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Posted: 12 years ago

children of lesser gods here... wil be back hammieji


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Yes, after reading the 2nd UD feel i have moved on from PR...sigh! "chod aye hum woh galiyan, chod aye hum woh galiyan".

Out damned spot! hmm if it were so easy to erase the blotted past... purrfect title hammie 👍🏼

The trauma of an exconvict is so realistically portrayed that one could feel it. Its terrible terrible to imagine what one undergoes as a prisoner. It beats my understanding of human psychology. They can get far worse than animals. What is it that makes humans resort to such cruel barbaric acts? Gosh! can these people ever be normal. Both the perpetrators of such monsterous violent acts as well as the victims, how can they be reformed or see life the way we do. Even thou Dutta himself is an accused n pay a heavy price, he ultimately ends up a victim. Im still not clear as to why he ended up killing his father or what exactly happened at the scene of crime. Maybe he will one day open up... 🤔

Baji is treading a double edged sword so as not to antagonise dutta nor giving up on him. AS even thou should be cheerful that her son has returned is only feelin miserable at his obstinance and moreso for the miserable state he finds himself in. The family can only pray for some divine intervention in releiving him from his dark shackles 😔

But Baji is also holding the fort well and is bein extremely deft in soothing frayed nerves of the family. Liked the brother sis bonding and roops is not wasted here unlike LTL 🤗. It is this warmth in relations which heal wounds, the smallest things that matter most. But its the outside world thats gonna test dutta,s nerves and character.

Dutta's nightmares are evidence of his mental state and the scars would take a long time to heal totally. Im not sure our society is sensitive enuf to the emotional needs of such people.. So this is where n much much more naku would fill in 😉

Roops seems to be a sensitive lady and handling her bhao to the best of her abilities. Cute to see her attending to his needs and also felt dutta too warming up to her very naturally even after such a long gap. So no sandwiches here only poha 😃 He's not wasting much time and thats a positive sign as wel as it shows an impatience to get on with life which will not be so easy. Dutta in blue jeans n shirt umm what can i say seema wala LTL dutta nazar aya. His obstinate attitude towards AS continues but it just needs little understanding and time. Also the duo need to sit n talk i feel.

As i feared it would be next to impossible for dutta to find jobs once people are aware of his criminal antecedants. But as expected he stuck to his reputation and refused to supress facts. liked his words, "mein apradhi hu par jhoota nahi" They reach seema's place. Wah! DUTTAA how casually seema calls his name as if she's in touch with them on a daily basis. But she seems to be very casual, moved on and put on too i mean weight lol.. Mota seth ke saat moti seema hi achi lagegi 😃 But atleast she has a heart to help him. Dutta displays no feelings for the shared past. I expected some sort of uneasiness from his side, but he displays none. He seems to be a man in a hurry to catch up with life as it were.

Bob n Naku's conversation was interesting and it touches on her reasons for covering her face with the soot, but it doesnt convince me, infact confuses. Atleast she feels safe in a dark complexion but is it? Hmm she's ponderin at dutta's odd behaviour already.

What a bumpy meeting of the two.. lol. So he,s drawn to her sharp features n dark beauty, Not all is lost then😉 Some parts of his brains are functioning normally lol... iss mamle mein toh kuch zyada hi tez hai ediut! But was it necessary for AS to reveal the nature n purpose of naku,s visit? that would only add insult. Now why should naku address him as saab, woh khud ek mujrim hai uparse unpad, jahil aadmi. Kaunsa amir khandaan ka lauta santaan hai jo isko saab bhulaya jaye. Naku givin into his haughty behaviour, but she is only bein tactful and i hope later as she gains in confidence she calls him by his name.
Hammie you dont seem to be havin any hiccups as you claim with the new Ff storyline. Everthing is perfect to the Tee! The affection to the Ff is slowly n surely growin by the day and the shackles of PR is evaporating gradually. Thanks to your brilliant writing. Plzz continue and it seemed an eternity for the week to roll by. Haan, pata hain your reaction, but thats a readers perspective dear...Tongue

Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

bharti yeh comment mein ke se miss kiya😆hammiee ne bola toh dhoone lage..mera comment chod ur comment i wait for just use for tammana on PR thread ,

naku cant stop from expressing what i feel, so just graciously accept my genuine compliments 😛 tum toh hamesha praise karti rehti sabko toh humko bhi mauka mila hai.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the new FF, Hammie 😊.

Its an interesting and intriguing read.

Cheers.


Edited by ivy_11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet superb ud😊dutta got job ...met naku too ..story is heading in right direction.superb writing by you👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

naku cant stop from expressing what i feel, so just graciously accept my genuine compliments 😛 tum toh hamesha praise karti rehti sabko toh humko bhi mauka mila hai.😃

ab mein kya bolege ..bharti ka jawab naku style ..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hammiee
mein aa gai nice ud 😊hammiee u asked do we miss major ..yeh dutta ka bhi apna style hai😃
liking him too ..its all hammiee affect real hero rather heroine is our story writer & LTL & dutta will always remain inspiration ,
dutta went through hell & lost his childhood ...the nightmare scene brought it all & you were very good with it ,the demon of his past & toture had harden him ..slowly getting to know abt his past
hammiee is buliding up past & truth abt why he killed his dad we 'll get to know eventually😊sabra for time been
loved the seema ka description 😆dutta kahin kush ho raha hai mera peecha choota,
she did help dutta with job ,maybe desire to have past flame closeby
AS & naku meeting was good ,they jelled so easilylekin dutta ne aa ke apna rang dekha deya😆zor zor se chila ke ek tea set tha woh bhi tod deya
naku still remembering the good samaritrian dutta,dutta did make a impact on her ,bob & her conversation was interesting
the icing on cake was mujhe dutta nahin saab bola😆😆hammiee naku ko kabhi bhi dutta bolane ka chance nahin dege.saab bhi acha lagta hai
ab lets see how can naku help our dutta with job & mental well being ke liye doctor kya uska pravachan he kafi hai,ek bar doste toh ho jai😃
i 'm loving the new story 👏as always ur amazinggg hammiee .have a great weekend tc
Edited by Nakusha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

HI Hamlet

Loved the ud. Dutta got a job, Naku and Dutta met again this time in his house. looks like dutta had it bad while he was in jail that not him forget. I like how dutta took and eat the spoon of sweetened curd that was sweet.

Thanks as always can't wait for the next part. Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet fab ud😊story is going great ..thanxs
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet
very good ud..dutta went through trauma & its quite sad...he got a job at seema garage..maybe naku can find a better job for him😆...ud soon regards uvi
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hammie must say you and daya are so good with describing scenes that it makes a readers job a lot easier ..the whole scene comes before the eyes effortlessly thanks to you
coming up to the update ..surely liking the way its turning up ..dutta's past will not leave him so easily ..it will definitely haunt him and its ..felt really bad for him after knowing what he went through in the jail ..seriously such experiences leave an ever lasting impact on one's mind body n soul ..once again you brought out his emotions well
seema helping him with a job ..hope she stays in her limits with his oldie and 3 kids
so tasha meet again and as i said in my previous comment some things don't change and i like them that way for instance dutta losing his temper and breaking things ..then AS n nakku jelling well and the best thing nakku calling him SAHAB ..really i can't imagine her calling him anything else other than sahab
waiting to know more about his past

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