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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi daya glad you are back ..very nice story ..plss UD soon😊



Hi mirage. Thank you for reading and commenting. All the encouragement and support really means a lot and makes me want to keep writing...so thank you...will UD in october as soon as I can ...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: priyaraghav

daya daya daya... Its so good to see u again... N its superb to read ur update again !!!!! N i m sorry for commenting so late, actually now days i m really busy in my college work n preparing for the Youth Festival. So m really sorry for commenting late but plzz update soon i'll be waiting... N thnx for writing again u dont know how happy I am... Luv ur work daya... N luv u for returning back !!



Hi Priya...its good to see you too 😃 Glad you liked the UD...and no apologies hun..it's all good am glad you came when you could...how was the festival btw? and lol glad I made you happy by just writing ... I am aware you enjoy reading my work 😳😃 anyway thank you again...take care ...phir milenge chalte chalte

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi daya happy to have you back ...loved the prologue ...pls UD soon 😊



Hi sona...happy to be back ! thank you ...
glad you liked the start.
Will UD in october...till then see ya...take care :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi daya great to see you again nice story plzz ud soon



Hi afzal ! thanks it's great to be back to writing...glad you liked the story...will UD in october...till then see ya around (hammie thread😆) ...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: dilse14

pls UD soon daya😊



Hi dilse...I know you are waiting...just a few more weeks time plz ...and i will come back and try to be regular with UDs...take care...thank you for all the support !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Warda.

daya me here ...chal maaf kar de for the delay 😳

First of all the writers note on top *cough cough* the inspiration behind the story and title...ummhh ghajni acts 😆
Hi Warda...you're forgiven...waise I am surprised you actually turned up haha you found my private jet i assume...brought you right to me 😆 LMAO haan haan ...what can I say ... she inspires me...you even know how and when I wrote this so i am not surprised with your chuckling haha ...
oki before i get the roars...loved the plot ...memory loss very interesting idea add to that lost till a point where he remembers he is a don and betrayed by a girl once...thank god im relived...cant image him doing any other work or becoming a good boy 😆
Oh haan even I was like thinking about where to take his memory to ...but i think it will be an interesting place to start where he is married to a woman who in his mind is everything he didn't want...
for naku patience...selfless love and firm belief in god...typical traits of her personality which make her ever so special and a perfect match for duttas entire opposite personality...
typical her...and it will be same faith, belief but our old Naku (bold, talkative) who will come forth in this ss...i do look forward to exploring all the characters my way...will be interesting...
So in an accident he lost his memory...onnhh ghajni ...i know its a serious issiue par the inspiration was making me chuckle throught 😉
I don't blame you we have too many inside jokes on that one...even I was chuckling...and am sure hammie tooo
For naku its going to be a real test of patience once again as difficult as it was the FR or even more than that for now she even have struggle to make him overcome this disbelief that he had married this girl...cant wait to read the next bit ohh kiya next update delayed ..nahhiii *filmi ishtyle* 😛
update soon yaar and i will next time come on time paka 😳
why you giving me a nehi in filmi ishtyle mate you're as busy as i am and ur focus is over hear...shakes head...focus on ur uni work missy! 😆

yaar thank you for reading and commenting...love you loads...take care...will meet in pms again soon ...haha me took break from studying...and annotated phew...now will sleep and wake up early to crack open the books again...oh the joys of learning the endocrine, nervous, and hepatic/GI system...doesn't those sound like lovely thoughts to sleep on and wake up to 😆😆 later mate!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanxs for reply & phir milenge jaldi ...😊.waiting for the ud & i can bet its going to be superb. tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -daya-



Rose ! :D Thank you for your kind compliments...glad you've liked the beginning, the twist, and the way its written...first person is new to me..i tried it before and found it so difficult so i thought need to get practice so went for it...this story though I feel works better in 1st...oh yeah i kinda wanted him to know Naku is his wife...but they will still have their issues as they are starting at zero...there is no basis for his relationship with her according to him...nothing...so makes it all the more fun if he knew that he's married but doesn't understand why he would take that step when his beliefs are so firm about betrayal and pretty faces...and relationships...


@ bold - u bet ..1st person is painstakingly difficult ..and it becomes all the more exhausting if you incorporate pov of both ..i remember my good old and hardworking days of Meri adhuri kahani ..all the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -daya-



Hi Uvi.
Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it. Aww I know waiting is a bummer i hate waiting for UDs too...but unfortunately at the moment i just have to prioritize meaning this had to be pushed off to side for a little bit...will be back soon ...october...and will give regular UDs then...till then take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

waiting for oct ...😊see you soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger2rose

@ bold - u bet ..1st person is painstakingly difficult ..and it becomes all the more exhausting if you incorporate pov of both ..i remember my good old and hardworking days of Meri adhuri kahani ..all the best


You know ...I wrote a short story while back, one that has nothing to do with existing characters...new story new characters, not written for IF lol ...but I did it in first person, that was when I realized how hard it was for me...I unconsciously keep resorting to third person its such a pain in the rear end😆 I have read it over 5 times so far and I still find mistakes where i switch POV...so i put it on hold as i got busy...but i think i may go back to that one soon and now that it's been like months since i've written it i will have to read word by word anyway...

this SS ...will be interesting to write..i will probably have to read it a million times first before i post...and i will probably have to alternate POVs also...so i can just see myself pulling out my hair 😆😆


thanks !! lol i think i'll need all the luck i can get with this

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