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Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya

Hi Nakusha!

awesome ud😊naku in duttas room poor soul is still wondering ,wht is the reason for his mehrbane 😆its hindi (favour)😆 she is thinking abt different possible combination to get to the core of the saabs brain ..love doesn't fit in her dictionary yet .
I'd say they're both a bit hazy with the situation...let's just see where it leads them both...I don't think they'll come around easily both will be inclined to counter their thoughts...

dutta & his dictate he met his match made in heaven in form of naku😃she could only be the one to defy him
haha yeah his perfect match... one that leaves him speechless and hopeless to do anything about it

nakus helper baji assistant chef did a good job at kitchen😆
Wait for the next UD... you'll get something even better 😉😆

dutta wants to have naku infront of him & she shouldn't loose the opportunity , make most of it & create a space which some where dutta has given not only in his room but heart too 😊loved the ud .next part soon 😊
Dutta's mind is on protecting but I'll work on it shifting reasons 😆 and as for Naku..she won't have the choice she can defy him only so much ...there is certain issues shes knows she won't win...we'll have to wait and see how this works out for them both...anyway thank you so much for reading and commenting..always appreciated...

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya
awesome update be it when Nakku shows baaji to cook, Dutta and Nakku arguments her not to leave his room and also who should have the bed. I can not wait to read what will happen to them when they find the person who is after them.
Thank again for the ud waiting for the next part. Hey Fassben...thanks for reading and commenting...even I am waiting to see how this mystery man plays his role in their lives...will be interesting...even I am not too sure how it will unfold but it'll be fun to figure that out...

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

lovely update ..it was great to see nakku arguing with him ..she didnt give into his demands and finally got the permission to cook for him..she is indeed getting bolder by replying back to him ..baaji helping her cook was cute and the last part was nice ..glad they'll be sharing the bed ..i am sure this will draw them closer ..very well written as always and i feel now you are getting comfortable with writing in first person.
Hi Rose! Naku knows to be stubborn just like him but she also knows to pick her fights...so you'll see her do it for little things..as for sharing the bed..i think sharing each other's presence alone can do the trick the bed was bonus 😆 and yeah I think I am getting the hang of this first person...but I think i prefer third still...anyway thank you for reading and commenting...much appreciated...

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hi daya, you too have written me off 😉, serves me right. But it was inevitable i find my way back, lot of catching up to do n you have raced away packing 4 UDs within 22 days, lol... Nevertheless enjoying the long updates.

Sorry Bharti, I didn't mean to write you off...lol just didn't want to bombard your pm inbox. I figured you'd get to it when you had time and see you did 😊 I'm impressed you did all 4 chapters at one time...they are long and I did happened to write them in shorter time span than usual😆 but you got to them...thank you for spending time to read and comment...i really appreciate it

Chapter 3

I find dutta has more to worry than just amnesia. His preoccupation with his biggest tormentor naku has reached alarming proportions by the day. To me he requires immediate counselling help before his situation worsens, lol... Why does he have to preempt every other,s thoughts n actions. I doubt anyone who is head over heels in love would be so preoccupied as dutta is of the one person who he thinks is his biggeest detractor.

He has every negative feeling one can think about naku, yet he doesnt blink even once when he finds her squatiing on the floor n helps her on to the bed. Ab gadhe ko kaun samjhayega what gadhapan is. After AS Baji gives him his piece of mind with a simple straightforward solution to his ordeals. True friends n well wisher does just that, not hesitate in showing the mirror

That's what happens when one is in denial plus and is stubborn and is straddling the line between two places he has to be lol...the man is confused...needs to straighten out things big time 😆

Chapter 4

So a stubborn dutta has an equally stubborn friend in baji. It was great to see him force first dutta to ponder then naku to be proactive. AS too giving a nod to baji's plans was sufficient for naku to go ahead but the poor girl is so petrified of the man retreats back into her shell. Just one simple act of serving him tea took so much of naku's energy lol..

But i understood more clearly what baji meant when he forced naku to carryon her wifely duties irrespective of his likes n dislikes. It was the best way to get him notice her atleast. Dutta in the kitchen created an opportunity where naku had to be rescued from the minor mishap and that would inevitably cut the ice n bring the two closer.

