FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Warda.

Thankyou for the annots hammie 🤗

waiting for the update ...post it now 😆

Edited...Ohh my itni quick service...telepathy worked i guess 😆

will edit soon 😳

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my pleasure annotating readers comments ,its like double reading readers views..

Edited :

Hammie 🤗

loved the update ...it is so captivating that i just want all updates in one go the moment chapters end i want to know what happens next with dutta...will his job continue ..how will he survive... thanks for your enthusiasm warrie, but slow and steady..

the whole description of dutta's room sounds so different from the ltl dutta...his king size his cupboard here replaced by ordinary furniture...representing an ordinary man ...the LTL1 dutta's den how can any one forget that.. so many scenes btw him and naku.. and batasha conjure up..

im glad baaji is not giving up on him ...he is too stuborn towards his mother but baaji too time to time reminds him how much AS loves him and thats so true the woman has been shedding tears when he sees him in pain ...her eyes just lit up when ever he replies her though briefly.Baji as always is the good son, and also the man who can approach dutta.. and whats more is dutta listens to him..

His dream scared me so much ...reminded me that it do happens when one is in prison ...the kind of people they are dealing there with and the mark those memories left on onesmind ...its even hard to imagine when thinking about the jails of pak/ind... where its so easy to do anything...literally anything...moreover its a sad fact that here they are hardly given any counselling when they are released and while imprisoned ..so really their mental health which is vital is not given the due importance that it needs
... there might be few lucky ones like dutta who actually want to restart their lives but cant ignore that majority..surely it is responsibility of the prson services to ensure rehab.. of a previous criminal..
...it was really heart wrenching to read how dutta was feeling or how much he has suffered specially when he was too young... So was it difficult for AS...roops and baaji to see him in pain. ..baaji is like a God's gift in dutta's home and life...Supporting each and every member of the family be it dutta roops or AS ...wish somebody goes to him too to give him a shoulder too. I suspect Baji because he was minus a caring family of his own,probably is gifted with giving support..quite naturally.

Roops and dutta are going along so well ...love the bro sis bonding...and its great to see he is opening up in front of her too other than baaji...and roops being so responsible makes me inclined towards her even more at the time her family needed her support she was there...and great dutta is already in action ..searching for a job ...im so glad he is looking forward to restart his normal life...a positive change will defo change the bitterness in him...that guilt that he is not earning bread for the family will be less now.yes its important to rise in his own eyes too ,that he has put himself to good use.

AS ohhh once again feel bad for her when he took the spoon from her hand butt ermmm positive side is at least he waited for her to bring it.well the point was to spurn her affection, although he paid respect to the custom, he could have refused.. but he didn't.

This had to come in job agency..his past record ...no wonder the enthusiasm of the man was gone but what makes me feel proud is he didnt hesitate to tell the truth..."apradhi hoon par jhootha nahi hoon" ...not surprised its Dutta Sriram Patil...a person with a dark past yet better than many those who have a clear chracter certifcate...wonder if being a lier or cheating someone...hipocrisy such things were considered crime too ...im sure no one will be given a go ahead... but sadly we are just concerned what apparently appears to us ...there are few who actually find out what morals a person is holding...to declare that he was an ex- con was a lawful requirement.. one cannot lie or withhold such info..for it reflects on one's moral make up, as you pointed out.. nice paragraph you have brought up warrie..interesting views.

What was funny indeed both want to work together...im glad dutta learnt a skill in jail but baaji jab yeh kaam atta nahi tu woh kiya karega probably drool over his bhao lol. 😆..haan bhao ke haan mein haan milne hoti hai bajirao ne..😆

Seema ummh i dont know why she is not giving me good vibes...the moment she saw dutta i guess she was taking it she can trap him again ...the way he asked her husband to give them work its not that straight...itni achi nahi hai woh that she cares for those two to get work or her husband to get helping hands...we'll see if my guess was right but something is sure cooking in her mind...khair koi tension nahi whatever it is she will get those cold looks from dutta.😆oyeee phele he tuna use score out kar diya as a baddie.. waise she has done duji a favour ye maat bhol warrie.

