggg hammiee .have a great weekend tc

naku thanks for your hamazzing comment, with much love, as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet
hi mirage,great to see you mate
fab ud😊story is going great ..thanxs
thanks for liking the update, with much love ,as ever yours hammie

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet
hi uvi, good to see you mate

very good ud..dutta went through trauma & its quite sad...he got a job at seema garage..maybe naku can find a better job for him😆...ud soon regards uvi

so glad that you the update was interesting, continue reading.. with much love ,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

hi rosie.. great to see you mate..
hey hammie must say you and daya are so good with describing scenes that it makes a readers job a lot easier..thanks mate.. yes totally agree daya is a brilliant writer , and not me and you, but lots of the readers too think so..
..the whole scene comes before the eyes effortlessly thanks to you yes pleased you enjoyed it

coming up to the update ..surely liking the way its turning up ..dutta's past will not leave him so easily ..it will definitely haunt him and its ..felt really bad for him after knowing what he went through in the jail ..seriously such experiences leave an ever lasting impact on one's mind body n soul ..once again you brought out his emotions well ..jail experience, plus experiences of war are hard to leave behind

seema helping him with a job ..hope she stays in her limits with his oldie and 3 kids..welll, tell you what Rose keep an open mind.. dekho ..she might be harmless, in fact she is an angel in disguise here for both him and baji.

so tasha meet again and as i said in my previous comment some things don't change and i like them that way for instance dutta losing his temper and breaking things 😆 me to mate haa ha ..then AS n nakku jelling well and the best thing nakku calling him SAHAB ..really i can't imagine her calling him anything else other than sahab thanks rosie.. waise bart, nakusha want him to be called dutta by her , me rolling my eyes..

waiting to know more about his past ..all in good time ..

rose, thanks for reading and commenting, with much love,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi Hamlet
hi sonaaa, great to see you

liked the UD...Dutta had tragic past...the reason behind his dad murder must be serious.. wait for it to be told ,yes fairly serious
...Dutta in jeans reminded of the young innocent dutta of LTL...😊
yess looked at his old pictures for that.. wanted to be exact..used the same yound dutta clothes
AS & naku getting along...good for future daughter-in-law...seema giving dutta job...intention doesn't seem good😆...dutta met naku was sweet...ud soon

yes tried where very possible to incorporate the Ltl 1 story line.. thanks for reading and commenting sona, with much love ,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet
hi dilse, great to see you, mate

awesome ud
thanks mate

the ud is slowly growing on us😊
well I am glad to hear this,very encouraging

this dutta is stubborn as ever yes he is a donkey is a stubborn animal😆

naku can tame him..ummm will be seen but idea aacha hai

he need help & naku would help him

liking it & waiting for ud

thanks for your lovely comment, with much love ,as ever yours hammie

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hello hammie superb ud 👏
oyeee mamooo..😆.. great to see you.. thanks for liking the UD

dutta got a job at seema garage ye kya keh dutta ne kahen aur bhi toh kar sakta tha😕
nooo he was refused work every where..
he met naku again AS and naku getting along nice 😃

hammie like the ud so much

waiting for next

ud soon and thanks for the ud😊
iam pleased you are enjoying the UD kaka balli.. and more than that very happy 😃 to see you active on the laagi forum.. thanks for your lovely comment, with much love to you ,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi tha', great to see you mate..
hi hammie nice ud, dutta.'s first back in his home is not so good, the nigh was very disturbing, not only for him but as a readerfor me it was so painful to see a young man go through so much,u hear so much about abuse of by prison wardens but the inmates are added threat to some prisoners unless they stand up to them, it's kill or be killed situ,so true.. its the inmates who are more vicious..

waisay dutta not only learns to take car of himself but also gains respect from other prisoners during his time there.yes he used to stand up for the weaklings and thus was looked up to..

at home AS has no let up from dutta but she hears him in agony and does what mothers are best at praying for him to get peace in his life and get over the painful exp. well i suppose if only she knew what happened there it wont' be so easy for him.but his issue is he doesn't talk about it till he is plagued in his sleep..

he got both of thm job on seema's say so , i think soon he will have to give that up as seema might be looking for a bit on the side for herself.😒 haaa hoo.. hujhe pata hai ,ho sakta ho bahut good lady ho,dekh kam bhi to deliya hai usne ..hummh?

dutta himself has asked nakku to call him saab. in this situation he should have addressed her as madamji as she came to help him, not vice versa and then in pre cap she gets hr own name shortened.😲. 😆 tooo good bart has to read this she will laugh at your wit.. mazza ah gaye.. no woh sirf ayee lardki he bole ga..

abhi dosti bhi nahin huwi aur baday liberties shuru😉, lagay raho dutta bhao😃. thanks for pm.TC

🤣 this remark is rocking haaa hooo too good.. bat sun ,thanks for your commentbahut funny hai... with much love as ever ,yours hammie.

Originally posted by: Hamlet53