The bandaging scene reminded me of JMM1 of LTL where naku refuses to take his jacket when he rejects naku's offer of covering his wound. 👏

Baaji plays cupid very well...😆 glad you liked the progression...someone needs to get him thinking and on the right path...

Chapter 5

So we have some villians trying to harm our heroine and the hero is all set to rescue her, lol Dutta now is in a catch 22 situation. Bechari naku almost paid the price of bein the wife of a gangster. The guilt of dutta forces him to take naku to his room, what an ideea sirjee! Baji inwardly enjoying bhao's dilema and now i almost suspect baji behind the failed attack on naku to bring dutta to his knees, lol. My conspiracy theories are getting wilder by the minute.

Whatever naku is more concerned of his safety first and hurt that he is taking pains just because he is guilty of bein the reason for her bein the target. She also pokes a hole into his plan as to how AS wil be tackled in this drama without bein told the truth, smart kudi. So the stage set for the couple to get cosier.

Ah Baaji's not behind it though he will take advantage of the situation😆 Yup their meant to get cosier but will it happen? just think about who we're talking about here there is a million ways to throw a spanner in the middle 😆

Chapter 6

Finally the two having to converse with each other or rather argue a lot, better than not talking at all. Good to see naku show some resistance and he relenting. Suddenly dutta has found his voice and vocal about his opinions of her bein a difficult prisoner n so on. Baji paying the price in the kitchen was hilarious, baji the bawarchi now..😆

The two not able to zero in on the enemy is adding credence to my conspiracy theory😃. Naku too giving some valuable tips on the motive theory shows her in a different light. The two having to share a bed was the best outcome of the long day in the cell err room which can lead to many possibilities lol..

Yeah you know it's more awkward to remain silent in each others presence..plus he needs to interact to keep the safety part under control...i guess this is a situation where you get more than you bargain for😆 lets see how the deal with that part...

Fantastic work daya, a brilliant blending of plots the original with ur very own creative twists...

thank you Bharti for the lovely comments...for catching up also...and commenting...greatly appreciate...great to know you're enjoying the ss :)

Thank you

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi pappy..late but not never..
Hiya hammie...your dil and jigar here to reply to you 😃
YSB chapter 6
great read daya..it's quite a flow of various emotions poor Naku goes through.. well described.Her , sense of being unwanted, and only being overseen by him by due to obligatory duties like a certain guilt and responsibility...sad , pretty desolate..
that's what he wants to believe too..its sort of is obligation even in his mind though he doesn't give it that name his mind wants to believe that there is nothing more than that...
~ not letting her out of his room ,and her trying to give him logical reasons to leave were amusing to read. Her stiff resistance only provoking his reactions, were good bits to read.. tit for tat!
They make a good combo don't they...some one to keep him on his toes 😆
~ Baji, trying his hand at kitchen culinary tasks, is evidence enough of how at ease these two are with each other.
wait till you read the next UD....
~ sweet touch ,Daya of Dutta looking out for her eating as well.
the love is buried deep down in him mate..just he needs to acknowledge...he'll come around
~ Baji's wise cracks on the word wife were so typical, where the lovable rogue tries every strategy at hand to get these two people click as it were.
he is my star cupid 😆
~ Naku , raised intelligent issues regarding the motive behind the shot.. even Dutta was influenced to consider.. reasons.
yup she's the perfect wife no? haa ...she can be useful behind the scenes
~ the last bit about their nocturnal issues.. is funny.. it's like a power struggle between the two.. 😆
~ now the end ,I know it is a silent nehin! from her ,regarding sharing his bed with him.. but daya didn't quite get it... did she ?or did she not..?ummh sleep beside him..? how about you wait and see whether she did or not?
thank you papsi.. billy choo.. ummh baji.. yes liked it ..do carry on.. RN.. ummh Ranting Nerd!😆😆 Hummm Ranting Nerd? 🤓tuna kiya sooche.. papayaaa.. ediut! xx hammie.. exclusive and patent! you know exactly what I thought 😛

Chal thank you for reading and commenting...loved reading it...see you mate!

Originally posted by: meriyaar

Okay so i finally caught up 😳
And l effing love it !!! like wow the Tasha Scenes were Sooo damn amazing ! wooop wooop Dutta is finally getting some sense knocked into him . l Love Naku's Stubborness.
Daya you Rock!
Cant Wait for the next chapter.
t.c.
xoxo

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