Im so pleased at the work bob and nakusha are doing...how many lives they might had made...and the social experiments nakusha is carrying on they sound really interesting...and now she got the best project of her life..haha such a hard nut but im sure he is going to mellow down for her soon ...plzz bring it soon...no not the jhooti ...dutta and naku heart to heart talk like what you say.. hain? itne jaldi heart to heart.. warrie dhamak theek hai tera.. dono decent log hain koi teenagers nehi.. ju pyar fatafat ho jayea.

tasha's first encounter was memorable and second one even more than that lol aisy hi milte rahy tu aagay kiya hoga...ohhh she is calling her Saab... but for once we heard dutta from her mouth too...but saab sounds the best ...im so glad she is not calling him by his name...and precap it sounds the three are travelling together...oyeee itna suspence yeh tu bata dou where are they going😛 yeah wellshe had to formally address him by his name initially... but that was going o change in the next few seconds..😆.. they are not going for a date warrie..😡.. kya hai thujhe.. wait kar.. pata chal jaye ga..

Update soon plzzz...i dont post my feedbacks on time but im ever ready to get early updates ...hehe....🤣 have to say this line is phunny velly phunny.. made me laugh.. good your comments make every amused on this post..😆

lots of love🤗
thanks warrie, for this great comment, with much love ,as ever yours hammie..

Originally posted by: -bharti-

children of lesser gods here... wil be back hammieji

have you seen the film children of a lesser god.. great film..bart..

😛 yes the same primate..😃

Yes, after reading the 2nd UD feel i have moved on from PR...sigh! "chod aye hum woh galiyan, chod aye hum woh galiyan".i loveee that song from Maachis..

Out damned spot! hmm if it were so easy to erase the blotted past... purrfect title hammie 👍🏼 ..its from Macbeth..

The trauma of an exconvict is so realistically portrayed that one could feel it. Its terrible terrible to imagine what one undergoes as a prisoner. It beats my understanding of human psychology. They can get far worse than animals. What is it that makes humans resort to such cruel barbaric acts?..primitive throw back.. i guess one does crack up.. mentally.. psychotic behavior of being couped up in one place..Gosh! can these people ever be normal. their behavior refects their traumatized state of mind.. that's why its important that where ever possible involve the prisoners in activities that challenges their mind and body.. and support sessions they do need..

Both the perpetrators of such monsterous violent acts as well as the victims, how can they be reformed or see life the way we do. Even thou Dutta himself is an accused n pay a heavy price, he ultimately ends up a victim. Im still not clear as to why he ended up killing his father or what exactly happened at the scene of crime. Maybe he will one day open up... 🤔..all will be revealed in good time bart..ab tu bhi warrie ke theran jaldi mein hai..

Baji is treading a double edged sword so as not to antagonise dutta nor giving up on him. AS even thou should be cheerful that her son has returned is only feelin miserable at his obstinance and moreso for the miserable state he finds himself in. The family can only pray for some divine intervention in releiving him from his dark shackles 😔 true.. remember house gods played a key role in the lives of patil wasis.. Baji is one who along with his jolly side one who is a great diffuser of awkward situations..

But Baji is also holding the fort well and is bein extremely deft in soothing frayed nerves of the family. Liked the brother sis bonding and roops is not wasted here unlike LTL 🤗. It is this warmth in relations which heal wounds, the smallest things that matter most. But its the outside world thats gonna test dutta,s nerves and character.so glad you approve of Roops role in FF..

Dutta's nightmares are evidence of his mental state and the scars would take a long time to heal totally. Im not sure our society is sensitive enuf to the emotional needs of such people.. So this is where n much much more naku would fill in 😉

true bart, waise compare this to an soldier who has been a POW.. he will need support to from society, but his would be a willing acceptance by society.. hero hai.. defense of country,, but ex-cons.. treated as pariah.. crime stamped they are.. although both will need support to assimilate back into society.

