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Hi daya, you too have written me off 😉, serves me right. But it was inevitable i find my way back, lot of catching up to do n you have raced away packing 4 UDs within 22 days, lol... Nevertheless enjoying the long updates.

Chapter 3

I find dutta has more to worry than just amnesia. His preoccupation with his biggest tormentor naku has reached alarming proportions by the day. To me he requires immediate counselling help before his situation worsens, lol... Why does he have to preempt every other,s thoughts n actions. I doubt anyone who is head over heels in love would be so preoccupied as dutta is of the one person who he thinks is his biggeest detractor.

He has every negative feeling one can think about naku, yet he doesnt blink even once when he finds her squatiing on the floor n helps her on to the bed. Ab gadhe ko kaun samjhayega what gadhapan is. After AS Baji gives him his piece of mind with a simple straightforward solution to his ordeals. True friends n well wisher does just that, not hesitate in showing the mirror

Chapter 4

So a stubborn dutta has an equally stubborn friend in baji. It was great to see him force first dutta to ponder then naku to be proactive. AS too giving a nod to baji's plans was sufficient for naku to go ahead but the poor girl is so petrified of the man retreats back into her shell. Just one simple act of serving him tea took so much of naku's energy lol..

But i understood more clearly what baji meant when he forced naku to carryon her wifely duties irrespective of his likes n dislikes. It was the best way to get him notice her atleast. Dutta in the kitchen created an opportunity where naku had to be rescued from the minor mishap and that would inevitably cut the ice n bring the two closer.

The bandaging scene reminded me of JMM1 of LTL where naku refuses to take his jacket when he rejects naku's offer of covering his wound. 👏

Chapter 5

So we have some villians trying to harm our heroine and the hero is all set to rescue her, lol Dutta now is in a catch 22 situation. Bechari naku almost paid the price of bein the wife of a gangster. The guilt of dutta forces him to take naku to his room, what an ideea sirjee! Baji inwardly enjoying bhao's dilema and now i almost suspect baji behind the failed attack on naku to bring dutta to his knees, lol. My conspiracy theories are getting wilder by the minute.

Whatever naku is more concerned of his safety first and hurt that he is taking pains just because he is guilty of bein the reason for her bein the target. She also pokes a hole into his plan as to how AS wil be tackled in this drama without bein told the truth, smart kudi. So the stage set for the couple to get cosier.

Chapter 6

Finally the two having to converse with each other or rather argue a lot, better than not talking at all. Good to see naku show some resistance and he relenting. Suddenly dutta has found his voice and vocal about his opinions of her bein a difficult prisoner n so on. Baji paying the price in the kitchen was hilarious, baji the bawarchi now..😆

The two not able to zero in on the enemy is adding credence to my conspiracy theory😃. Naku too giving some valuable tips on the motive theory shows her in a different light. The two having to share a bed was the best outcome of the long day in the cell err room which can lead to many possibilities lol..

Fantastic work daya, a brilliant blending of plots the original with ur very own creative twists...

Thank you

hi daya