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FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

HI Daya

👍🏼Thank for the ud I loved it especially when Baaji and Dutta had word. Baaji telling him Nakku is his wife and she is not going no were he must face it and deal with it. Baaji tells Dutta to get to know her and at the see how it turns out what you got to lose. I can't wait to see what Dutta is going to do.

Thank once again hope the next ud is not long to wait take care now.

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

hiyaaa baji ummh dayaaa papsi...
YKB..
Chapter 3...
👏⭐️..brilliant mate just superb. Now the beauty of this FF is that it exemplifies their silence, that certainly has a voice,for it speaks. In this chapter Dutta's silence talks to the reader, and tells his tale,you have done a grand job in making it heard Daya, well done.
~a treat to get a peek into Dutta's mind filled with disinterest and indifference for Naku.
~lovely warming scene of Naku asleep on As's lap, ummh memory jogger.
~the complete scene in AS's bedroom is amusing to read, but you got the point across that he notices the mangalsutra ,although he's in denial about it's significance.
~ his battle with his desire to booze was quite funny as well,but for the fact that he realizes something has checked him,from actually doing so.
~the highlight has to be the well portrayed character of Baji,very well written indeed. The adda conversation between the two friends was all and all a bonding session between two males.It was noteworthy to hear Baji knock some sense into the old block. It may appear that Baji was getting no where ,but Dutta engages in the conversation regarding his wife is a step in the right direction ..which you have shown..
thanks Daya ,loved this piece of writing,please continue ..Iam waiting to learn more.
much love ,as ever yours xx hammie.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

update baaji knowking sense in duttA

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priya

@priyaraghav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

I love the way u write... Update was superbbb... N the way u conveyed the emotions of dutta n his way of thinking bout nakku was truly brilliant !!!!

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

its wonderful to see such a sensible and matured baaji who is not afraid to put his thoughts across ..in the last chapter also he handled nakku really well and here also he was making dutta understand with his logical reasoning ..i wish he was like this in the show too ..now coming to dutta it has always been difficult for him to accept or face the real situation ..he may realize them but it takes lot convincing to make him ACCEPT things and move on ..for instance here too he knows that she will not leave him but still expects the opposite ..instead of embracing his present he tries to shun it away ..once again very well written update

Edited by stranger2rose - 12 years ago

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awesome update

this time we get to see dutta's thoughts

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emilymine32

@emilymine32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

hi daya

love the ud

dutta carried naku in his arm for him he did it for AS comfort

baji has more sense than dutta

hope he gives a chance to naku

waiting for next

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sona89

@sona89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Hi daya

loved the UD...dutta had developed some feeling for naku ...its good 😊...baji -dutta cono gives hope ...Next ud soon

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

hi daya

as expected awesome ud ,dutta is spying on naku now😆he heard the fact but can't blame him if its heard for him to belive goodness in a girl with 3 quality he despise on

no doubt dutta is attracted to towards naku innocence which is reflected in her eye

baji did the best thing by making dutta realise he needs to give naku a chance & dutta agreed to prove him wrong ,the scene made me nostalgic

dutta heart will beat for naku again coz her conditional luv will win him over ,i 'm loving the fact dutta has no memory of koel naku & still naku will make a impact time will tell or daya will😆

thanxs to u creative guys we get to see different facets of ltl ,next part soon & definately long😆

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Hey daya

How are you?

Amazing SS dear

enjoy reading it

so memory loss concept is used

poor nakku like always:-p

Dutta struggling to figure out nakku's status in his life

He is trying to ignore nakku and don't want to accept the realtion but he is affected by her presence :-)

Baaji finally talk to him and give him some suggestions.

thanks for pm dear

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