Roops seems to be a sensitive lady and handling her bhao to the best of her abilities. Cute to see her attending to his needs and also felt dutta too warming up to her very naturally even after such a long gap. So no sandwiches here only poha 😃 He's not wasting much time and thats a positive sign as wel as it shows an impatience to get on with life which will not be so easy. Dutta in blue jeans n shirt umm what can i say seema wala LTL dutta nazar aya. His obstinate attitude towards AS continues but it just needs little understanding and time. Also the duo need to sit n talk i feel. heyyy well noticed bart.. no sandwiches.😆

As i feared it would be next to impossible for dutta to find jobs once people are aware of his criminal antecedants. But as expected he stuck to his reputation and refused to supress facts. liked his words, "mein apradhi hu par jhoota nahi" They reach seema's place. Wah! DUTTAA how casually seema calls his name as if she's in touch with them on a daily basis. But she seems to be very casual, moved on and put on too i mean weight lol.. Mota seth ke saat moti seema hi achi lagegi 😃 But atleast she has a heart to help him. Dutta displays no feelings for the shared past. I expected some sort of uneasiness from his side, but he displays none. He seems to be a man in a hurry to catch up with life as it were.well nothing unusal I think he too knows,wont be easy getting a job.. its was baji's presence of mind to go to Motto seth ka garage, mind you he knew that Dutta was a jail bird so a job was assured for him , well nearly..

Bob n Naku's conversation was interesting and it touches on her reasons for covering her face with the soot, but it doesnt convince me, infact confuses. Atleast she feels safe in a dark complexion but is it? Hmm she's ponderin at dutta's odd behaviour already.she reckons she will get less attention. if she is not so pretty.. but was still noticed by the undesirables on the basis of her gender.. Dutta actually didn't notice her beauty.. he in fact looked more closely upon her when she as dark..

What a bumpy meeting of the two.. lol. So he,s drawn to her sharp features n dark beauty, Not all is lost then😉 Some parts of his brains are functioning normally lol... iss mamle mein toh kuch zyada hi tez hai ediut! haaa hooo love it haan he didnt care ke lsrdki itne sonne kurri hai.. but eyes note ke use .. humm..But was it necessary for AS to reveal the nature n purpose of naku,s visit? that would only add insult. Now why should naku address him as saab, woh khud ek mujrim hai uparse unpad, jahil aadmi. Kaunsa amir khandaan ka lauta santaan hai jo isko saab bhulaya jaye. i was completely floored after a long time bart hilarious..😆😆 Naku givin into his haughty behaviour, but she is only bein tactful and i hope later as she gains in confidence she calls him by his name. oyeee chup kar you want ke use dutta buliya hummh.. roarrr! NO! me looking the other way..
Hammie you dont seem to be havin any hiccups as you claim with the new Ff storyline. Everthing is perfect to the Tee! The affection to the Ff is slowly n surely growin by the day and the shackles of PR is evaporating gradually. Thanks to your brilliant writing. Plzz continue and it seemed an eternity for the week to roll by. Haan, pata hain your reaction, but thats a readers perspective dear...😛 barttt you are sooo lovely.. just the way i like.. pampering.. shampering.. hayeee😃.. I have no problem in admitting it.. thank you so much for your great comment, with much love, as ever yours hammie.. and NO WOH SAAB HAI. ROARRR..

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Thanks for the new FF, Hammie 😊.
ivy... my mate.. this is like old times..so good to see you 😃😃

Its an interesting and intriguing read.
iam sooo pleased you are reading it.. how it turns out?.. me to waiting to see as well like yourself. its early days yet.
Cheers... thanks for reading and commenting, with much love,as ever yours hammie.. will pm you..

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet
hi jedy.. so good to see you mate
superb ud😊dutta got job ...met naku too ..story is heading in right direction.superb writing by you👏
me very pleased you are enjoying the new FF, thanks for your comment, with much love s ever yours hammie.